Thaddeus is a normal 18 year old, still living in his parents house, who was at the wrong place at the wrong time, although it didn't necessarily turn out poorly for him.
Rather enjoyed the longer chapter, and would encourage you to do more of these, but I think it takes too long to get them out. So I think shorter, more frequent chapters would be better, but but hey that's just me.
4798030 It wouldn't have taken that long, I just had a lot of things going on. My mom got married 2 weeks ago, so there was no writing for that week. And it's summer, and while I enjoy writing, I also enjoy things like swimming, so I've been doing a lot of other things. If I sat down for a day, in an air conditioned room, I could pump out 2 of these a week. But yeah. No AC in the house, so I'm often outside swimming.
Haha. I seriously really love how you just straight up pulled a reference to Fable, Bioshock, Halo, and Spyro the Dragon. Love those games. I know there were a few more in there probably but I just had to point it out there. Good chapter by the way.
4858587 That's 3 points for you. But where's the Bioshock reference? I have no recollection of putting one in, so it might have been an accident. If you can point it out, I'll give you an extra three points, totaling at six.
Rather enjoyed the longer chapter, and would encourage you to do more of these, but I think it takes too long to get them out. So I think shorter, more frequent chapters would be better, but but hey that's just me.
4796628
i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/000/063/Picture_2_c.jpg
Other than that, remember to join the 'Humans on Royalty' group so you can add it to the folder.
4798030 It wouldn't have taken that long, I just had a lot of things going on. My mom got married 2 weeks ago, so there was no writing for that week. And it's summer, and while I enjoy writing, I also enjoy things like swimming, so I've been doing a lot of other things. If I sat down for a day, in an air conditioned room, I could pump out 2 of these a week. But yeah. No AC in the house, so I'm often outside swimming.
4798291 Already did.
I'm loving this story so far. So keep up the good work!(and long chapters)
4798568 Thank ya kindly, pardner.
THIS IS AWESOME MOREEEEEEE
SPOILER ALERT!!!
cadence is crysilis in case you didnt know
your writing is awesome i havent spotted any really bad grammar i hope to see more from you
I'm confused.
Ch 2 starts with Cel saying her greatest student just became a princess, but this one is before Shing armour and Cadance's wedding.
Care to explain?
4799207 Whoops. Most of this was written late at night, so continuity errors are bound to happen. Thanks for pointing it out.
4799207 Fixed!
4798612 Cel, nostalgia
4801157 Nice!
you get three ditsy doos
4801476 Do I now? Thank ya kindly, pardner.
4801479 your welcome.
How is everyone liking the story?
4816300 Liking the story so far wondering if Thaddeus is gonna go full yolo mode on Chrysalis tho Anyways! Awesome story, waiting for the next update
4816849 SHHHHHHHHHHHHH, THEY'LL HEAR YOU!
4816889 They can't listen if they're dead
4817272 Dead men tell no tales, nor no lies.
4817336 nor eat cupcakes
4817430 Nor fuck bitches, get money.
4817433 You, my kind sir, are full of wisdom. Here, have a stache
4817441 They can't listen to Nirvana either.
What do you guys think of Sigma? And the powers? Too overpowered? Under-powered? Voice your concerns and thoughts, guys.
4817678 Faster healing maybe?
4820558 He has faster healing. I'm confused now.
4820616 I mean, faster than it already is But that may be too op, idk
4820769 I figured 1/4 of the normal time was good. But remember, like any skills, they can be honed.
4820910 Conversation via comments op lol. But if he can train them, awesome :3. Btwbtw I forgot, can he scry? o 3o
PS: Luna Best Pony
Haha. I seriously really love how you just straight up pulled a reference to Fable, Bioshock, Halo, and Spyro the Dragon. Love those games. I know there were a few more in there probably but I just had to point it out there. Good chapter by the way.
4858587 That's 3 points for you. But where's the Bioshock reference? I have no recollection of putting one in, so it might have been an accident. If you can point it out, I'll give you an extra three points, totaling at six.
I think there are some missing sentences here.