Light has always triumphed in the face of darkness. But can our favorite heroines truly defeat an evil that is merciless and relentless in its pursuit to grow? Join your favorite ponies as they deal with a threat they've never gone against before.
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I'd say this is an improvement. I like that you gave a brief recap of Nyx's past history from Pen Stroke's stories and put in how everypony who encountered the Xenomorph is coping after seeing it kill a few ponies and almost them.
5958614 Why thank you. I do hope to make this story one of the better ones. And hopefully with my new found skills in writing, make the Alien even more terrifying.
5958614 Well of course, because it does seem natural to see a live Xenomorph murder someone in front of you and shrug it off like it was nothing, especial if it is in Equestria.
*Sarcasm detected*
I didn't expect to see Nyx in this. Neato