Rainbow Blitz and Butterscotch go out for a night of drinking. Butterscotch drinks a little too much which leads to him pushing his true feelings onto Blitz. Blitz hates to admit it, but he wouldn't mind doing the things that Scotch wants from h
In regards to your A/N, I completely agree. I always enjoy it so much more when the clop actually has some kind of emotional connection between the characters. That it's more than just for the sex, but actually for emotional bonding, the way those in love would share it. So, I approve! I'd rather it take a while to get to the good stuff if it's meant to have emotional substance.
This was a good chapter, it's definitely getting interesting. Especially with the angle in that Blitz actually knows how Butterscotch feels, but naturally can't quite do much about it. It's really sweet that he's still there for him and still his best friend, just not letting it affect their friendship.
Hmm... Blitz follows my exact thoughts on homosexuality. Despite the lack of clop, I think this was a great chapter. Clopfics these days (well, fics in general, really) seem to have a hard time taking time to form an emotional connection between characters. I applaud you for going the extra mile for your readers. The fic isn't even finished and it gets five yays out of five.
If you're going to write a fic in which your ponies say "fag" and "shit" you might as well let them say "asshole".
>wrapped his hooves around my waist Are they standing on their hindlegs? Because if they're on all fours, that would be nearly impossible. It would be easier to hug his neck.
>Just because I wasn’t a coltcuddler didn’t mean I hated it when people made fun of them or called them sick and wrong >didn't mean I hated it >I don't hate it when people made fun of them >coltcuddler >colt >people
I like the premise for the fic, and I like the direction it's going in, but man the dialogue for this story is hard to push through.
Could I have a link to the uncropped image?
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I know where it is.
just go to e621.com and search up the categories of "mlp gay crossgender fluttershy " at the same time
don't ask how I know this
Hmmm, just slowly, just nicely, we are getting there...
Proceed.
-Zeph
I have always liked a good back story. Nice Job mate. :D
Nice work so far
Poor Scotch. Don't worry Rainbow Blitz will make it all better... with his penis... up your plot.
Sounds good to me. Always nice to have some backstory before the actual fun
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First off, unless I have a reason to give it no. second I don't share pic with complete strangers. If you go to Derpibooru.com, you can find it there.
In regards to your A/N, I completely agree. I always enjoy it so much more when the clop actually has some kind of emotional connection between the characters. That it's more than just for the sex, but actually for emotional bonding, the way those in love would share it.
So, I approve! I'd rather it take a while to get to the good stuff if it's meant to have emotional substance.
This was a good chapter, it's definitely getting interesting. Especially with the angle in that Blitz actually knows how Butterscotch feels, but naturally can't quite do much about it. It's really sweet that he's still there for him and still his best friend, just not letting it affect their friendship.
Hmm... Blitz follows my exact thoughts on homosexuality.




The fic isn't even finished and it gets five yays out of five.
Despite the lack of clop, I think this was a great chapter. Clopfics these days (well, fics in general, really) seem to have a hard time taking time to form an emotional connection between characters. I applaud you for going the extra mile for your readers.
I Don't see being gay as a 'bad thing,' I'd never judge someone by that. EVER.
But it sure as HELL ain't for me.
~Wywint
~Ross
I love stories were someone's best friend is gay and they are not against homosexuality great story so far
If you're going to write a fic in which your ponies say "fag" and "shit" you might as well let them say "asshole".
>wrapped his hooves around my waist
Are they standing on their hindlegs? Because if they're on all fours, that would be nearly impossible. It would be easier to hug his neck.
>Just because I wasn’t a coltcuddler didn’t mean I hated it when people made fun of them or called them sick and wrong
>didn't mean I hated it
>I don't hate it when people made fun of them
>coltcuddler
>colt
>people
I like the premise for the fic, and I like the direction it's going in, but man the dialogue for this story is hard to push through.