Poor frigid unloved Twilight! We all know who the author is unless there is a massive red herring... and was that cover meant to be like a certain other famous cover of bestselling trash?
Ummm... well... I can't say I really liked this one, I thought it was going to be A reference to the movie "twilight" and was highly surprised when I found out the main character Was a colt.
I think if I do continue reading this story, ill have to skip over the parts when twilight is reading
So... either the author is as obvious as it seems if you look at that name in the right way, or we're going to get a big surprise. Not sure which I'd prefer. Very good story though
...As much as I repeat that name, I can't get it. I know, I just know it has something behind it. Is it the pronounciation, or a play-on-words of a pony's name?! THE CURIOSITY KILLS ME.
Also, that cover is the best cover ever in the history of story covers.
EDIT: OH FUCK! I just realized what the name meant... Man. That's a pretty big twist.
I've just read the first two lines and "the Hoofington library system was just going to shred all these so-called ‘unwanted’ books. Shred them. Seriously!" I truly and honestly know how bad of an Idea it is to keep a book when the Library is willing to shred them. When I was 13 I asked my schools librarian if I could keep some of the books they were planning on destroying, they said yes. I later found myself reading a book where a man guts his own brother than used the intestines to kill his daughter.
Sorry, while I have no problems with M/M, I really don't like it all that much. (I really do hate my gender, nothing alluring about it...F/F on the other hand...Ahem) Point is, this is one story I won't be reading. Off to sleep now 4:00am
Hm, amusing. I'll have to continue this tomorrow. Like how Twilight struggles with reading the book. Reminds me of when I was first getting into clop-fiction. Lots of "I can't read this! But I want to! But WHY do I want to? Who cares, just read it! But what does it say about me!?" Ah, memories...
Protip for fictional homeowners: If you rent out rooms, or are giving the hero a place to stay for free, PREPARE FOR SEX in said rooms. You can not avoid it almost all of the time. You do not need to be careful all of the time, but you should start covering the beds in plastic if the protagonist and their LI show up. Even more so if everyone is inexplicably having sex much more often, and you hear moans no matter how far away from town you are. If that is the case, shut down your inn until the fanfic's over, unless you want to have to sterilize your beds after every. Single. VISIT. From every. Single. PERSON.
Oh my yes. Yes indeed.
Damn you wrote that quick!
*Marks for later* I'll be back :P
Although at first I was like what..
This is beautifully written.
Ill be watching you sir.
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Spike is the author, right?
It has to be, just HAS TO BE. That would be way to fucking
funny to pass up.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
im not sure if i should continue or not....................
I hate you for making me love this
This is just... I can't describe how good it is, the 'boys kissing boys' hypnotizing part.
Poor frigid unloved Twilight!
We all know who the author is unless there is a massive red herring... and was that cover meant to be like a certain other famous cover of bestselling trash?
I FUCKING LOVE YOU
Ummm... well... I can't say I really liked this one, I thought it was going to be
A reference to the movie "twilight" and was highly surprised when I found out the main character
Was a colt.
I think if I do continue reading this story, ill have to skip over the parts when twilight is reading
So... either the author is as obvious as it seems if you look at that name in the right way, or we're going to get a big surprise. Not sure which I'd prefer. Very good story though
Many lulz were had, well done.
Can't wait for chapter 2!
Thanks for all the comments guys! I hope to have chapter 2 up by tonight!
is good
Ms. E. I. Xirt.
...As much as I repeat that name, I can't get it. I know, I just know it has something behind it. Is it the pronounciation, or a play-on-words of a pony's name?!
THE CURIOSITY KILLS ME.
Also, that cover is the best cover ever in the history of story covers.
EDIT: OH FUCK!
I just realized what the name meant...
Man. That's a pretty big twist.
This story is twenty different types of win rolled up into a burrito and dunked in rainbows.
HMMMM. I WONDER WHO IT COULD BE.
This will be very, horribly good.
I've just read the first two lines and "the Hoofington library system was just going to shred all these so-called ‘unwanted’ books. Shred them. Seriously!"
I truly and honestly know how bad of an Idea it is to keep a book when the Library is willing to shred them. When I was 13 I asked my schools librarian if I could keep some of the books they were planning on destroying, they said yes. I later found myself reading a book where a man guts his own brother than used the intestines to kill his daughter.
Now back to the story.
"an image of two pale white hooves holding a bright red apple" You tricked me with the title, I'm impressed.
"Boys
Kissing
Boys" I read that in the voice of Alan Rickmen
Also 402123 has a great point if you still haven't planned the ending you might want to roll with this.
I was about to stop reading after the Twilight reference.....THANK GOD I DIDN'T/
Sorry, while I have no problems with M/M, I really don't like it all that much. (I really do hate my gender, nothing alluring about it...F/F on the other hand...Ahem) Point is, this is one story I won't be reading. Off to sleep now 4:00am
"Time to devour all these new worlds". I would have never pictured twi putting it that way. lol!
Also a little squeamish about the book she's reading. I keep cringing every time it starts getting sexual. -_-
BLARGH. copy pasted to notepad.
SWITCH THAT SHIT TO PLAIN ITALICS!
Hm, amusing. I'll have to continue this tomorrow.
Like how Twilight struggles with reading the book. Reminds me of when I was first getting into clop-fiction. Lots of "I can't read this! But I want to! But WHY do I want to? Who cares, just read it! But what does it say about me!?" Ah, memories...
709113
Glad to see that you gave into your sensual side! Tee-hee...
Protip for fictional homeowners: If you rent out rooms, or are giving the hero a place to stay for free, PREPARE FOR SEX in said rooms. You can not avoid it almost all of the time. You do not need to be careful all of the time, but you should start covering the beds in plastic if the protagonist and their LI show up. Even more so if everyone is inexplicably having sex much more often, and you hear moans no matter how far away from town you are. If that is the case, shut down your inn until the fanfic's over, unless you want to have to sterilize your beds after every. Single. VISIT. From every. Single. PERSON.
403926 What the- OH G-D I SEE IT NOW!
Ms. E. I.Xirt
I just dont get somepony plz explain