A Daring Do/Spike fic, Thu'ums, a Daring DoXSpike shipping, a great sex scene between the two, Spike joining DD on a life of adventure and coming into his own? You sir have a loyal fan out of me.
I am loving this Story and this is a epic pairing. Time goes on I can see Spike becoming more of a badass as he gets closer to Darling. I know he is going to end up taking her in some ruin somewhere and she will love it lol. This will be like Indiana Jones and Tomb Raider hooking up... Just. Plain. Epic
Started off good. Possible raped scene with Celestia's personal sex monster, fight scene was good, if not a little rushed. You really started to make simple grammar errors around that part. The clop was good, rushed but good. Even for Spike's first time you could have made it longer, and you skipped the part where they landed, and explain how, Daring Do, was in a position to see, Spike's raging boner.
And, Spike being the reincarnation of, Alduin, is a nice touch. All in all, I give this chapter a 8/10! Looking forward to more of Spike; Doing the Do! Yeah, I just did that!
Spike x Daring Do FTW!!
A Daring Do/Spike fic, Thu'ums, a Daring DoXSpike shipping, a great sex scene between the two, Spike joining DD on a life of adventure and coming into his own? You sir have a loyal fan out of me.
spike and daring do? YES!!
Look up Thu'um translator, or Dovah translator, you can find Thu'um's there.
Yes!!!! More please!! Love. This. So. Much.
I am loving this Story and this is a epic pairing. Time goes on I can see Spike becoming more of a badass as he gets closer to Darling. I know he is going to end up taking her in some ruin somewhere and she will love it lol. This will be like Indiana Jones and Tomb Raider hooking up... Just. Plain. Epic
that last part came almost completely out of nowhere, but it was a good read none the less
Fuck yeah, DaringSpike~
Started off good. Possible raped scene with Celestia's personal sex monster, fight scene was good, if not a little rushed. You really started to make simple grammar errors around that part. The clop was good, rushed but good. Even for Spike's first time you could have made it longer, and you skipped the part where they landed, and explain how, Daring Do, was in a position to see, Spike's raging boner.
And, Spike being the reincarnation of, Alduin, is a nice touch.
All in all, I give this chapter a 8/10!
Looking forward to more of Spike; Doing the Do! Yeah, I just did that!
Daring DO
Well, if anything that was a hell of a first chapter. A few grammar mistakes, but still good.
A little fast paced mate, but overall a jolly good show.
looks like you’re missing an e after the n there.