Rainbow Blitz and Butterscotch go out for a night of drinking. Butterscotch drinks a little too much which leads to him pushing his true feelings onto Blitz. Blitz hates to admit it, but he wouldn't mind doing the things that Scotch wants from h
Okay, now. I'm loving the plot hole play you've done here (then again buttholes are my fetish, so I guess I just gravitate towards that stuff).
However, did you really need to put in the line about the scat fetish? That just felt like a cheap laugh instead of something that was crucial to the story (but it was a little more uncomfortable than funny).
The term "ponut" is really being overused here. It's supposed to be used for comedy, not arousal.
>The squeezing around my cock increased the pleasure by at least twenty percent…what? You know you love that catchphrase. I was bound to have it in here somewhere, in reality though, it was more than twenty percent, maybe thirty, forty? i.minus.com/iMBWrhCSwYVRw.gif
I really like the events that unfolded in this chapter, but dear lord the narration and diction are still messy.
4514539
Exactly! There are now currently three chapters that are titled in reference to a song
the wait was worth
4515089
Glad to hear it
10/10
Sexy hey talk to me i have a proposition
HOT! 10/10
4515625
A proposition, hmmm?
4516973 yes cxare to use my OC
4517060
For?
That was so hot, so adorable, and definitely worth the wait. I give this chapter, and the whole story, an 11... out of 5!
4517160 a fan fic if you want
4517237
I'm not sure when I would if I did. I don't write too many stories with ocs in the first place
4517249 well you can if you want
4517237
way to make things awkward
This fic continues to make me happy.
I wish I could vote up even more after each amazing-er chapter.
Okay, now. I'm loving the plot hole play you've done here (then again buttholes are my fetish, so I guess I just gravitate towards that stuff).
However, did you really need to put in the line about the scat fetish? That just felt like a cheap laugh instead of something that was crucial to the story (but it was a little more uncomfortable than funny).
The term "ponut" is really being overused here. It's supposed to be used for comedy, not arousal.
>The squeezing around my cock increased the pleasure by at least twenty percent…what? You know you love that catchphrase. I was bound to have it in here somewhere, in reality though, it was more than twenty percent, maybe thirty, forty?
i.minus.com/iMBWrhCSwYVRw.gif
I really like the events that unfolded in this chapter, but dear lord the narration and diction are still messy.