Author's note: You know, I think I might actually be the first one on this site to actually write a Ghost Rider/MLP crossover. Yay for milestones and breaking down barriers! This story takes place after the second Ghost Rider movie. I don't care if it got bad reviews, IT WAS STILL AN AWESOME MOVIE!
A lone man in a worn and slightly burnt leather jacket stumbled forward before finally collapsing in the middle of the desolate road.
Behind the man was the smoldering wreckage of twisted metal and shredded rubber that was once a BMW motorcycle.
The man began to crawl, not knowing where to go or how to get help. His face had a bloody gash going along his right cheek that was oozing blood.
His clothes were shredded and were stained with oil, soot, and blood.
He stopped as a jolt pain ran through his head.
'Well Johnny, it sure was SMART of you to go riding on the Transfăgărășan in Romania when you're currently suffering from alcohol withdrawl.' He thought bitterly to himself.
Slowly rolling onto his back, which may or may not have been broken, he laid there and stared into the flames the devoured the bike.
'Damn, and that was one of my favorites.'
He gave a dry chuckle that turned into a coughing fit, blood splattering into his leather glove covered hand as he held it against his mouth.
That ain't good. Better try to find some help.
Johnny Blaze tried to shift his legs, but was stopped when he felt a jolt of pain that made him hiss. Looking down, he saw that where there was a bloody patch on his jeans, there was something sticking out of his leg.
'Great, a broken femur. And it's sticking through.'
He laid back down.
'I should be in absolute agony right now. Why does the pain feel numbed? Am I in shock?'
Johnny couldn't figure anything out. He had just crashed on a motorcycle while going over 50 mph. He had a broken femur sticking out of his leg, possibly a broken back, a stronger possibilty of having internal bleeding, and he was losing blood at a faster rate.
He stared into the sky, his vision starting to blur.
"Well, I should've expected to die this way. Lying broken and bleeding out in the middle of a road with the burning wreckage of a bike nearby."
He closed his eyes.
He took a deep breath.
He exhaled.
He didn't draw another breath.
In a castle nestled beside a mountain, a pony gasped and sat straight up in her bed.
This pony had a horn on her head and graceful wings in her sides.
She was taller than most ponies, had a coat color of dark sapphire blue with a mane that waved from sitting up so fast. It was a mixture of dark blues with stars that made it look like the night sky on a clear night. A white crescent moon sitting on an inkly dark purple, near black background cutie mark adorned her flanks.
This pony was no other than the second alicorn and co-ruler of Equestria with her older sister, Princess Luna, the Goddes of the Night.
She brought a hoof up and wiped away the sweat that had formed on her brow.
'Such a strange dream.'
The sound of her bedroom door being open caught Luna's attention.
A white alicorn stood in the doorway, her magenta eyes showing worry as her mane of blues, greens, pinks, and purples billowed behind as though an unknown breeze was blowing. She had an orange stylized sun on her flank.
It was her older sister, the Goddess of the Sun, Princess Celestia.
"Is something wrong Luna?"
Luna shook her head.
"I'm fine 'Tia. Just a bad dream."
Celestia slowly walked over sister.
"It must have been quite a dream Lulu. You're still breathing heavily and you're still sweating."
Luna groaned at the pet name her sister usually calls her.
"Sis, you know I don't like that name. And really, I'm fine. Just a stupid nightmare"
Celestia smiled a little and stood by Luna's side.
"Do you want to talk about it?"
Luna sighed, but then gave a reluctant nod.
"I saw this...thing. A creature that stood on only two legs, like a primate."
Luna looked at Celestia, who nodded for her to continue and that she was listening.
"I think it was injured, because it was covered in blood. Near the creature was some sort of metal contraption. The contraption was on fire. It was struggling to move, but it couldn't."
Luna's eyes were starting to get teary.
"It looked so helpless. It looked so hurt, but no one was around to help it. It...It died...right in the middle of the path."
Celestia pulled Luna into a hug to calm her down.
"Do you know what this creature was, Luna?"
Luna shook her head against Celestia's shoulder.
"No...but it...he had a name."
Celestia let Luna pull back so that she could look into her eyes.
"And what was his name?"
Luna furrowed her brow as she struggled to remember what the creature called himself.
"J...John...ny....Blaze. Johnny Blaze."
Celestia smiled.
"A somewhat odd name...but a nice one. I wouldn't worry though, Luna. Like you said, it was just a bad dream. I wouldn't worry about it."
Luna nodded in agreement.
"But it was still a rather strange dream."
Celestia only smiled, which was broken when she gave a large yawn. Then Luna gave a large yawn.
"Well, I think it's best that we get back to sleep."
"Alright. Goodnight Celly."
"Goodnight Luna."
Celestia closed the door behind her as she left the room. Luna's room was once again shrouded in darkness, but a single ray of silver light cut through the dark.
Luna gave oone last yawn and laid down, allowing the comforting light of her moon to make her feel safe and lull her to sleep.
