Thaddeus is a normal 18 year old, still living in his parents house, who was at the wrong place at the wrong time, although it didn't necessarily turn out poorly for him.
A sense of rush, yes. As bad as it could be? NO, considering that it wouldn't have taken much for it to have been an okay speed to being to slow as well.
4647341 In reality, I have no idea what I'm going to write in the next chapter, actually that's a lie, message me and I might tell you. But any chapter after that is all freestyle.
4677046 No fucking way. There is no way you're reading my story. My heart can't handle this. You were one of my earliest role models in this site. Holy shit. And I'll fix that relatively soon.
4685767 OH ouch! Well, your story! If YOU think it's run its course and it's through next chapter, then it has and is. All in all, it's nice idea and story line so how ever you think it should run.
4686173 Oh come on, there'll be something like 20,000 words hopefully after the next chapter. Maybe I'll write another story after this one, maybe I won't. Chances are I'm going to write at least 2 more stories, to try out the different perspectives. Y'know, find which one I like the most.
Well shit, I didn't think adding my story to a group would bring this much attention. I didn't even expect any attention, I just added it for the hell of it.
4787808 I'm aware. I've never written anything on such a large scale. And I'm going to apologize in advance for A) The extra-EXTRA long chapter, along with the extra-EXTRA long delay and B) The extra-EXTRA rushed feeling next chapter. I just kept writing and writing and eventually I was 10,000+ words into it, and I couldn't find a reasonable place to split it. It's still not quite done, although I might just leave it on a cliffhanger, so as to not draw it out too much. Wow, 2 am brain, that was probably your best thought. Ta-ta for now, ladies and gentlemen.
4788129 lol. I know the feeling. Writing on large scale (shudders) don't know how many words I have, but I've filled twenty-seven note book pages. And I'm only started... and I hate writing!
4788830 Heh. I have no problem with writing on large scales, provided I`m not actually writing, like by hand. I can type forever, but my written work progresses into madness. My wrists start hurting after about 5 minutes of writing by hand.
4789931 Glad you enjoyed that. Shows that my comedy isn't shit. I was thinking about adding some... darker humour. Like orphan jokes and the likes. I decided that wouldn't be such a great idea, considering some people on here don't have the same sense of humour as me.
4795672 "Stories"? I only have one. Nevertheless, new chapter *should* be out within the next couple days, maybe even today. But take what I say with a grain of salt. It's also over 10000 words. Whoops.
“I could probably frontflip down these, I’ve thought about doing it since I was six, and I can do it now… Why not?” I would come to regret those words. I backed up to the door in front of the stairs, and ran towards the stairs, and as soon as I jumped, only one thought was thought. Was the ceiling always that low?
4796097 Tha dekes. At the time of submission, it was going to be a Luna x Human, but if you read up until the point where Luna was explaining how she found him, I think it would make a bit of sense. Because Celestia was sleeping at the time of impact, while Luna was up and doing shenanigans. I thought about doing a harem, but decided I would have no experience, nor the mental capacity to write the actions of three separate people/ponies at the same time. So, yeah. And just Celestia, I mean... she's like that really attractive mom, without the mom aspect.
How did this slip off of my fave list .-.
Well time to catch back up :D
4646980 Yeah. Beware, crappy rushed story ahead.
Tia gets all freaked out at blood, Luna gets all ticked off. interesting reaction out of Lulu
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A sense of rush, yes. As bad as it could be? NO, considering that it wouldn't have taken much for it to have been an okay speed to being to slow as well.
more please
4647341 In reality, I have no idea what I'm going to write in the next chapter, actually that's a lie, message me and I might tell you. But any chapter after that is all freestyle.
Man...if one of them threatens me I would have just bailed.....whew
4656274 I'm perplexed. When did someone threaten who?
Guys. I swear on my life, if you guys don't stop favouriting my stupid story, I'll cancel it.
4677046 No fucking way. There is no way you're reading my story. My heart can't handle this. You were one of my earliest role models in this site. Holy shit. And I'll fix that relatively soon.
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So, how do you guys feel about me ending the story next chapter? I feel like the next chapter will wrap up the story sufficiently well, so, yeah. Next chapter is the end. The ride was fun, friends.
4685767 OH ouch! Well, your story! If YOU think it's run its course and it's through next chapter, then it has and is. All in all, it's nice idea and story line so how ever you think it should run.
4685767 pls no too soon
4686173 Oh come on, there'll be something like 20,000 words hopefully after the next chapter. Maybe I'll write another story after this one, maybe I won't. Chances are I'm going to write at least 2 more stories, to try out the different perspectives. Y'know, find which one I like the most.
4686508 NO OH GOD NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
4787019 Yeah, she was shorter than that, but everyone was bitching me out.
Well shit, I didn't think adding my story to a group would bring this much attention. I didn't even expect any attention, I just added it for the hell of it.
4787512 well too bad cause we are hear now. And this is a rather enjoyable story. Feels a bit rushed though.
4787808 I'm aware. I've never written anything on such a large scale. And I'm going to apologize in advance for A) The extra-EXTRA long chapter, along with the extra-EXTRA long delay and B) The extra-EXTRA rushed feeling next chapter. I just kept writing and writing and eventually I was 10,000+ words into it, and I couldn't find a reasonable place to split it. It's still not quite done, although I might just leave it on a cliffhanger, so as to not draw it out too much.
Wow, 2 am brain, that was probably your best thought.
Ta-ta for now, ladies and gentlemen.
4788129 lol. I know the feeling. Writing on large scale (shudders) don't know how many words I have, but I've filled twenty-seven note book pages. And I'm only started... and I hate writing!
4788830 Heh. I have no problem with writing on large scales, provided I`m not actually writing, like by hand. I can type forever, but my written work progresses into madness. My wrists start hurting after about 5 minutes of writing by hand.
4789931 Glad you enjoyed that. Shows that my comedy isn't shit. I was thinking about adding some... darker humour. Like orphan jokes and the likes. I decided that wouldn't be such a great idea, considering some people on here don't have the same sense of humour as me.
Why can't the orphan play baseball?
4793012 Hooolllyyyy shit, you're here to. This makes me very happy.
4793113 Haha, or Daquan running faster thatn a train during a KFC sale... XD
4795496 Bingo.
can you make more please
I FUCKING LOVE YOUR STORIES OMFG
4795672 "Stories"? I only have one. Nevertheless, new chapter *should* be out within the next couple days, maybe even today. But take what I say with a grain of salt. It's also over 10000 words. Whoops.
4795774 Lucky you. I can do more than four, but it was supposed to be comical.
It was at this moment Thaddeus knew.....
He fucked up
4795785 I thought it was hillarious! Just thought I'd try to be funny. Lol!
Great job tho! This is a great fic! Keep it up!
4795889 =P Thank ya kindly.
Name and description sugges Luna X Human,
However story itself is Celestia X Human.
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4796097 Tha dekes. At the time of submission, it was going to be a Luna x Human, but if you read up until the point where Luna was explaining how she found him, I think it would make a bit of sense. Because Celestia was sleeping at the time of impact, while Luna was up and doing shenanigans. I thought about doing a harem, but decided I would have no experience, nor the mental capacity to write the actions of three separate people/ponies at the same time. So, yeah. And just Celestia, I mean... she's like that really attractive mom, without the mom aspect.
One thing I noticed is that their relationship is moving fast far to fast.