Author's Note: I can not believe I got this many responses for my story. And that first was only the 'prologue'. Well, I came to a descision on what I was going to do to Johnny and the Ghost Rider. You'll find out pretty early in the story.
Johnny Blaze stood in the middle of a four-way intersection. The sky was deep red and the land around him was flat and lacking any significant features. Only gray rocks and rotting cacti.
He stumbled around at the roads' intersecting point, trying to figure out which one was the right choice to take. He tried to call for help or see if anyone was around the area.
No sound came from his mouth when he tried to speak.
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A familiar pegasus mare with a rainbow mane and tail, light blue coat, brilliant rose colored eyes, and a blue-red-yellow lightning bolt coming out of a white cloud flew over Ponyville fast enough to leave a rainbow trail in her wake.
It was none other than Rainbow Dash, the self-proclaimed 'fastest flier in all of Equestria'. Though, she has done pretty good at defending that title and proving it.
She was just out doing her usual practice and training so that she could better herself and gain a better chance at joining the Wonderbolts. She had wanted to bring Fluttershy so that she could coach her on cheering, but the butterfly-flanked pegasus had an animal emergency to tend to.
Rainbow Dash shivered slightly.
Seeing Fluttershy give a bear a back massage her way was a little too much for the rainbow-maned pegasus to handle.
She decided the open field nearby would maybe be a good place.
Besides, she couldn't risk having Scootaloo once again finding her and distracting her with the endless amount of admiration the pegasus filly can provide.
She really can't be distracted like that, for the chance of crashing and seriously hurting herself was all too real.
The field was coming up fast.
'Perfect.'
Slowing down her wing flapping, Dash got close enough to the ground to feel the tall grass touching her belly.
Being so close to the ground, close enough that she could reach out and touch it, it made her feel...made her feel...
"Alive."
Her grin grew so big that she felt like it would split her face.
Her keen pegasus eyesight caught the sight of something.
There was a figure, nearly completely hidden by the tall grass.
And she was coming in too fast to stop.
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Johnny Blaze stumbled as the world around him jerked harshly.
He tripped over his own feet and fell, landing on his side.
He tried to yell out in pain, but not even a whimper left his mouth.
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"...ow."
Rainbow Dash stumbled back onto her hooves and shook the dirt off of herself. She had struck the figure that was lying in the grass and wound up hitting the ground and rolling until she was stopped by the grass that got tangled up around her hooves.
After ripping the grass off of her, she slowly walked towards the figure while shaking out her wings.
She was not in a good mood. Especially since she was about to begin her routine with a Super Speed Strut that she didn't even get a chance to start!
"Hey! Hey buddy! Why don't you find a better place to sleep?! You just interrupted me from my training!"
The figure didn't answer back.
Rainbow Dash's anger started to seep away quickly. She was starting to worry that she may have actually hurt the figure.
"Hey...you okay there?"
Still no answer.
Dash quickly made her way to the prone figure.
What ever it was, it had a black cloak covering it's body and it was covered in grass.
Dash reached down to pull the cloak away.
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Johnny Blaze saw a gloved hand appear in his vision and he grabbed it without thinking. He was easily pulled to his feet by the figure who helped him.
He began to brush himself of when the gloved hand grabbed his shoulder and spun him around and then grabbed his jacket and pulled him up close.
Right into the face of a burning skull.
"WAKE UP!"
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The figure shot up and collided heads with Rainbow Dash, knocking her onto her rump.
The figure groaned and rubbed his aching forehead with his hooves to make the stars go away.
'Wait, hooves?'
He looked down at his solid light gray hooves.
"What the hell?"
He turned his hooves around to make sure he wasn't seeing things.
"What the HELL?!"
Dash shook her head and her eyes finally realigned themselves. Her head didn't hurt that much, since this would probably be the 15th time she hit her head against something this month.
She looked at the pony that was yelling.
"Uh, sorry. I thought you were sleeping or somethin'."
The pony turned his head and stared.
A pony...a light blue pony....a light blue pony with a rainbow mane...a light blue pony with a rainbow mane and wings...had just spoken to him.
Suprisingly, he didn't shout out or yell in terror. He just shrugged.
"Must be some strong painkillers they're giving me if I'm hallucinating a pegasus that looks like a walking Pride Parade mascot."
Rainbow Dash didn't know what a 'Pride Parade' was, but she decided not to dwell on it. She was too busy taking in the stallion that was now standing, well, attempting to stand anyway, in front of her.
He was a pegasus stallion with a light gray, almost white color coat with a black, shortened mane with a matching tail. He wore a slightly burnt and torn black leather jacket with holes on the back so his wings could stick through the back with a pair of black and worn hoof gloves hanging out of the right pocket.
Rainbow found it pretty odd that he had a large dirty and soot covered chain wrapped around his waist.
But what caught Dash's attention the most though, was his wings.
The limb itself was the same color as his coat, but the feathers were colored in a stripe pattern that traveled from the limb to the ends of his feathers. The wings had stripes of blue, orange, and red.
The only ponies Rainbow Dash has seen that color their wings like that are usually traveling stunt performers. Maybe this pegasus was a stuntpony?
