wow. I enjoyed this immensely

4227209 Thank you! This was an immense pleasure to write and I'm glad to finally have it up!

Holy Faust, we've been featured! Thank you everypony for your patronage, it means a lot to us!

Dude. That was amazing. One of the best Twilestia's I've ever read before.

You definitely deserve to be featured my friend. Good job and keep up the amazing work.

Listening to this really sent the entertainment value up.

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I am glad I read this.

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4228159 Just pressed the play button, I really see what you mean! This music just... fits!

And thank you so much! More fun things are on the way, though quality does take time.

And on a general note, HOLY LIKES AND FAVES BATMAN!!!

The style and quality of the writing in this is excellent. The only thing that I would criticize is the abruptness of the ending, the lack of real closure to the story. But aside from that, this was very well written and damned sexy!

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Wow, nice and short, short and sweet, etc. Lovable thing this story is.

~OreoKookie

I really, really enjoyed this story. This story quite literally had me blushing at the vivid images you kept creating and molding and evolving through out. The ending though caught me by so much surprise. Please tell me there'll be some closure or at least a continuation of their exploration of love.

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Greetings from the story's co-author!

So glad you enjoyed this little vignette, and especially that you are asking for more! Given how much we enjoyed writing this one I think it quite possible we will continue exploring the heady and delicate relationship between Celestia and Twilight. No promises, though - we have other stories in the works, too!

We are very grateful for the positive response - including being featured, good heavens! - this story has received. Thank you and all our readers for your support and interest!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

So what ever happened to the small cake that was on the way?

The ending was waaay too abrupt if you ask me (and the way Celestia said things there sounded a bit... dismissively to me), but it was cute overall.

I don't read much Twilestia. This one, though... This was good.

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Cheers mate!

~OreoKookie

This is Lovely One of my favorite Stories yet.
Keep it up my good friend.

Wow...just...wow. The way you described everything was beyond poetic, it was so beautiful and so artistic and you made this pairing seem so plausible. I love this story and I shall cherish it for quite some time.

Wonderfully done! Combines perfect characterizations with immeasurable hotness. Great stuff, instant thumbs up and gold star. Also bonus points for having the anciently wise Celestia still mange to be surprised by Twilight, which I always imagined was one of Twilight's ongoing life goals.

A wonderful story, but I have a few nitpicks:
Princess Celestia is Queen? Of course that's the trope, but there's still some title weirdness. Perhaps "Princess" is not a title, but her first name?

Rainbow Dash, the very Element of Loyalty, is "not the most committed of ponies"?

Two things I liked about your story: use of metaphors in the narrative, and consent.
Metaphors give the whole experience a very poetic feel, which gives more impact to the reader how important what they're reading is. I wish I could belt that out more often than not, I usually seem to be very straightforward in my descriptions.
And consent: nothing is more appealing than consent to me. It's something that's really murky in erotic works of art, both visual and literary, so it's nice to see it in plain sight sometimes. And it's really sweet too!
The beginning of the story is rather telly and exposition heavy (instead of being told in a paragraph or two that Celly and Twilight had a moment in the gardens, I would have much rather have watched that unfold myself, OR had the both of them talk about it amongst themselves, like "Princess I haven't seen you since we spent the evening in the garden!" "Yes, such a lovely evening; I can't tell you how much I've yearned to taste your lips again"). I ended up skipping a lot of the beginning to get to the coitus, but I'm getting the sense that the sex scene was the main drive for writing this story.

This is damn hot! I really love the characterization for both Twilight and Celestia. What I love the most however is the build-up and development of the relationship and there is an actual enjoy. Good job!

I must say, as a person who is much more into gore, torture and war and writes about it extensively, I found this story much more than enjoyable, I found it HOT! I have always found the idea of a Twilight/Celestia ship as interesting but damn, you wrote the perfect one! A like, a fave and a watch! Keep up the good work.

I think that element of loyalty would be the commited one. You picked the wrong pony for uncommited love. Rainbow dash is the loyal type that would have no sex until she finds her partner for life.

who knew Celestia could be so kinky?^^ I really enjoyed this one^^

Wow, that's some excellent writing skill there~
I enjoyed it!

This was unbelievably hot. The characterization for both characters was top notch and I'm very difficult to please with Celestia. Twilight felt like a young passionate lover while Celestia invoked thoughts of an old and experienced being and a lover with all the fire in the sun still burning with her desire.

This story was an inspiration on how to write a romance clopfic and it goes into my "quick to reach so I can re-read it" folder.

I am sorry, Holy Felonian Empire? Empire of felons?
That sounds weird. Did I miss some meaning, since English is technically my second language, or is it a typo of some sort. Perhaps felinian was meant instead?

Also " She’s… not the most committed of ponies.". We are talking about the Element of Loyalty Rainbow Dash here, no?
I truly apologize for nitpicking on this wonderful story, but that is just...wrong.

For me, this falls somewhere between adorable and hot.

Hotdorable?

Yeah, let's go with that!

I did not soil myself or my magic by killing for meat or for sport.

I'm going to let you in on a secret; horses are omnivores. They will kill small birds and small animals if they need the protien and are what is known as "Oppertunistic Predators", also known as scavengers. So I doubt Celestia would consider killing as a soiling act.

‘potentially untrustworthy’. Though that last has only been said once

Of course that's only been said once - how could the repeated heroine of Equestria, who has either directly or indirectly defeated Nightmare Moon (thus also bringing Princess Luna back), Discord (who was later reformed and proved essential in saving Equestria in his own right), Changeling Queen Chrysalis, King Sombra, Lord Tirek, Starlight Glimmer (who was reformed by Twilight herself, and also proved essential in saving Equestria), Sunset Shimmer (also reformed by Twilight), and soon Storm King's invasion force, be 'potentially untrustworthy'?

If Twilight were 'untrustworthy', I very highly doubt those same 'nobles' would be experiencing the lifestyles they do - they'd either be forced to work in a war economy, either forced to hide from the changeling invasion or already captured, had their magic drained by a power-mad centaur, or subjects of a much more iron-hooved ruler. Would you consider Princess Twilight Sparkle 'potentially untrustworthy' now?

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Wrong - while some horses have been known to attack small animals, they rarely, if ever, seek out meat to eat. This is because their digestive system is not set up to deal with flesh, but rather grass.
Horses, and thus ponies, are herbivores. People may give them meat - for example, Icelandic people sometimes give their equines salt fish, and regular meat can be 'hidden' in their feed as dietary supplements - but horses never go out of their way to hunt prey.