Scootaloo was the last one to meet up at the Carousel Boutique after hanging her poster. Rarity had let her in and she found her friends in Sweetie Belle's room exchanging dance moves. Apple Bloom has like zero coordination. Spike is in for a surprise if he goes with her. Scootaloo just shook her head as Apple Bloom toppled over after trying to show case her "ballerina" skills to Sweetie Belle who was on the floor laughing. I think we should get back on track here.
"Oh hiya Scoots, you finally made it. Ah was just practicing my dance moves. Ah think Spike will be mighty impressed." Apple Bloom said giggling.
"The only thing that's impressive is your lack of balance." Sweetie Belle said, still laying on the floor laughing.
"What are you, a dance critic?" Apple Bloom asked in mock annoyance.
“Okay, so what do we – err need now?” Scootaloo asked looking from Apple Bloom to Sweetie Belle, trying to get them to focus. She was so nervous, she knew what she had to do and it made her tremble. It was worse when Apple Bloom looked over at her and smiled. Any moment Apple Bloom was going to use some cheap ploy to leave them alone again.
“Now we need a list of decorations and other party things!” Apple Bloom said jumping up and down. “Sweetie Belle, start making a list.”
“Okay.” Sweetie Belle pulled a piece of paper out of her desk and started to write. Her chin resting on one of her forehooves and her lips pursed as she tried to think of things.
Is there ever a time when she's not cute!
"Ah’m goin downstairs to talk to Rarity about dresses. I will probably be down there for a while…” Apple Bloom spoke slowly then trailed off. She looked at Scootaloo and smiled.
“Ooh, we should all go. My sister can get carried away when it comes to fashion and parties.” Sweetie Belle said.
“Na, I’ll be alright. Just make that list with Scootaloo, I’ll be back, um sometime soon - ish” Apple Bloom said as she turned to leave she moved close to Scootaloo and hissed in her ear, “Tell her or Ah will.” She nudged Scootaloo with her shoulder then left the room.
“Now she’s acting strange. Is there something in the water?” Sweetie Belle asked annoyed returning to her list.
All right Scoots don’t be a scardy-pony. Just say it. Just simple words, that’s all. Silly words, that’s all. “Um, Sweetie Belle?” Scootaloo said softly.
“Yeah?” She said not looking up from her list.
“I was wondering if you, um, would want to-to g-go to the dance with me?” Scootaloo said holding her breath, her heart pounding. Oh Celestai! What have I done?
“Like with you, with you?” Sweetie Belle asked looking up from her list at a blushing Scootaloo.
“Y-yes.” Oh gosh, breath! Scootaloo felt slightly sick to her stomach.
“I thought you were going to ask that special somepony you’re obsessing over?” Sweetie Belle asked slightly confused.
“Well, the thing is…I, um, just did.” Scootaloo said lowering her head. There, the truth is out. Her whole body was shaking half terrified she might be rejected, half excited she might say yes. I just told her. I just told. I just..ummm, breath Scoots. I just told her and she hasn't gone running for the door.
“Huh? The pony you have a crush on is me?” Sweetie Belle asked. Scootaloo could see she was blushing.
“Yes.” Scootaloo said turning her head to look Sweetie Belle in the eyes. She is beautiful. “I’m sorry Sweetie I don’t want things to be weird but I had to tell you, it was making me crazy and Apple Bloom was going to tell you if I didn’t”
“Apple Bloom knows?” Sweetie Belle asked.
“Yeah... I guess I was a little too obvious.” Scootaloo said forcing herself to laugh. “Listen I really like you Sweetie Belle, I don’t know how it happened. One day I just realized that I felt differently about you.” Scootaloo took a step toward Sweetie Belle, she didn’t back away. “I can’t get you out of my head, you make my heart beat fast, you make my knees weak, you are irresistibly cute, your eyes are breath taking and when you look me in the eyes... I lose my mind.” Scootaloo said moving closer to her. Sweetie Belle blushed and looked away shyly. “I guess what I’m trying to say is, I love you, Sweetie Belle.” She moved closer. They were nose to nose. Scootaloo closed her eyes and leaned in closer, her lips connected with SweetieBelle's. Sweetie Belle jumped a little, surprised, but didn’t resist or move away. Scootaloo broke the kiss and backed away from Sweetie Belle. “I’m – I’m sorry.” Scootaloo said and she lowered her head. "I'll just go." Scootaloo said. She had lost herself in the moment, poured her heart out to Sweetie Belle and acted out of lust. She was sure her friendship with Sweetie Belle was over. Why couldn't I control my self? Why?
“No wait!" Sweetie Belle said desperately. Scootaloo turned and looked at her with a sad expression. "That was my fist kiss you know?"
"Mine too." Scootaloo admitted. Sweetie Belle blushed as she stared into Scootaloo's eyes. What is she doing?
