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6270808 Plz rephrase that question... and sorry, as I didn't see your comment until just now.
Foreshadowing perhaps?
Awesome new chapter man, nice to see something new added to this epic story of awesome!
I just remembered something, whatever happened to that guy who stole the plane, Victor? Is he dead or what.
Keep it up!
ya haz a repeating sentence and couple other typos. would help more but its to annoying to do on a tablet. not bad doe still looking good
6376070 Definitely forshadowing
6379006 Ooohoohohoo, that'll be an interesting thing to see~
Foreshadowing FTW :D
Also, your avatar is all kinds of awesome right now
6379235 if it is foreshadowing then what will happen to his wonderful massages?
6416562 Ponies would cry tears of sorrow, and the lurvly town of Ponyville would fall without his lovely lovely massages.
You're telling me! I simply cannot stand for this! *curls up into ball and cries*
6416562 Your first message is true... it does enhance a story in certain ways, whilst it will ruin it in some other cases. This story however will not include clop... sorry to disappoint you if you were expecting some. Also, in regards to the recent... speculations, I will not leave it as a cliffhanger; he isn't going to become a pony. I'm not against a good human turning into a pony story, but I would rather not ruin (in what I think is already a good story) this fic. It was interesting to give it a thought, but I won't actually do that.
For everyone else... I now know why I have a lack of ideas for this story! 70K is a big story for me to write, and so far, when this story is complete, it will be my newest longest story... the previous one being at 112k, and THAT took 6 months to write WITH motivation...
6787791 Excuse me... I played more CoD than Ace combat when I was younger... And most the movies I watch or books I read feature ground-bound troops compared to Air fighting. If you have advice, it will be welcome. Insight is better than just skepticism.
6998092 During some point (earlier on) I had been invited to a Skype chat with a bunch of other authors. I know most of their members as Twlights Library, and I know where they are when I see that ribbon with Twilight Approves on it. Cause I always misspelled cause as 'cuase' (I figured auto-fix would solve that for me), the fact I didn't like their stories as much (what, I don't like horror or dark stories that much...), AND the fact they didn't like my story... I believe I gained a few permanent haters. I honestly expect them to catch wind of this comment, and it will get like 4 if not more dislikes (as far as I know, their group was bigger than 12 when I left).
Thanks for the upvote! I just wish I knew an actual number of people that disliked the story, without the numbers of those haters being mixed in...
7160447 Hey, I will admit that does point out some obvious flaws just in the beginning chapter, yet I didn't know of any other aircraft that look like the cover art at the time. I didn't look into all the facts of the aircraft I was going to use, but I have a possible solution to change that. I will need to change a few chapters, and possibly before I update the current chapter.
--This was thought up as I drove home from work. It was actually a good distraction from the storm down south... I was fearing about possible Tornado's...
Just to see, wouldn't it become better if instead of a dogfight... he is testing an older aircraft (F-16 I suppose) with newer equipment, and is overall cheaper to manufacture. But as he is testing it, when Dash initiates the Rainboom, it also takes his plane with it (to him its rough turbulence). In the end, how he and Dash meet will be the same, but instead of a missile, his engines malfunction and that's what destroys his plane...
Sound more... 'realistic' than my wanna-be dogfight?
I would just love to see Dom get his plane back somehow. I feel like hes missing a big part of himself without it. Many stories have been done with pilots coming to equestrian, but they always had their planes to use when needed. It seems a shame that Dom lost his, when so much of the conversation at the formal meeting had to do with the technology that permitted him to fly. Its like hes been grounded, with no hope of ever flying again. I would love to see that his plane is MAGICALLY returned to him, just so he could back up his statements, as well as IMPRESS the other dignitaries with PROOF of his statements.
7167232 what Starship55 said! Will this be updated soon?
7650290 The plane is a no go. the lack the materials for a war plane, the most advanced machinery equestrians have is an old school computer if you go by a few fan fictions, or lamp posts you see in the show. In addition I'm sure it was clear his jet was destroyed when his and the others collided in mid air, creating a fiery explosion.
As for the next update. I am unsure. I am getting work done for Luna's Week Off, but I haven't yet tried to get any headway on this story. I don't want to lose the flow of writing I haven't had for such a long time...
7650760 Acknowledged, good skill!
This story is very immersive.
It's been quite a while since the last update.
Around A year and a quarter I think?
Is there gonna be any continuation to this?
7892979 yes... But I won't n it soon... Broke my computer...
7898156
Understood then.
7929471 I've known a few, and I'm only 22. You t some dumb assholes in the real world... Why not put them in stories?
In the words of Rainbow Dash; "Oh come ooooooon already, when's the next chapter? I want to read more of my awesomeness!"