Pretty good chapter for the most part, though there are some mistakes here and there.

Spike and Rarity froze, they didn't have a plan. They were to simply find the dragons and signal the soldiers if they couldn't convince them to leave. Spike knew from experience that Garble wouldn't negotiate with ponies.

"It came from over there."

One of the dragons made his way to the rock they were hiding behind. With barely any visible strain he heaved the boulder from the ground. He tossed it to the side leaving them exposed.

Spike and Rarity looked at the dragons. There was a large dragon with two grey horns. Next, there was a skinnier purple dragon with yellow hair. Finally there was Garble.

I'm pretty sure that it should be Daring, not Rarity.

love this story please continue

idaina Jones good bye

It's back!!!!!!!!

That's just one word of the Dragon Aspect? This World Eater is strong.
Soul Gems are a big moral issue isn't it? Personally I wouldn't use them, but they're such an essential part of the game that you can't go without them. It's a lot easier when you tell yourself it's just a game.

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Thank you...unfortunately, it doesn't seem as though the author listened...