"I liked it." Sweetie Belle said simply. "I - I like you too Scootaloo and I’d love to go to the dance with you.” Sweetie Belle smiled bashfully. She reached out with her forelegs and brought Scootaloo into an embrace. She leaned in and kissed her on the lips. Scootaloo closed her eyes, wrapped her forelegs around Sweetie Belle. Sweetie Belle pulled her head back. “You know, I think I’ve always kinda liked you. I never knew what it really was but sometimes when I looked at you I would get these feelings…” Sweetie Belle trailed off and kissed Scootaloo on the lips quickly.
“Really?” Scootaloo asked tightening her embrace on Sweetie Belle. Sweetie Belle responded by tightening her embrace as well.
“Remember when we met under that table at Diamond Tierra’s cute-ceañera?” Sweetie Belle asked.
“Of course I do.” Scootaloo responded then kissed Sweetie Belle on the cheek. Is this really happening? If this is a dream...never wake me up!
“I remember thinking you were the coolest pony ever, like a mini Rainbow Dash. I didn’t realize it then but thinking back, I definitely had a crush on you there. My heart would race every time I watched you do those stunts on your scooter.” Sweetie Belle said softly looking into Scootaloo’s eyes.
“I think I always liked you too but two days ago, I fell for you hard. I love it when you sing.” Scootaloo said and Sweetie Belle kissed her on the cheek. “No more talking Sweetie, just hold me like this forever.” Scootaloo said softly as she moved her mouth closer to Sweetie Belle’s. Their lips locked in a passionate kiss. Scootaloo pushed her tongue forward into Sweetie Belle's mouth. Sweetie Belle was shocked at first but only for a second; she relaxed and pushed he tongue into Scootaloo's. They broke apart after what could have been a few minutes or an eternity, to Scootaloo time had no meaning anymore. Only Sweetie Belle mattered.
"Oh my gosh, Scootaloo. I had no idea... I feel so tingly so -" Scootaloo interrupted her by kissing her on the lips again. Scootaloo began to rub her forelegs up and down Sweetie Belle's sides. "Oh!" She squeaked. Scootaloo nuzzled her then kissed her neck. "Oh Scootaloo, I love you." Sweetie Belle whispered. Their lips met again. Sweetie Belle pushed he tongue forward, meeting Scootaloo's.
“Wow! Ah see you told her.” Apple Bloom said feeling a little awkward having walked in on them. Guess they were a little too busy to hear me come in. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle jumped and broke their kiss. They were still holding each other as they looked at Apple Bloom. Blushing, they awkwardly grinned at her.
“Oh, yeah we-err got a little distracted…” Scootaloo said. “We didn’t hear you come in.” She kissed Sweetie Belle on the cheek.
“Ah noticed... So ‘m guessing you two didn’t get much party planning done? The list…remember?” Apple Bloom said trying to get the two of them to stop holding each other and back to planning for the party.
“Oh, um yeah, well I started a list but got kinda sidetracked.” Sweetie Belle said blushing. Apple Bloom just rolled her eyes. “Instead of a list why don’t we just borrow Pinkie Pie’s party cannon? I mean, it probably has everything we need in it.”
“That’s a great idea! Why didn’t Ah think of that!” Apple Bloom shouted. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle laughed. Scootaloo kissed Sweetie Belle on the cheek. “Look, Ah don’t mind ya kissin in all but come on! Do you two have to be so mushy and lovey dovey?” Apple Bloom asked smiling.
“Well, it’s just so nice holding her and the way she is holding me…” Scootaloo trailed off embarrassed. Apple Bloom is supportive but I don't think she wants to know... “Anyway, how did your talk with Rarity go?”
“She really likes the idea, she's gonna make us the dresses. Then she spoke to me for like ever about fashion.” Apple Bloom said annoyed. “Then Ah come up here to find you two, um enjoying each other's company." Apple Bloom smiled. "You two are really cute together. I'll just leave you two alone so you two can get back to what you were doing. We can do more planning tomorrow."
"Thanks, Apple Bloom. You really are a good friend." Scootaloo said. I gotta thank her for forcing my hoof and planning this dance. I don't know what I would've done without her.
"Thanks. Y'all have fun now." She winked at them then left the room.
"Now, where were we?" Scootaloo said turning her attention back to the pony who's hooves were wrapped around her neck, back to her lover, Sweetie Belle.
"I think we were somewhere right around here..." Sweetie Belle leaned in and kissed Scootaloo on the neck making her shiver. She kissed her on the cheek then full on the lips, their tongues meeting in the middle.
Scootaloo was lost in the moment. Nothing else mattered to her except Sweetie Belle. She could feel the warmth of her body against hers, the passion in each kiss, the shivers each touch send down her spine and the aching in her heart as she longed for more. She wanted Sweetie Belle, more than anything, and now she was hers. She had more than she ever dreamed of, she had her forelegs wrapped around it and she never wanted to let go.
