Thaddeus is a normal 18 year old, still living in his parents house, who was at the wrong place at the wrong time, although it didn't necessarily turn out poorly for him.
While I don't know why you hate this chapter, I do know that you should NEVER rush it. I know I'm a regular at asking about updates, but I don't pay attention to WHICH fic it is, only the dates.
5187639 I couldn't stand looking at the chapter anymore. It was either it got published, or I went to the hospital for bleeding from my face from smashing my face off my desk. Repeatedly.
Yeah, I'm stoping here. Its just too rushed. And why isn't he, I don't know, reacting to the fact he's only on a different planet, away tom his family, and talking ponies. It's not like a big deal or anything. And then the ponies, I.E the princesses, got over the fact he's "alien" very very easily. And Only their two days, and already shipping him with celestia? Sorry but I'm done. My advice, pace it out a lot more, and have the characters act like their respective species.
5519290 Yeah, lately I just haven't been satisfied with anything I write. Everything, not saying the whole story isn't, but everything feels rushed and forced. I dunno. I had a chapter done, but the last half dozen or so paragraphs got sloppy and rushed, and anything I do to change it ends up making it worse. That paired with the upcoming exams and the recent break-up is just pure annoyance. Sadly, I'm more stressed about continuing my story than worrying about my exams.
Take your time. I was just curious wether or not you were actually going to continue this story. Real life comes first, noisy people that keep complaining about updates later ;). Quality above quantity as I always say.
5523752 I feel like I owe you guys this though, and it hurts that I can't give it to you. Might make another story for clop, because that seems to be the huge block here.
5951714 I did stop working on it. I just started working on it again this week. I was going through some tough times and I was struggling with writing, so I stopped. I'm back now though, for a while at least.
Um .... Ok that was fast
*gives Imortal Fox a hug*
We still love you.
Good news: The chapter was better than you made it out to be.
Bad news: ....... I got nuthin'
5186130 Reasons why I hate this chapter.
5186232 Thanks.
5186243 I hate this chapter with every fibre of my being.
5186262
*gives you another hug*
I hope you feel better soon...
5186303 Just a side note, I do not want to die because of this chapter. I just hate it. And I hate myself for writing it. But I don't want to die.
5186315
*gives you yet another hug anyway*
not bad a little fast but it cool
5186397 Shhh. Don't give it any praise. Let it die.
While I don't know why you hate this chapter, I do know that you should NEVER rush it.
I know I'm a regular at asking about updates, but I don't pay attention to WHICH fic it is, only the dates.
5187639 I couldn't stand looking at the chapter anymore. It was either it got published, or I went to the hospital for bleeding from my face from smashing my face off my desk. Repeatedly.
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5189187 ?
5191135
the story is great so far, cant wait for the next chapter
5425821 She's actually pink.
Yeah, I'm stoping here. Its just too rushed. And why isn't he, I don't know, reacting to the fact he's only on a different planet, away tom his family, and talking ponies. It's not like a big deal or anything. And then the ponies, I.E the princesses, got over the fact he's "alien" very very easily. And Only their two days, and already shipping him with celestia? Sorry but I'm done. My advice, pace it out a lot more, and have the characters act like their respective species.
Soooooooo... Continuing this story?
I have to agree that this chapter feels a bit rushed compaired to the others, but none the less i cant wait for more
5516219 Noted. Thank you for your advice.
5519290 Yeah, lately I just haven't been satisfied with anything I write. Everything, not saying the whole story isn't, but everything feels rushed and forced. I dunno. I had a chapter done, but the last half dozen or so paragraphs got sloppy and rushed, and anything I do to change it ends up making it worse. That paired with the upcoming exams and the recent break-up is just pure annoyance. Sadly, I'm more stressed about continuing my story than worrying about my exams.
5523731
Take your time. I was just curious wether or not you were actually going to continue this story. Real life comes first, noisy people that keep complaining about updates later ;).
Quality above quantity as I always say.
5523752 I feel like I owe you guys this though, and it hurts that I can't give it to you. Might make another story for clop, because that seems to be the huge block here.
5523761 Take your time, quality is better than quantity.
chapter? PLEASE!!!!
5915614 Soon. It's not going to be great, and chances are I'm going to edit it in the future, but it'll be soon.
5947932 I can proof read if you want! Anyways ok nice to know your still working on it!
5951714 I did stop working on it. I just started working on it again this week. I was going through some tough times and I was struggling with writing, so I stopped. I'm back now though, for a while at least.
5951730 ok
5951877 oh, and thanks for the offer. I appreciate it. I don't think I'll need it, but I appreciate it.
5951903 your welcome for the offer
Just realised that cadence is the alicorn of coitus, as well as luna (explanation for luna earlier in story)