Light has always triumphed in the face of darkness. But can our favorite heroines truly defeat an evil that is merciless and relentless in its pursuit to grow? Join your favorite ponies as they deal with a threat they've never gone against before.
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I'm in church now :D
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The closest would be Alien, which was released May 25, 1979.
I was hoping that the qeen army would help her why is that?
Fantastic more
rubs eyes........... you realize how ridiculous this story is, right? would argue it is in the realm of just being plain bad.
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What's so bad about it?
4372104 aside for the whole human in equestria gets metamorphed into a monster scenario?
the aliens are deadly to the humans because they are sneaky, vicious, and humans have little advantage close up.
while the ponies are indeed technicolored talking animals, they have been built up to have supernatural abiltiies. flight, magic, and strength. true the acidblood would still be overtly deadly, but then again we are talking about a world where magic is a powerful and constant option.
considering the acid is liquid, perhaps a ward to keep liquids away. suddenly the creatures' primary advantage against anyhting capable of just killing them is gone.
just saying like a lot of storise like this, there is not enough thought goin gon about WHAT the ponies are in comaprison to another being. though will say the aliens would sitll be a greater threat than a normal human by far, but how they get here seems.......... lazy.
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What do you mean by that? There are plenty of human in Equestria stories on this site and many monster in Equestria stories as well.
The aliens are deadly to about any creature they would come across. They're supposed to be sneaky and vicious, like it is in this story.
The earth ponies' strength mean little to a Xenomorph. Don't forget that they are strong as well. As for unicorns, not everyone can be a Twilight Sparkle. Don't forget that most of the alien's kills come from stealth attacks. It also targeted non-pegasus ponies because they could just fly away if they had wings. The royal guards that were pegasi that were killed were in enclosed areas where they couldn't fly.
They didn't know about the acid until the very end and only one pony was killed from acid.
There are plenty of scenes in this story comparing the alien's strength and abilities to the ponies. There's the first encounter in the castle with the guards, the fight in the forest with Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Applejack, the scene with Shining Armor and his troops, the fight against Big Macintosh, the various abductions, and the final fight with the queen.
4373483 that is what i meant. you do not take into account that the ponies are supernatural. aliens are not. no thoguht is given to how they could kill the aliens when they have attributes that humans do not have.
it forcefully reminds of that retarded aliens vs predator movie to be honest. ever see that trash? the part where for some god dman reason the predators did not come with thier blades prepared for hunting xenomorphs? i know they are young but you do not hunt something without the appropriate tools, never. also the idea that the xenos, who are clever but sitll animals in impulse, stand a chance against trained combatants with superior physical strength.
getting on track, that is the PROBLEM, the whole human morphing thingy. it makes no damn sense, and it is simply a lazy method of putting a creature into equestria without bothering for an explanation. or a character into equestria period.
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There is no human morphing in the story. If you referring to what happened to the lieutenant from the beginning, he was facehugged and the alien came from him.
Don't forget, the ponies may have magic, but they are still mortal. They are also going up against a creature they have no knowledge about. The unicorns do try to blast the alien with there magic, but its hide is resilient. It seems you are really underestimating the abilities and strength of the alien.
As for the two AvP films, the first one was okay. Not good or great, just okay. The second one was terrible. The sad fact is that the first AvP film is probably is the best we'll ever get for an AvP film. The problem with "versus" films is that you'll have fans for both sides, so you can't have a clear victor without enraging half of your fanbase. Another thing to take into account is that the more monsters you have, the more expendable they are.
This comic sums it up pretty well.
The problem with AvP:R was that there was only one Predator against many Aliens. Since they wouldn't kill off the only Predator until the end of the film, we have a bunch of cannon-fodder Aliens getting killed off left and right. It's the same in the Alien films, or any monster movie at that. The more aliens you have, the dumber and weaker they are. The Alien in the first and third films were unstoppable killing machines until the very end. In the other films, you only have one "final boss" Alien with character immunity until the final fight. Example: in AvP, the Grid Alien killed two Predators in one scene and wasn't killed off until the end.
What we were doing with this story was to bring the Alien back to its original portrayal as a relentless, horrifying killing machine rather than what the video games and more recent films show it as.
Excellence my friend excellence! Damn fine chapter.
CROSS THE STREAMS!!!!!!!!!!
nice job sneaking in the ghost busters reference, it was a good ole' movie
now I would like to start to clarify something's in the argument below.
if anyone has read the actual alien books, canon books, then they would know that the rifle that was shot at the queen at the end wouldn't have done any damage, usually you would need plasma weaponry to be able to take out a warrior, let alone a queen.
next, just to clear up the point about the xeno being animals, in the canon story they have about 250 IQ points, EACH, and are incredibly smart, you aint takin them on very easily.
next is strength, in canon, aliens are supposed to be 2 or 3 times stronger then a combat android in the alien universe, which are about 2 times stronger then an Olympic athlete, that gives us an estimate of 30000lb of strength at least, pretty sure that can shrug off a lot of weight.
then there's the fact that they apparently aren't very powerful, while they actually have minor psychic capabilities, by the end of the story everpony could have been exactly like kettle pot or worse.
and last by not least is the fact that they HAVE exterminated entire planets, CAN survive in space just fine, and by that I mean to die in space it would have to be of something like starvation, and last but not least their genes are very intelligent and they get their genes and characteristcs from the host, its very possible that xenos that were gestated inside of a pony could use or become ammune to magic.
>> DiabloGuapo
>> lordofmyth
hopefully you now have the proper information to finish that argument
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Thank you for your input, though I already knew this information. The goal that XxEpsilonXX and I were trying to reach with writing this story was to make the Xenomorph the horrific threat like it was in the first Alien film. A lot of the later films and video games underplay the Xenomorphs' abilities. As for the "argument" with lordofmyth, he/she said the story was ridiculous, in the realm of being bad, and seemed lazy. I wanted him/her to clarify what they thought was wrong with the story and I was addressing his/her issues with it.
By the way, good job catching the "cross the streams" part. That's how we described it when we were planning the scene out. The funny thing is that we wrote this scene before the season four finale aired. Seeing Twilight try to blast Tirek with the combined power of the four alicorns reminded me of what we did here. The power of four combined against one foe.
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