A Collection of Writing Experiments

by matcha cheesecake

5-7-5

Summary:
a collection of haiku about the Elements of Harmony

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Harmony

hearts touch o'er distance
glorious colors light the world
magic of friendship

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Twilight Sparkle

Taurus' Pleiades
you shine brightest with others
student most faithful

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Pinkie Pie

cupcakes and sweet hearts
overflowing with joy, you
rise above the blues

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Applejack

a rope unwhittled
binds strong-- true integrity
‘til the very end

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Rainbow Dash

supersonic flight
to where’er you go, I go
unwavering so

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Rarity

diamonds hidden
deep in our hearts, polished bright
a giving spirit

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Fluttershy

most accepting heart
but the butterflies belie
a steely resolve

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Elements of

devotion, virtue
charity, forgiveness true
joy-- harmony’s roots

Comments

[Bluegrass Brooke]

Saw this on the Struggling Authors Forum. The stories weren't up my alley genre wise, but the way they were told was excellent, especially Pinkie's. I'd say the point of view used for Fluttershy's detracted from the story a little. Probably would have been better first person. Good job none the less

[matcha cheesecake]

4289431 Thank you very much! And I will think about the issue of POV in Fluttershy's piece. I might indeed switch to first person if it seems to work better.

[matcha cheesecake]

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Wow. Thank you so much for these! They're really appropriate for each piece.
Yay for new awesome writing music!

[rocklobster]

Those haikus were good. I always like haikus.

[JumpingShinyFrogs]

Not going to review this, unfortunately. Poetry was never my strong suit. I will, however say, that besides maybe the last one, all the haikus were good, and fit with the characters they were describing. I particularly like Fluttershy's one.

[The Princess Rarity]

I, personally, suck at poetry, and I don't read it too often, but this was very nice.