'Maybe his cutie mark could tell me.'
Dash leaned a little to the left and looked at the cutie mark on the stallion's flank.
It showed a burning skull with a pair of some weirdly shaped pipes criss-crossing in an 'X' shape behind the skull and were shooting orange, red, and blue flames.
It was probably the weirdest cutie mark she has ever seen.
"Excuse me, isn't it customary for a lady to buy a man a drink before she starts staring at his ass?"
Dash jumped a little and whipped her head to look at the stallion giving her a good-natured grin.
She blushed a little and awkwardly coughed.
"Uh, sorry. I'm Rainbow Dash by the way. Um, who are you?"
He hesitated to tell this oddly colored pony his name, but then again, this is probably some sort of weird coma dream that he is in. And if it wasn't....well, he's seen some pretty weird stuff lately.
What did he have to lose?
"I'm Johnny Blaze."
Rainbow cocked an eyebrow.
"That's kind of an odd name."
Johnny narrowed his eyes, but still kept his grin.
"So is 'Rainbow Dash'."
Rainbow's eyes narrowed too.
"...Touche."
Johnny began to chuckle, but then he felt a sharp, stabbing pain in his side. His head felt like it was being beaten by a baseball bat.
"UURRGGHH!"
Dash ran up to and placed a hoof on his shoulder.
"Hey, are you okay?"
Johnny looked up and only saw a skeleton burning in a rainbow fire while surrounded by a burning forest.
He jumped back and shook his head, then looked back.
He saw Rainbow Dash giving him a worried look. Everything else was alright.
"Y-Yeah...I-I-I'm fine. S-Say, is t-there a clin-clinic nearby?"
Rainbow nodded.
"Yeah, there's one in Ponyville, which isn't too far away. I could take you there. Besides, I...kinda flew into you when you were sleeping. I was thinking that maybe you should have Nurse Redheart check you out."
Johnny nodded in agreement, albeit more shaky and cautious now. He was okay with being checked out by a nurse. As long as he could get his hands-uh hooves on some painkillers.
"Okay, lead the way."
Dash turned stretched out her wings, ready to fly.
"W-Wait..."
Dash turned to look at the stallion.
"...Can we just walk? I...don't think flying with a sore side and a splitting headache is such a good idea."
Rainbow folded her wings.
"I guess that makes sense. Come on, Ponyville is this way."
She began to trot with Johnny Blaze following her.
He sighed, glad that he was able to convince her to walk, since he didn't really know how to control his wings yet.
He quickly sped up so that he wouldn't lose her.
This was indeed a strange land. He knew that he had died in that motorcycle accident, because it felt like his spirit had left his body when he exhaled that last breath. He didn't know why he was now in a land where ponies are apparently colorful and can talk and definitely fly. A second chance maybe? Who knows?
All he knows is that he is in a new body, in a new land with new people. He might as well enjoy it.
Author's Note: Sooooo.....what do you guys think? Good? Bad? So-so? Let me know what you think. I'll probably come back to make some changes later.
BIG apology to those who didn't think that Johnny Blaze should've been turned into a pony, but Urdeth made a really good point. What's the point in having Johnny and the Ghost Rider be human when Equestrians haven't seen a human before? They'll think that all humans can do it. But a PONY turning into a flaming skeleton? They'll know that it isn't natural for that to happen.
See ya! And thanks for being supportive!
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This looks good so far... i see he has his chain with him. BUT WHAT SHALL HE RIDE?!?! OH NOEZ! ..... serriously though. Good job. You dont happen to have a pic of what he looks like do ya? Pony form I mean.
Serriously though. Blueblood. In story. Quick. Panic attack.
............ damn i should of seen the second movie...
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Sorry man, I don't have a picture of him in pony form. I can't draw. Maybe someone will hopefully make me a picture.
Since most ponies in Equestria are good, except maybe the high society snobs, you'll be surprised who I'll bring into the story.
Thanks for complementing on my story!
410834 Alright.... guess time! One of the ponies with one episode from Canterlot, Photo Finish, Blueblood, Nightmare Moon, Discord, or Trixie. Thats all i got.
Still interesting. I haven't spotted any mistakes or anything, but I'm not usually on the look out for those. Anyway, do continue with this, while it might not be the best story I've ever read, it's far from the worst, and it has a very interesting concept. I am very interested to see just where this goes.
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Sorry, I cannot deny or confirm your guesses. You're gonna have to wait for the chapters to come.
But like I said, you might be surprised who I might bring in and what will happen to Johnny when he's around them.
410988 Ok... but whats he gonna ride?! Big Mac? (no homo)
Good Job, but is better Ghost Stallion
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Now that I think, Johnny Blaze doesn´t hears like a odd name for a pony, like Trixie Lulamon or Lyra Heartstings, specially for the Blaze part.
Ps: By the way its true, it wouldn´t have any sense that a human with hells power apper in Equestria, but now i imagine a combination between Red Dead Redemption Undead Nightmare horse of apocalipse. You know War and Pestilence (if you played the game)
Very good. Hoping you continue and im looking very forward to this, so im tracking
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If you're looking for something to picture, try and imagine a smaller version of the western Ghost Rider's ride. Remember him? The fiery stallion?