They had taken a break from kissing for the moment and just held each other. Scootaloo rubbed her nose against Sweetie Belle's. Sweetie Belle smiled then rested her head on Scootaloo's shoulder. "I love you Sweetie." She said softly. "I always thought falling in love would be uncool and lame but that was before I fell for you." She nuzzled Sweetie Belle. Sweetie tightened her grip on Scootaloo in response.
"I love too. I love the way you hold me." Sweetie Belle whispered softly. "I could fall asleep in your hooves. Spend the night?" Sweetie Belle asked. Scootaloo nodded and Sweetie Belle smiled. She broke out of their embrace and made her way to the bed. She laid down and Scootaloo laid next to her. She snuggled up against Scootaloo and Scootaloo put a foreleg over her pulling her in closer then she fell asleep.
Scootaloo pulled the covers over them and looked at Sweetie Belle snuggled against her fast asleep. She is even cute when she's asleep. She kissed her on the cheek before closing her eyes and falling asleep too.
Best chapter yet!!!!!!!
So cute. Great chapter. Happy belated Hearts and Hooves Day.
alas, Scootaloo is so awesome. And Sweetie-Belle! keep rocking!
DEAR LORD THAT WAS CUTE.
amazing
3955156 Yes, you are quite right. I realized this while writing chapter 4 and threw in that little bit about them always having a crush on each other when they first met and how Sweetie humming was the catalyst for Scootaloo to fall head over heals in love with her. Is that a total cop out? Yes, yes it is. Hopefully its cuteness will make up for what in lacks in proper back story. I plan to write many more fics, this is something I will work on. Thanks for being direct. Cheers!
One of the best I've read so far and it helped with my depression so thanks for that definitely a fav
Twi-Fi i got a question when will more chapters for this story come out and i like it
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3956595 I am currently writing the last chapter so, soon. I have a sequel and spinoff planned too.
3957061 ok
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As in most fanfiction, it's OK to assume the canon material as backstory. I didn't get the impression from the first chapter that it was love at first sight; given how long they've known each other, the only change was the realization that there was something more there. Together with the more detailed (and touching) explanation from Scootaloo in this chapter, it works quite well.
3957415 fixed.
Cutnes overload
so much adorableness, i think i'm gonna die!
This is a good story overall, but a lot of your dialogue is really formal. You don't seem to use any contractions, which makes the characters kind of sound like robots. Also, you're using "awe" when you should be using "aw" or "aww". The pacing also seem to be a bit quick.
That said I'm still enjoying this quite a bit. Scootabelle is a great ship.
Cutest first kiss EVER I'm sooooooo for this! *Squee*.
AAAAAAW!! MA FEELS!!!!!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh soooooooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuute really good story to the next chapter...i go!
Rubber? At least they are save ;3
Well.. that was... extremely quick to the punchline..
I LOVE this story. FANTASTIC job!!!!!
That story was amazing! Loved it.
"Is there something in water?" should be "Is there something in the water?"
This story just gave me diabetus, I hope your happy.
4068826 i agree i still love the story though
This chapter was so sweet, my body stopped producing this...
sciencephoto.com/image/7864/350wm/A6190162-Insulin_molecule,_computer_artwork-SPL.jpg
Internet cookie to whomever can guess the nature of this molecule.
>>The Captain remember when Scoots was in the romance section and went to a random page, I think sweetie just went with it.
But this is really good so far, I feel like things made connections faster then they should have but yet u made up for it by throwing in that "friend finds out and gets there friends together and forces the one to tell or else" scenario
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Well considering the tag to the .jpg says it's an Insulin Molecule I'm going to guess.... insulin?
“Now she’s acting strange. Is there something in the water?” Sweetie Belle asked annoyed returning to her list.
Y'know, I ask myself that same question at least twenty times a week.
ow
*looks down*
*pulls out the giant lollipop lodged in my chest cavity*
that was sickeningly adorable and now I'm a type 2 diabetic
To be honest, that kind of intimacy at that age doesn't work for me. The first kiss part was cute. But I draw the line at tonsil hockey.
And perhaps I'm a little too obsessed with conflict. But the fact that this was too "Slice of Life" makes it so that there was no conflict as a climax. There are a few things I would have done differently. And it would be in part to make Applejack right about not forcing things.
As much as I like cutesie, I'm a sucker for drama. The more my heart breaks, the better I feel... I mean... That sounds more awkward than it actually is. I don't specifically like seeing characters being emotionally hurt like that, it's just that I love the feeling of wanting to be there to comfort them. Is that strange? ...That makes three reasons why my OC is a changeling. The first is because I want to be an alicorn, but don't want the stigma that comes with it, so chose a changeling king so that I can be an alicorn whenever I want without actually being an alicorn. The second reason is my inability to actually choose in real life, including being able to settle on what species my OC should be. Being a changeling means that I can be whatever I want, a representation of my struggle with decisiveness. And now, I feed off of emotions.
Wow! Boy did I digress.