spike is even more of a sadist than i thought and i love him for it just wish you could make to endings, a good ending since i can see this will end pretty well and a bad ending, just for fun
This is highly entertaining. You are well on your goal to becoming internet popular.
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I also just realized this story has less likes than mine. How? You actually write good and I'm excited about what's happening next. You have this awesome time splicing thing going on reminiscent of primer. Mine is literally just an experiment with random fetishes that I threw together on a whim. I don't understand at all. You should have way more likes. Also your chapters are well organized and you have a better story name. Everybody that actually likes this story should thumb it up, but I think they are embarrassed. It leaves no record to thumb something up! I think...
I humbly request anybody that's reading this comment and likes this story to thumb it up. No one else has to know you did that except you...
746914 Simple really it has a very dark sadistic nature. It's interesting, and there are parts that are really hot but its quite extreme. It's audience is fairly limited because of that.
I'm going to make this as simple as possible I need more of this. The psychological aspect of this story, to me at least, far outweighs the sexual aspect that I believe has scared of so many readers. I think the story is amazing and once again I need to know how this ends, please update soon.
So im on chapter nine, and if you haven't already noticed by now...I love the story... Basically twilight is to blame for rarity changing spike sadly. If she hadn't done the memory spell on Rarity and just on Pinky pie, than rarity wouldn't have the mixed feelings she did about spike raping her.I think I may have missed when pinky made the promise to twilight not to say anything about it when twilight went back in time.
HOOO MY GOOOO! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kdhhQhqi_AE It all makes sense now. Ho my God this is so deliciously cruel and ironic. Like Master Oogway said: One often finds his fate in the road he takes to avoid it. Seriously man, this must be one of the best Plot Twists I've ever seen so far in a fanfic, and I can't help but feel dirty for enyoying it so much
well well well kikikikiki i love evil spike but he made the biggest rookie bad guy mistake in the book he underestimated hes target and like so many others he will not like the outcome or will he fate seems to be saying no matter what she doeas someones going to get raped hard kikikiki fates a bitch....... and damn i cant got annove of her cause shes just like karma lets your hopes rise just to crush them and its so intoxicating no matter how much it hurts i always look forward to her even though i know it will only end in pain call me a fool or crazy or whatever it matters the little bit of good fortune she brings is worth the pain she brings kikikiki
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Oooh im so excited to find out what happens :0 this is one of my favorite fics so far
spike is even more of a sadist than i thought and i love him for it
just wish you could make to endings, a good ending since i can see this will end pretty well and a bad ending, just for fun
This is highly entertaining. You are well on your goal to becoming internet popular.
Edit:
I also just realized this story has less likes than mine. How? You actually write good and I'm excited about what's happening next. You have this awesome time splicing thing going on reminiscent of primer. Mine is literally just an experiment with random fetishes that I threw together on a whim. I don't understand at all. You should have way more likes. Also your chapters are well organized and you have a better story name. Everybody that actually likes this story should thumb it up, but I think they are embarrassed. It leaves no record to thumb something up! I think...
I humbly request anybody that's reading this comment and likes this story to thumb it up. No one else has to know you did that except you...
746914 Simple really it has a very dark sadistic nature. It's interesting, and there are parts that are really hot but its quite extreme. It's audience is fairly limited because of that.
This will only cause a paradox like before, so I'm not gonna get my hopes up. I feel that the ending will be tragic.
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You're on chap 5? Hoo boy!
I'm going to make this as simple as possible I need more of this. The psychological aspect of this story, to me at least, far outweighs the sexual aspect that I believe has scared of so many readers. I think the story is amazing and once again I need to know how this ends, please update soon.
So im on chapter nine, and if you haven't already noticed by now...I love the story... Basically twilight is to blame for rarity changing spike sadly. If she hadn't done the memory spell on Rarity and just on Pinky pie, than rarity wouldn't have the mixed feelings she did about spike raping her.I think I may have missed when pinky made the promise to twilight not to say anything about it when twilight went back in time.
HOOO MY GOOOO! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kdhhQhqi_AE
It all makes sense now. Ho my God this is so deliciously cruel and ironic. Like Master Oogway said: One often finds his fate in the road he takes to avoid it. Seriously man, this must be one of the best Plot Twists I've ever seen so far in a fanfic, and I can't help but feel dirty for enyoying it so much
well well well kikikikiki i love evil spike but he made the biggest rookie bad guy mistake in the book he underestimated hes target and like so many others he will not like the outcome or will he fate seems to be saying no matter what she doeas someones going to get raped hard kikikiki
fates a bitch....... and damn i cant got annove of her cause shes just like karma lets your hopes rise just to crush them and its so intoxicating no matter how much it hurts i always look forward to her even though i know it will only end in pain
call me a fool or crazy or whatever it matters the little bit of good fortune she brings is worth the pain she brings
kikikiki