Thank GOD this was a dream (or a time travel real love kissing restoring bullcrap whatever). That actually explains everything. I like you, Typewriterpony, I really do, but for a while, I wanted to lovingly kick you in the neck. This was one of the most convoluted, character stupefying, typical retarded clop logic to the umpteenth degree fanfic I've read in a while, and it all being a nightmare not only redeems this, but it makes all the "Huh, what?" moments makes sense, because it doesn't, because it's a dream.
I guess I wanted to prove that a story doesn't have to be pointless or gory or violent to be (grim)dark or what have you.
I consider rape of any kind to be an act of violence, but I'm also sick of Dark stories being full of gore. I just wish more people would use the whole Norse/Greek mythos in their Dark stories. Sure, you made the antagonist into a villain sue, and pulled the mythos behind the whole event right out of your ass, but whatever.
I no longer want to kick you in the neck. A playful slap on the eye would do.
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Am I the only one who wanted this to have a bittersweet ending with Twilight kissing Spike, and then going back to being a fuckslave for eternity along with the others?
I honestly never been happier to see a Deus ex machina, I knew there was to much time paradoxes and weird unconscious rape to be real... Still awesome fic, would do a really bad ass hentai movie.
Did Twilight actually prevented Spike to turn into a monster? Did Spike heard what Twilight told her and succeded in not becoming that beast, except for the events we all know in the episode? Was all that a dream? "Truth shall set us free" but as far a I'm concern this was a happy ending, or the promise of a happy ending, and it's more than I could have expected after all the madness we've been through. A wonderfull story, filled with grreat imagination, clever ideas, and outstanding twists. Me quito el sombrero.
I don't care what the actual ending is. To keep my peace of mind I'm going to believe twilight simply dreamed all this up. Her having a rather long and paranoid dream from Spikes action in "secret of my excess". But nonetheless great grimdark fic going in I didn't see it coming and the time paradox were slightly confusing. Great job here!!
You troll you it was all a dream before episode ten. you are funny my man you are very funny
Thank GOD this was a dream (or a time travel real love kissing restoring bullcrap whatever). That actually explains everything. I like you, Typewriterpony, I really do, but for a while, I wanted to lovingly kick you in the neck. This was one of the most convoluted, character stupefying, typical retarded clop logic to the umpteenth degree fanfic I've read in a while, and it all being a nightmare not only redeems this, but it makes all the "Huh, what?" moments makes sense, because it doesn't, because it's a dream.
I consider rape of any kind to be an act of violence, but I'm also sick of Dark stories being full of gore. I just wish more people would use the whole Norse/Greek mythos in their Dark stories. Sure, you made the antagonist into a villain sue, and pulled the mythos behind the whole event right out of your ass, but whatever.
I no longer want to kick you in the neck. A playful slap on the eye would do.
Now that was funny.
Is that it? Did it become a dream at some stage or was that just some serious time fuckery? I am more lost than a kitten in a wool weavers.
I was actually hoping to see a scene of Spike and the Princessess. Slightly dissapointed that didn't happen.
i wanna try doing it, but in a more legal manner
my interpretation:
TIME PARADOX. Twilight and Spike mucked up the timeline so much that the whole thing collapsed.
Am I the only one who wanted this to have a bittersweet ending with Twilight kissing Spike, and then going back to being a fuckslave for eternity along with the others?
Lmao, you sir have earned chuck norris badge of assholeness!!!! I still love this and I can tell that you are a fan of inception.
I honestly never been happier to see a Deus ex machina, I knew there was to much time paradoxes and weird unconscious rape to be real...
Still awesome fic, would do a really bad ass hentai movie.
Wait, this was a dream during "Secret of My Excess"?
SON, I AM PROUD!
Wait, so im not getting the dildo? Thats a sick joke D: you had my hopes up.
Did Twilight actually prevented Spike to turn into a monster? Did Spike heard what Twilight told her and succeded in not becoming that beast, except for the events we all know in the episode? Was all that a dream?
"Truth shall set us free" but as far a I'm concern this was a happy ending, or the promise of a happy ending, and it's more than I could have expected after all the madness we've been through. A wonderfull story, filled with grreat imagination, clever ideas, and outstanding twists. Me quito el sombrero.
I don't care what the actual ending is. To keep my peace of mind I'm going to believe twilight simply dreamed all this up. Her having a rather long and paranoid dream from Spikes action in "secret of my excess". But nonetheless great grimdark fic going in I didn't see it coming and the time paradox were slightly confusing. Great job here!!
Wow...
This shit just blew my mind.
Really...
I'm into pinkie X spike now...
I'm into a little bit of violence during sex now (not in real life of course)...
Wow...just wow....
I need a watermelon...
896243 This. A million times this.
I watched the scene... and I was stunned after it played out. Twilight's panicked face is just... fuck, man. Even the fucking SFX corroborate to this!
Did I seriously just waste that much time reading something that was just a goddamn dream
Well...... that was managed exceptionally. I must say, although you may never read this, I was quite impressed.