You've been captured by an unknown pair of ponies. When you awake, you find your freedom fairly limited. But what happens when your dirty little secret becomes not so secret?
What is this about? I already liked and favourited this story, so what the hell do you want from me? What did I do to deserve this? I really don't know what I should do anymore.
No, not at all. I mean, you opened up with Shining X You (male) X Cadance. Which is fine, but, it kind of deviated to Luna (futa) x You. If you do add more chapters, just be mindful that it should provide some more gay stuff. Throw Soarin or something into the mix, R63 Fluttershy or something. Y'know.
I mean, nothing against this story, I like it, but if it's going to be in a group for gays, it should be mostly about gay stuff.
Luna was added cause I needed a way to explain why/how Shiny knew about about your sexual escapades. LUNALUNALUNA can see dreams, and you tend to dream about your favorite sexeh times, so she's seen how sexeh those can get. Anyways, the rest of it tells itself and stuff.
If I come back to this story, it will likely be with more gay elements with a couple gangbangs. Second chapter was mostly just tying up loose ends.
My sleep-addled brain is still a little fuzzy, which may explain the big, dumb grin I had while reading this. I swear, every time I read something by you I slip a little further towards a point where futa honestly gets me going.
Short but oh-so very sweet! I agree with Shadowflash to some degree but then stallions are to me what futa-mares are to you.
What is this about? I already liked and favourited this story, so what the hell do you want from me? What did I do to deserve this?
I really don't know what I should do anymore.
4171674
Cum for your princess. Luna demands it. Then share this fic with everyone.
please do more gay clop... thankyou
4171970
Why?
4172008
Well, this story IS in the Coltcuddlers group.
4172409
Is there a problem with that? Everypony loves colt on colt on futa action~
EDIT: I'm tired and can't think atm.
4172417
No, not at all. I mean, you opened up with Shining X You (male) X Cadance. Which is fine, but, it kind of deviated to Luna (futa) x You. If you do add more chapters, just be mindful that it should provide some more gay stuff. Throw Soarin or something into the mix, R63 Fluttershy or something. Y'know.
I mean, nothing against this story, I like it, but if it's going to be in a group for gays, it should be mostly about gay stuff.
4172422
4171970
Luna was added cause I needed a way to explain why/how Shiny knew about about your sexual escapades. LUNALUNALUNA can see dreams, and you tend to dream about your favorite sexeh times, so she's seen how sexeh those can get. Anyways, the rest of it tells itself and stuff.
If I come back to this story, it will likely be with more gay elements with a couple gangbangs. Second chapter was mostly just tying up loose ends.
My sleep-addled brain is still a little fuzzy, which may explain the big, dumb grin I had while reading this. I swear, every time I read something by you I slip a little further towards a point where futa honestly gets me going.
Short but oh-so very sweet! I agree with Shadowflash to some degree but then stallions are to me what futa-mares are to you.
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Moar plz
Very nice work, that ending was cute
4173191
Thank you kindly~
All of my yes.
All of it.
I take it that this story is a bit gay?
4174660
i concur! (looks down) dammit now my chairs all wet
4181651 lol
mmm yes this does nicely....
this is very good so far
But will that be enough gayness?
4227629
Motherfucker you have no idea how gay this next chapter will be. It's pretty fucking gay, in all the best of ways~
4227635
You think the gayness is your ally?
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4247201
>Implying I would get flagged
For what exactly? This breaks no rules.
EDIT: oooooh I get the joke now. hurr.
Really good! I really hope there's another chapter! I like the little filly-colts like this!
4255005
Yeah there's a final chapter in the works.
Could be 20 % more gay
4284344
No.
100% gayer.
But seriously, don't use an overused joke.
4310383
I should send you le preview.
4309332
Thanks :3
Uhh, how come this is in the Updated list with no update? DON'T TEASE ME SO!
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http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/326069/disregard-the-wizard-behind-the-curtain
4413672 I love you and your work. Keep it up!