And, wow.
I feel quite honored to be mentioned . Glad I could help.
Still though, nice to see how Johnny put two and two together instead of freaking out.
What else... Oh, right. I'll be honest, I haven't watched the second movie, so if possible, could you fill in blanks when characters/events of it are mentioned? That'd be great.
Great work here, really looking forward to the next chapter!
Youre right Urdeth does have a good point
Wont be as scary for us but it will be terrifying for the ponies when they see The Rider
So yeah keep it up man
I enjoyed chapter two very much. I've always been a fan of Ghost Rider, and other macabre things like that and I feel you have a good voice for it.
That said, the flow of the chapter, I feel, was interrupted by the Johnny waking up believing he was simply on pain meds and hallucinating, then describing how much pain he was in despite the meds (he believes he has), then going directly into how he remembers his last breath in life and how this is all completely real. A suggestion to fix it might be to simply delete the pain meds and halucination bit and just leaving the last breath he took, or transition it by saying something along the lines of, "must be halucinating on pain meds to see a rainbow winged horse, no wait I feel too much pain for that, now I remember I took my last breath after crashing *insert how this is some second chance or something* and continue like the story is"
*please don't hate me, just wanting to help *
411503 Yes, but every ghost rider rides somthing! .......... maybe we can get him a skateboard....
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What about his fiery wings? I guess they serve some purpose...
Then again, if a motorcycle fit for a pony appeared for Johnny, that'd be awesome as fuck.
412401 AWW HELL YEA! ............ or mabye... what if he got a train? a crazy train to be more specific.
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Has anyone thought about something a little more...alive.
What about a hellfire summoned dragon, or a manticore? A demon dragon sounds cool to me.
412431 ...... Im pretty sure suggesting a flaming skeletal dragon or manticore is the mark of a great fanfic author. That or madness. Oh well same thing.
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...I will love you forever (And ever) if you include Johnny fucking Blaze riding a goddamn molten dragon in this story.
412431 hmmm, ok i guess he is pony then, DEMON DRAGON WOULD BE AWSOME but my only question is were the heck is he gonna get a dragon, and spike is too small and too young for him to be a candidate.
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I said 'hellfire summoned dragon' earlier. Now, I haven't read the comics or anything, so I have to go on what the internet has on Johnny Blaze's/Ghost Rider's powers.
419101 Basically, anything that he rides turns into something to suit him, and i mean anything. I never heard of him having any summoning powers though.
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Well, if what I read is correct, the Ghost Rider could summon his signature hellcycle through his hellfire powers(throwing fireballs and using his chain weapon).
But really, it shouldn't matter, since everything he rides changes with him, like in the second movie(not giving spoilers). Like, even though Spike is a baby dragon, can you imagine what the rider could do if he used his hellfire powers on Spike?
419166 Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...... Probably turning him into a massive beast with flames for his spikes on his head and back, deep black claws that would scare even celestia, and a head with eyes glowing with the fires of justice and vengeance and teeth like polished ivory. oh and his hide would be like his scales.
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Exactly!
419218 Ok, I am expecting spike to be like a little side kick that can kill gods. but otherwise keep writing, you got da skills.
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Uh, well, I hate to spoil this, but Spike won't be a sidekick to The Rider. He's more like "What, he was the only thing there for me to change with me so that I could (Restricted)". He's like something that Blaze will use in a pinch situation. Besides, do you think Twilight or the other Mane 6 would like the idea of a hell-spawn demon using his hellish powers on a baby dragon?
Hope I'm not bothering you with these comments.
419305nah it's cool, but after seeing him do that i think they would be more than scared and angrie of ghostie.
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Yep, they'll be pretty scared of him after what will happen that'll reveal The Rider to them.
It's going to be GOOD!
Well, stay tuned in and all that jazz.
419342 I most certainly will.
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410834 if you want comedy.
blue blood vs ghost rider in badassery
lets see what happens
longer chapters and a little more time spent on the writing
of should be off. I am enjoying the story so far! I can't wait to see where this is going.
P.S. Is the Ghost Rider going to get some form of motorcycle for his stay in Equestria?
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"Blue Blood vs. Ghost Rider in badassery"
That would be a running contest. Blue Blood runs like he's being chased by a demon, while a "demon" (Ghost Rider) chases after him. If Blue Blood wins, he gets to live. If he loses, he does not get to live.
I like it has a good plot the only thing I'm curious about is what if Johny is in this world what villains would he face?
I wonder what johnny looks like in pony version
It was kinda weird to me that he stays so calm, but then I remembered Nicolas Cage. He probably dreams of it every night.
can i make a point if johnny was wearing the bike gloves when he died shouldn't he be wearing them as a pony and not having them in his pocket
and remember johnny has a scar on is right hand when he made the deal so as a pony it would be on the front right hoof
5640476 Dude a normal dream would be him in equestria fighting doom guy and Duke Nukem! A NORMAL DREAM! Think of what his over the top dreams would be!
And I’m guessing that “Pony Joe” isn’t an odd name either.