710759 Thanks for noticing it AND commenting on it. As a treat, I'll reveal the fact that I wrote chap 4 with a particular scene from the South Park Imaginationland arc called "The Justice System & Cartman's Balls" in mind. The serious way the judge made her decision was just hilarious to me and I decided to have fun with, you know, the sort-of terrible things going on between Rarity and Spike in the chapter.
“I have faith you will succeed.” I burst laughing at that part. Like "Really? Who are you, Princess Zelda?" What I don't undestand about this story is why so mane people keeps complaining about how confusing it is. Ok it was in chapter 4 and 5, but after that, all the pices begun to fall in place very well. though I felt this chapter a bit pretentious, with all dak powers and stuff and Celestia making less sense than Twilight. But so far, it's been a great story. The detail of the narrative is awesome.
finally some death man i was worried there would be no death but as always this story always has me going the fuck but almost everything makes sense know or atleast that is unless are story teller throws another curve ball at us kikikikikikiki
And suddenly everything about this entire story makes sense.
(No, seriously.)
Oh, THERE we go.
Hmm and back to confusion well played.
I feel it's in vain but im hoping for a happy ending
i hope someone is dead
I DONT EVEN KNOW. I give up i just hope we get a happy ending.
I am confused as sin, yet at the same time I think I have an idea of what's going on at least...
I really don't know what to say about this.
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Thanks for noticing it AND commenting on it. As a treat, I'll reveal the fact that I wrote chap 4 with a particular scene from the South Park Imaginationland arc called "The Justice System & Cartman's Balls" in mind. The serious way the judge made her decision was just hilarious to me and I decided to have fun with, you know, the sort-of terrible things going on between Rarity and Spike in the chapter.
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I'm afraid I just have to bring this up, shouldn't twilight already know the time travel spell from "It's About Time" episode?
its not spike, its DITTO!
“I have faith you will succeed.” I burst laughing at that part. Like "Really? Who are you, Princess Zelda?"
What I don't undestand about this story is why so mane people keeps complaining about how confusing it is. Ok it was in chapter 4 and 5, but after that, all the pices begun to fall in place very well. though I felt this chapter a bit pretentious, with all dak powers and stuff and Celestia making less sense than Twilight.
But so far, it's been a great story. The detail of the narrative is awesome.
The part where Spike says "Ohhhhhh, Twiiiiiiliiiiiight! Celessssstiaaaaaa! Come out, come out and plaaaaaaaaay!”
That's line is very similar to that from the movie "Warriors" (1979).
http://m.youtube.com/#/watch?v=aRM2YcGpmxg&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DaRM2YcGpmxg
finally some death man i was worried there would be no death but as always this story always has me going the fuck but almost everything makes sense know or atleast that is unless are story teller throws another curve ball at us kikikikikikiki