Author's Note: Well, what do you think? Should I continue the story? I hope I get responses for this chapter. I usually write based on people's reactions to the story. Let me know where I need to improve and I'll get back to the story.
As drew carrey once said:
MORE MORE MORE!
Edit: I think it would be more terrifying if he was a human, seeing how they've never seen humans or their skeletons, or flaming skeletons wearing leather jackets and jeans
I'm interested to see where this goes.
Oh, a crossover fic? Yeah, psh, whatever, I don't really-
Wait, it's about Ghost Rider?
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GIMMIE MORE I LOVE TEH GHOST RIDERZ
Man I was waiting for a ghost rider fic for so long
I would have writen it myself but yeah i suck at writing
You started out really strong with this one you should definetly continue this
Its well paced and a great prolouge
Though Im not so sure if he should be a pony its your fic so you can do whatever you want but id imagine him better as a human
Still im a bit worried that Ghost Rider might go soft in Equestria
He is an Anti Hero after all he kills the guilty the most painful way possible
But im wondering how innocent are Equestrias citizens and their rulers?
It's a good idea and i think that you should continue, but please for the sake that of all that is good in the world don;t make him into a pony, it's been done way too many times before, besides i have to agree with Jagun,: imagine celestias face when he walks up to her in rider form.
Oh my god... this could be awesome.
Need more now
Sincerely the doctor
Here is a great picture of Ghost Rider as a pony.
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PLEASE MAKE MOAR just the prolouge has earned you 5/5 moustaches NICE! btw, human form would be better
GHOST FUCKING RIDER IN MY PONIES?
MOTHER OF GO-
...Anyway, back from that few minutes of drooling. *Clear throat*
Not bad for a prologue. Was wondering if you had any plans on how long an actual chapter is going to be.
On the matter of ponifying... I really cannot say. Leaving him as a human is sure to scare the other ponies...
...But it doesn't really give a chance for Johnny to accept (or possibly, be accepted in) this new world.
...Plus, a flaming skeletal pony would probably be far, far scarier to the inhabitants of little ol' Equestria than some burning skeletal primate.
It could really lead to confusion too. It's possible that they'd assume that every human is capable of turning themselves into weapons of mass destr- Sorry, "Justice".
Anyway, great work so far. Keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter!
So he died as a human ... Continue
Yes, just...fucking yes.
Wow! I did NOT expect this much of a response in only an hour! I am thankful for all the comments you guys have given to the story.
Oh shit, Ghost Rider/Mlp crossover? you have broken the epic barrier! Please keep going!
I am intrerested in where this might lead. It is a fresh concept, and I haven't seen any Ghost Rider cross overs yet(surprisingly). Do continue.
Compare. Which is more terrifying?
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>>Jagun
If only I had a more decent or more realistic picture of a ponified Ghost Rider, then I would be able to compare them better.
Man, I log off for only an hour, then I come back and see even more notifications that are unread. I am DEFINITELY continuing this story.
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Everything this guy said. Especially the drool parts and the reaction.
In a paraphrase from Darth Vader, "The Potential is strong with this one".
you should you wonderful writer you
How about you have him as a pony while nit in his ghost rider form, and have him in his human form while being the spirit if vengeance? Honestly I can't see the ghost rider giving off the same fear as a pony version of himself. Furthermore, It could be the perfect disguise. If a human shiwed up and suddenly this flaming skull version shiws up, who do you think they'm turn to? Pony + ghost rider = dies not compute. Lastly, and this is the big thing, isn't the ghost RIDER suppose to RIDE something. I just can't see a pony driving a motorcycle or any vehicle with hoofs. Anyway great first chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
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...No. Don't compare a budget Special Effect CGI version of Ghost Rider with an amature-made pony version.
If you are going to compare it, compare it with the other ghost rider's ride, the fiery horse. Remember him?
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406705 Well, i have to agree with you there, demon horse you scary
Second movie suck!I finished...
405255
I'd say the broken image.
'Well Johnny, it sure was SMART of you to go riding on the Transfăgărășan in Romania when you're currently suffering from alcohol withdrawl.'
I'm Romanian. Yay nobody cares.
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i care...
3127884 I BELIEVE IN SANTA CHRIST!
3910531 Santa Christ, Santa Christ, we all love Santa Christ
the first ghost rider was rated 15 yet i watched it when i was 11 and i didn't find it scary atoll
i mean burnt eyes/souls, skin melting, people going blue,low and deep voice + roar. (were they meant to be scary)
but the bike, the shotgun, 2 riders, controlling fire
give it a 3/5 (i got board watching it the third time )
the second ghost rider is rated 12 and if i watched it at 11 i would be shitting bricks
improvements - the chain can disintegrate people/chop in half, the skull is burnt (and not white) and is smoking, better bike (sounds like a transformer) with smoke, uses different vehicles, better voice + screen/roar, eats souls (not burning them), better transformation, ride in the day (ending scene car chase)
downside - lost track of story, looks like a dog has film it, WERE IS THE SHOTGUN , how did the women get pregnant if the devil is in a human body
give it a 4.5/5