Rainbow Blitz and Butterscotch go out for a night of drinking. Butterscotch drinks a little too much which leads to him pushing his true feelings onto Blitz. Blitz hates to admit it, but he wouldn't mind doing the things that Scotch wants from h
And still more to come? Yay! This is definitely getting interesting. The clop was very nicely done, very intense and emotional. You can just feel exactly what Blitz is going through, and clearly Butterscotch is enjoying himself. It's cute! And I do like that even though there's clear attraction toward colts on both their ends, it definitely takes more than just that. They want an emotional connection to who they're with, which is very understandable.
Can't wait for this to be finished, because then I'll be able to download it and put it on my e-reader to read whenever. I make it a point to never read stories 'till they're complete too. Except for the first chapter to see if I like it. And I like it very much.
4491972 I really enjoy reading your comments. You seem to have a perfect grasp of exactly what I'm going for; and by you understanding exactly what I'm going for, it tells me I'm doing a good job.
4498358 You're welcome! You certainly are doing a good job! It also comes with the fact that, like I said, it feels like the same characters who just happen to be male. Yes, there may be some titillation with the factor, but it's definitely earned. I like that you handled it with being more than just the gimmick.
I have read a lot of clop in my time, Gay, straight, bi, tentacle and solo. I really like ones with romance and this one is playing Grade A for the clop and the romance portion. I love cuteness.
Okay I'm going to say it.
Bow chicka wow wow.
I have no regrets!
Gave me a good laugh, great chapter.
-Missy
And still more to come? Yay! This is definitely getting interesting. The clop was very nicely done, very intense and emotional. You can just feel exactly what Blitz is going through, and clearly Butterscotch is enjoying himself. It's cute! And I do like that even though there's clear attraction toward colts on both their ends, it definitely takes more than just that. They want an emotional connection to who they're with, which is very understandable.
It's all so sweet! And hot, too.
One word: HOT!!!!
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Oh boy, OH BOY!
This, yeeeees, finally!
I love it! And Scotch is so... so... cuuuuute! x3
This chapter was well written, it built up to the bj scene terrificly, wonderful job!
But now... MORE!
-Zeph
That bit of smut was some grade A readings. I look forward to the next round.
Now that was some fine clop right there. I have high hopes for the main event.
While I'm enjoying this all, I'm also worried that Scotch is gonna be upset come morning....
lol I kinda read this for entertainment but, I'm pretty excited... *cough*
... for the next chapter
The dong has been activated.
Can't wait for this to be finished, because then I'll be able to download it and put it on my e-reader to read whenever. I make it a point to never read stories 'till they're complete too. Except for the first chapter to see if I like it. And I like it very much.
So please do continue
Getchu some Blitz!
4491972
I really enjoy reading your comments. You seem to have a perfect grasp of exactly what I'm going for; and by you understanding exactly what I'm going for, it tells me I'm doing a good job.
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Grade A, huh? Well, thank you!
4498358 You're welcome! You certainly are doing a good job! It also comes with the fact that, like I said, it feels like the same characters who just happen to be male. Yes, there may be some titillation with the factor, but it's definitely earned. I like that you handled it with being more than just the gimmick.
I have read a lot of clop in my time, Gay, straight, bi, tentacle and solo. I really like ones with romance and this one is playing Grade A for the clop and the romance portion. I love cuteness.
You're right, it is better with the build up. Scotch is gonna be sore in the morning.