I must say this is some well written clop dear sir, a lot better then some of the others on this fine site. Oh and one more thing good choice in music, sabaton is one of my favorite bands, and wolf pack is one of the best.
....For some reason, all I can think about is Patrick shouting at Squidward to "Firmly grasp" the jellyfishing net. Two words overloaded all other thought. Cloptastic, btw.
You are somehow able to get the personality of every character into these chapters, while still naturally incorporating most of the memes surrounding each one. Even for a story without sexual scenes, that's pretty hard. I salute your skill. (Soldier reference, get it?)
I look forward to continuing to read your stories.
740602 ...and suddenly, I don't feel like reading the rest.
those 3 first lines... they are from the son Wolfpack on the album Primo victoria by Sabaton! EPIC album and i was listening to that song when i started reading
now for the constructive critcism: in the story the main charracter uses Rainbow's PC to play mucis, yet he finds his own playlists on them! how is that possible? did he use wimp, spotify or something like that?
what hapened to Rainbow? it sounds like she have changed, and is bitter about her past life. she goes mad every time he reminds her of something from the past! why? Rainbow drunk? either way she gave up the wonderbolts, or she don't care! that is not like her! she would not do anythng that reduce er flying skills!
Both of them were apparently very drunk, but as soon as they got in bed they both appear to be pretty sober to me...
You let Dash's sensitive clit out of your mouth and look up to her face. "That's two," you say gently to her. You give her pussy lips a tender kiss, your lips become soaked in her fluids again. Your dick has never been harder as you sit up and let Rainbow catch her breath.
"That's two," you say gently to her. You give her pussy lips a tender kiss, your lips become soaked in her fluids. Your dick has never been harder as you sit up and let Rainbow catch her breath.
You're right, that is two. You type a group of sentences twice in a row, starting at 'that's two'.
I must say this is some well written clop dear sir, a lot better then some of the others on this fine site. Oh and one more thing good choice in music, sabaton is one of my favorite bands, and wolf pack is one of the best.
....For some reason, all I can think about is Patrick shouting at Squidward to "Firmly grasp" the jellyfishing net. Two words overloaded all other thought. Cloptastic, btw.
I like how Jake is the star of this one, since he was the whiny roommate last time. xD
ummm are you satalking me lol that guys just like me and my names jake to XD
Heh, Jake.
Ten seconds flat.
You made me lol. such a thing is diffucult to do. You get a like.
i ed it great writing
One of the best clop stories I have ever read
Sincerely the Doctor
You are somehow able to get the personality of every character into these chapters, while still naturally incorporating most of the memes surrounding each one. Even for a story without sexual scenes, that's pretty hard. I salute your skill. (Soldier reference, get it?)
I look forward to continuing to read your stories.
740602
...and suddenly, I don't feel like reading the rest.
--Warlord
those 3 first lines...
they are from the son Wolfpack on the album Primo victoria by Sabaton! EPIC album
and i was listening to that song when i started reading
now for the constructive critcism:
in the story the main charracter uses Rainbow's PC to play mucis, yet he finds his own playlists on them! how is that possible? did he use wimp, spotify or something like that?
what hapened to Rainbow? it sounds like she have changed, and is bitter about her past life. she goes mad every time he reminds her of something from the past! why? Rainbow drunk? either way she gave up the wonderbolts, or she don't care! that is not like her! she would not do anythng that reduce er flying skills!
Both of them were apparently very drunk, but as soon as they got in bed they both appear to be pretty sober to me...
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DO IT NOW
This is not a trick
Dude, that was fucking great!
Wait.... what!?!?
You're right, that is two. You type a group of sentences twice in a row, starting at 'that's two'.