Guys, what are you doing. It's not that good of a story.

It a good story story so we shall thumb and fav
Also how tall/big is he if he can left Celly up even if she's light to him without it feeling uncomfortable?
I'm going to assume that she is the size of a earth horse

4508930 Jesus, an earth horse? Earth horses can easily weigh from 800-1000 pounds. Celestia is about 5"5', with her horn adding another 5 inches. These are by no means proper measurements, I just didn't like thinking of Celestia as a full grown horse. Thaddeus is about 6"5'. A bit abnormal, I know, but I like to think of the ponies as short and cute.

Watching to see what happens :)

4509218 Fair enough. I wouldn't get your hopes up though.

I'm certainly enjoying this so far and am definitely looking forward to more.

This is good

4512272 It's mediocre at the best.

4510427 I might be able to get a chapter out today or tomorrow, depending on how I'm feeling.

Just figured I'd let you all know, Thaddeus' personality is loosely based off of my own. Also, he has the same last name as I. Fun fast facts.

4510427 think you could tell me what Artemis is? Like dictionary meaning?

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I agree its okay, but there are a few spelling mistakes and errors. Also size seems out of whack for me, but thats my opinion. Also the story seems to be very rushed and weird at some parts, heck I would freak the heck out if I learn I am talking to beings that can move the sun and moon. I suggest going over it before you get to far and not want to do so. Take your time making your chapters, cause a rushed peice of work is not going to last as long as a well made work.

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Also be very careful with self inserts, they tend to overglorified themselfs in order to boosts there own ego. Instead of a complex character, we get a super saint that can do everything.

4508620 I'm thumbing your comment down because you said that. It's an awesome story man, keep it up.

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Artemis

hmmm go on i'm intrigued

It was at that moment I knew, I fucked up bad.

I can't go on! There ia to much useless information being thrown about for my taste, and I cringed at the diet exaplation. Tho congratulations on actually having the balls to write a story. You also have the ponies sizes right( math was done cellys the tallest at 6ft), which is nice. I can't go on but don't let that discourage you.

What you said about us human not neeading to eat meat is incorrect we do Need to eat meat the iron and all the other stuff soyeah have a good day cant read anymore after what you just wrote.

4839485 Dear miraak,
Your an idiot. Beans have some of the proteins that meat has and tofu has the rest,
Sincerely,
-NM

4839485 Go back to Solstheim.

From what I have heard, (and please tell me if I'm wrong) but humans don't need meat but not having it every once in a while is not healthy for them I would suggest fish once a month as pegasus would likely eat fish to help their wings grow stronger as they ar part avian somewhere in the chain of DNA. At least those are my thoughts.

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There are birds that don't eat fish. And I mean aviary birds. Hummingbirds are an example, as they eat bugs and enjoy dew and nectar from flowers. I know there are at least 8 aviary birds that don't eat fish, but they use a special nut that has the oil enzymes to help their wings be so healthy and clean.
It's hard to think of them since I had animal science back in the 2009-2010 school year. Only three days were on birds though, while the rest were on farm animals, or lesser common pets. Rabbits, and mice, and such as.

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Dear miraak....
VEGANS!!!!!
That is all.

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Have you seen their muscle structure, they are what would be called in 40k spaghetti limbed voidbornes

"However, humans do not need to eat meat to sustain themselves, in fact many people decided to live as vegetarians, using tofu and beans as a substitute." I quickly added, trying to prevent them from losing the breakfast they hadn't had. I explained to them that that was the extent of my knowledge, which was poor compared to many. I didn't pay attention in school, all right? Celestia had already moved towards the table, gesturing towards the chair next to her own, I sat down in it, surprisingly somewhat comfortably, considering it was a chair meant for little pony beings who were much smaller than me.

Have many switched to meat substitutes? The dream of all vegetarians came true in an alternate world:D