Um......I have know clue what this is about.

I did read a bit on "Your Human and You"

4627313 Eeeyup! It still a work a progress.

4627364 Ok. I think I seen too much of ponies vs Humans

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4627313 Play dead space 1, 2, or 3. it's a video game series. The dead space franchise is a horror; future, alien, necromorphic, third-person, shooter game. It's a fun game if you have time to play it.

I love it already OP. Fav and upvote.

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4628360 This story has peaked my interest.
and some how gave a a boner.

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4629076 Ummmm. . .okay

Wow.
All the characters need to do is just broadcast their thoughts to become infinitely more hate able.
Well done.

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ª•UAOÍTuUS**™)uUsUUPòÃUÊ׍U\ÜÕ3”À

Seriously needs an editor and spellcheck. Case and point:

Their death was inedible, as the children of Holy Mother Terra. Man, could not learn from their past mistake.

The grammar and syntax in that line alone makes my head hurt. This is your opening crawl by the way. Let alone the fact that apparently the death of humanity cannot be eaten. Inevitable. Not inedible.

I'm a huge fan of YHaU stories, but this is damn near unreadable with the errors. Sorry dude, but definitely check out one of the "Need an Editor or Prereader" groups. I couldn't even make it through the intro text before the errors got on my nerves.

That said, best of luck.

Edit: I didn't see anthro though. Not my bag. Best of luck.

I like your story and can't wait for more and was the sun tranyt just kill that poor soul

4630042 Well excuse me for not having an editor or for my computer spell checking every word that I write. I was trying to spell another word, but I have no idea how to spell it and Google didn't help.

4630076 Last bit of advice I'm going to give. Learn to accept constructive criticism or your writing will get ripped to shreds. Nothing I said was with malice, just experience behind it. If you learn from your errors, your writing will get better.

Best of luck.

4630188 I know, it just that this took a very long time to word it out and write. I know some of my grammar suck.

4629497 What?

4630188 Sorry if I acted like a prick to you.

4630264 It's alright dude.

4630317 My final reply for the night,
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4630259 I translated it from binary.

4630409 How and why? Also how can I do it?

4630409 Also this, 'ª•UAOÍTuUS' seems vaguely similar to the Unitologist from Dead Space.

4630425
Binary Translator
4630429
You can't hide it from me!

One hell of a way to open a story...

I understand the Dead Space story well enough, but that bit at the beginning has me very confused.
Can you please explain what happened?

Read through the intro with Ellie's voice.

I can understand this well. Interesting take on the Your Human and You verse.

Lets see where this goes!

ugh, "your human and you" stories always make me want to stab the princesses and mane six while they sleep . but i like that.

4630491 Then try this:

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4632158 Try using the TextMechanic. It's encrypted.

4631240 OMG! Me too!

4630730 This is before the Marker ever reaches Earth. That starts off the whole series we all know and love. What happened was that mankind develop a more faster and stronger form of travel than Shock Point Drive, but did not have enough of the material to recreate again. Nor did they know how to. What you read for the beginning is their version of the Holy Bible, you know just more modern. The book tell how the human race arrived to Equis and what of their fate. The ones and zeros mean that anything non-human can't read the book.

Does that help?

4632168 How?

4632215 Ask the TextMechanic. Look it up online. When you find it, check the Obfuscators for 'Simple Encryption.'

4632218 Kay.

Cool story.

4629076
Piqued.

Sorry, but people keep mixing up piqued and peaked damn near everywhere I look and it finally got to me.

Needs a little editing, but I like it.
Dead Space 3 was kinda pushy, but the DLC went over the line.

4632213 Okay it makes a little more sense now, however I read the story's of the deadspace games and It didn't say anything about a marker reaching earth.

4633254 Read some of the novels about Dead Space. The Marker crashed in the Gulf of Mexico or somewhere near Mexico. That how all that crazy shit of the Unitologist started.

4633927 so the earth was destroyed, humanity moved into space, then crashed on eqqus and now their slaves? How did Isaac and carver end up there?

4634023 No the Marker never destroyed Earth. If you ever read any of the book that you can physically buy. It state, in some book name I forgot, that the Marker crashes somewhere south in America. A small group of people found then built a religion about the Marker. Earth was never destroyed, but a small outbreak did occur in a research facility that held the Marker. That they were able to contain. The second outbreak occurs in the original Dead Space. Also Humanity never left earth to start anew, they left to find material to help support themselves. Never to start life on a new planet. That would occur much later in the series.

4634023 Also did you ever finish Dead Space 3?

I'd love to read it..... buuuuuut, Dead Space 3.
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The worst of them all.

4635112 Agree, but it's best to start where another left.

4635201
That's not necessarily true, you could start off at the end of Dead Space 1, or Dead Space 2. That's the thing about fan-fiction, you can do whatever you want. Make your own fan-cannon.

4635456 I know, but I felt that Dead Space 3 was under appreciated. I know it wasn't as good as the first two, but still its Dead Space. And I felt that it need some respect.

4635485 and plus the co-op was fun