4183400 I know. I'm crazy. Shit only gets crazier. I put the DARK and MATURE tag on this one for a reason. If you don't like fatality of various characters, you're gonna have a bad time. Sorry. That's how pure evil works. And, that's the theme I'm going for, here.
Just as a future warning, if this enters into sexual territory (explicit or innuendo) just remember to place the sex tag on it. Not accusing you of making this a sex story, just making sure you're aware that you should do that.
Nice story, by the way. Not my cup of tea, but, it is nice.
4184132 As true as that may be, you have to realize that Pinkie Pie is also being influenced. At first, she played along because she most likely interpreted the gem as a joke in the alley. But, if you read carefully, I also noted a glint in her eye after Rainbow first consumed the gem. That led her to deciding to go after Berry Punch first. It's not as explicit, but Pinkie's will is being twisted too.
4185593 In hindsight, I see what you mean. I just felt guilty about leaving some of the people that have noticed and liked my first story hanging. And, I really wanted to address why. I should've made a blog post instead. I am still an amateur at this stuff. So, I just didn't think about that.
4185614 Good to know that you're not just blatantly liking the story.
I honestly am very surprised, myself, that this got popular enough to be seen on the front page.
To be honest, I wrote this for the fetishes and just wrote the story in general as an example of what kind of stuff I look for in a fetish fic. When the thoughts came to my mind, I just spit-balled them. It's just fast, craziness with just enough of the fetish fuel to keep one invested. At least, that's what I had hoped to accomplish.
dear jesus what the fuck
4183400 I know. I'm crazy. Shit only gets crazier. I put the DARK and MATURE tag on this one for a reason. If you don't like fatality of various characters, you're gonna have a bad time. Sorry. That's how pure evil works. And, that's the theme I'm going for, here.
Weird,cool.unique
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Just as a future warning, if this enters into sexual territory (explicit or innuendo) just remember to place the sex tag on it. Not accusing you of making this a sex story, just making sure you're aware that you should do that.
Nice story, by the way. Not my cup of tea, but, it is nice.
4183541 Ah. Thanks for reminding me. There is a little bit of sexual tension here and there. I'll add the tag.
Mah nigga
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It's not the deaths. Characters dying can serve a narrative just fine.
It's not Rainbow not caring about her actions. That's her being corrupted by the gem.
It's Pinkie going, "Oh, Dashie is murdering innocent ponies LOL SOUNDS LIKE FUN LET'S GO FIND EHR MORE VICTIMS!!"
If you didn't have that, you wouldn't even need the warning about characters being different.
4184132 As true as that may be, you have to realize that Pinkie Pie is also being influenced. At first, she played along because she most likely interpreted the gem as a joke in the alley. But, if you read carefully, I also noted a glint in her eye after Rainbow first consumed the gem. That led her to deciding to go after Berry Punch first. It's not as explicit, but Pinkie's will is being twisted too.
4184132 I actually address this in the next chapter.
4185593 In hindsight, I see what you mean. I just felt guilty about leaving some of the people that have noticed and liked my first story hanging. And, I really wanted to address why. I should've made a blog post instead. I am still an amateur at this stuff. So, I just didn't think about that.
4185614 Good to know that you're not just blatantly liking the story.
I honestly am very surprised, myself, that this got popular enough to be seen on the front page.
To be honest, I wrote this for the fetishes and just wrote the story in general as an example of what kind of stuff I look for in a fetish fic. When the thoughts came to my mind, I just spit-balled them. It's just fast, craziness with just enough of the fetish fuel to keep one invested. At least, that's what I had hoped to accomplish.
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Oh, have I been there...
Do I smell Soul Sacrifice?
...Ya know the bleedin harpy boss.
>Previously stated that she would eat ONLY ponies that others wouldn't miss.
>>Proceed to eat Derpy
-Yeeeeeeah, no. A terribly bad decision for this story. -_-