the chapter is hella good dude, besides a few grammar mistakes and such , but those can be easily fixed with getting a proofreader besides that is hella good chapter keep it up
That ending, picturing it in your head, with the metalic, war veteran voice, and implying it into the scene and replaying it all in your head is just awesome.
YES FINALLY!!! Can't wait to see the part when he beats the shit out of those ponies.
the chapter is hella good dude, besides a few grammar mistakes and such , but those can be easily fixed with getting a proofreader besides that is hella good chapter keep it up
Humans rule! Ponies drool!
make the ponies suffer! ha ha ha ha
F******** THE LIVING S********* OUT OF THEM
That ending, picturing it in your head, with the metalic, war veteran voice, and implying it into the scene and replaying it all in your head is just awesome.
0/10 No Bayonet Charges
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*Sad gasmask nosies*