"Hey, Snow! Breakfast is ready! You up, yet?" called Daddy. I was then woken up, and found myself bundled up in my bed.
And Dazed was in it, too.
I got scared, and jumped back. However, that sent me flying off the bed and on the floor. I yelled, "Ow!" I tried to get up, but a sharp pain in my right wing went against it. Dazed immediately woke up and saw me there. He shot up and jumped off the bed to land next to me. He struggled as he lifted me and put me on his back. He galloped down the stairs and came to my Mommy. He yelled out, "Snow is huwt! She fell off the bed!" Mommy looked to Daddy and Daddy galloped over after turning off the stove. He looked at my damaged wing and said, "Ooh...I know your pain, Cloudy. I'm gonna go call the hospital." With that said, he grabbed the phone with his hooves and used his wings to dial the hospital. He put the phone to his ear and said, "Hello? It's my daughter, she broke her wing while waking up...Who? It's Snow, you genius! You don't remember me? Just...get here as soon as possible, she's in a lot of pain."
Later...
"I um...got you some flowews." Said Dazed as he held them out for me. I smiled and gratefully took them. As I put them on the nightstand on the right side of the bed, I gave a small blush which went away as I turned back to face him. He smiled and looked at me. He then said, "So, I also got youw homewowk fow you, but Miss Cheewilee said you don't have to do it until tomowwow since you wewen't thewe today." I nodded and said, "Thank you, Dazed." He put his hoof in the air and dismissively waved it at me. "No pwobwem, Snow. Weally." I decided to shift myself so I was on my left side while I looked at him. I noticed him staring right back at me for a bit, then he shook his head and said in a awkward voice, "Well, um...see you tomowwow, Snow." As he left, I realized something;
I...I think I liked him...
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww x3
4316901 I say thee
4316910 xp
4316910 Guess what, buttercup? You forgot to let me edit. AGAIN. So thewe awe ewews.
4316926 Where...?
4316931 EVERYWHERE.
4316934 Tell me. If not, at least show me.
4316938
"You up yet, hun?"
I smiled as I gratefully took them.
So, umm... I also got yew homewewk few yew, but... umm... Miss Cheewiwee said dat yew don't have to do it untiw tomowwow, since yew awen't dere today...
Well, umm... see yew tomowwow, Snow.
As he left, I realized something...
I think I... like like him...
And, last but not least,
Day Three: The Realization of Puppy-Love
4316979 It was a semi-colon in front of the word three...not a comma.
4316979 The rest was intentional.
4316979 And I didn't even know you were online.
4316992 I think you read it wrong...
4316998 Then you should send me the chapter the day before you post it, duh.
4317002 I just finished it today! I'm constantly busy, okay!?! The stress is killing me! UGH!!! THAT'S IT!!! THIS STORY IS ON HIATUS, OKAY!?! THERE!!! *Leaves.*
4317009 Dude, chill. I am most likely more stressed than you are, so shuddup and listen. Make time for it, and only access it at that time. Send me your chapter the day before you post it, so I can edit. Also, buy a stress ball.
4317016 ...The story is already on hiatus...
4317019 I meant when it's not, Ian.
4317062 BLARBLVMFDKVNJFVLNMVDFLNVSVLFVLFDKNSHSVFBVKBDNVFDBVFSVIURENVBUHFVNFJDVHFDSKJDSNVFDKJLVHFDBVSSFDLNKJ!!!
(Translation; You broke me).
4317065 Good.
4317077 CVBFDSVJFHDOBSVNLFDVBSNFVLKFNVFSDJL!!!
(No, it's not!)
4317080 That's what you think. Who said sanity is needed?
4317113 VFBSVFDHBVFDNLCFBVFNCFDHBVCFDHJ!!!
(The person responsible for the updates of chapters on stories!)
4317118 You are right, yet so wrong...
4317120 . . .BGHSC. . .
(. . .Buck this. . .)
4317123 Good boy.
4317128 CBFDFSVKBFKCFDJ!!!
(NO!!! I AM NOT YOUR PET, TCN!!!)
4317132 Who said you were?
4317133 . . .VNFLKVNFG. . .
(. . .Shut up, please. . .)
4317138 And why would I do that, Monsieur?
4317141 Snow: Because he's dealt with enough at the moment. Just leave him alone, please.
4317145 *sigh* Fine. You know, if he needs to vent, I am always there. Tell him that for me, wouldya Cloudy?
4317149 CDBCNFKSVBSVFBCLFDCNFD CLJHCHJFFVHJDBSVFKCFHJVNVHV FJHVCHBFJVBFHV!!!
(Translation; not available).
4317153 Just gimme a mail, buddy. I am always here. *internet bro-hug*
Such cuteness
KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Hold up... Hiatus? Why? This such a good fic, and a lot of people would rather you work on this than the assassin story, much more than vice versa.
4319479 It's not because of the Assassin story. It's because I'm stuck, dealing with a lot of stress, and planning for when the readings on YouTube come back.
4319483 Wait, there are readings of this on YouTube? ... May there be a link?
4319487 No, there aren't. I said for when I bring the readings back on YouTube, meaning I'll be reading other stories again.
4319493 oh. Kk!
Awww so adorable
4319493 You should read the strange switcharooey.
It's a special story. For special people.
(Written by a special person too, NUDGE NUDGE WINK WINK)
Eh... I can see a few potential criticisms at a first glance. Not everything can be fixed, but I'd be happy to go over them with you privately if you're interested.
Ignore the dislikes, it's just people hating on it because Snow Cloud's an Alicorn
4419434 I know that, now. They'll regret it in the end, though. Snow's not an overpowered little snob. She's an adorable filly trying to fit in.
4487863
4487894 Thanks.