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memphisgurl
huge my little pony fan, female
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I love it! Its sad, but I do love it:)
not 100% On whay really happened (its just me) but the story is still really emotional, is that really it? because i would really like to see more.
Oh my...
..... Uhhh... It's a pretty good STORY, but it doesn't exactly sound like AJ. More like one of the Alicorn sisters.
4576171 Why do you think that?
4576294 .... I guess the lack of Drawl.
The use of "Mother" and "Father" instead of "Momma" and "Poppa." "I am." instead of "I'm." That kind of stuff.
Meh. Maybe I'm just picky. I like where you went with the EVENTS, but this pony just sounds too erudite to be a cowgirl.
*looks at your username* though what the fuck would I know.
4576340 You make a good point. I didn't really think so much about the dialogue and speech. How is my username related to this??
4576530 Are you a girl.... from Memphis Tenesee?
And you've always gotta be careful of dialogue. That's one of the VERY few things I can say I'm good at.
4576561 I am a girl, but I don't live in Memphis. I live in Alpharetta, Georgia. Memphis is the name of my horse. As to the dialogue, I don't usually write stories with much dialogue, so its something I need to work on.
This surely is... original. No, seriously, whenever I read a story with a similar topic, it all sounds the same. But this fic was actually really enjoyable. And, ouch, got me kind of feelsy. Bravo!
(and you shall get a watch)
4579178 Thank you so much! I know what you mean about everything being practically the same on this topic. I kinda wrote this deliberately to be something different than all of the other fics about Applejack's childhood.