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Let me guess...Dash is in heat, isn't she?
For a guy reading up on pony stuff, Dominic sure hasn't gotten to that chapter, has he?
4505281 I intended for it to be the salts effects on Dash that made her act that way. Sorta a catalyst for her emotions on him, but the salt (I want to say its different because its PONY salt) is like an alcohol in high enough quantities. Military food normally tastes better with salt, I know from experience on that much (not sure if it is just because it was a marine base though...).
Essentially, tonight she is drunk/high/wasted, in the morning, it will be like a hangover. Yet this hangover is from dehydration from all the salt Dashie unfortunately ingested. other than that, I don't plan on her being in heat... yet.
***I was expecting the first commenter to be someone hating on the chapter or even how long the wait was... xD thanks for not being like that.
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as much as I love heat, I actually think its more to do with the salt. Regardless good job on this chapter, I really am a sucker for luvy-duvy dashie. This whole chapter was giving me the tingles
4505817 Heh... what do you expect Dash's reaction to having consumed all that salt going to be? I just want to make sure that it isn't something you or anyone else expects...
4505862 Well I can't imagine that she should over react. The way you've worded it makes it seem like salt is a common spice so she shouldn't be that surprised that dom put some in the food. I don't mind what she does as long as its damn adorable.
Love this story! I'm normally not into Rainbow Dash romance stuff but this is really good!
What happened to this fic? It just sorta stopped.
4792150 I sorta had an issue pop up that hurt motivation to write anything for 3months...
Next update is soon, and I will explain more then.
4794925 2 weeks isnt soon
Any day now..
I really like this story
It was the salt, it was the salt that made her act that way.
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Its already a part of the story, so I wont be changing it. But if its any consolation, I feel stupid about writing that, and having salt be the catalyst. I read a story a while back, and in that story, the author made it where Celestia made an alcohol prohibition period, and the only way ponies got their 'high' was by going to salt lick bars, since alcohol was banned. I used that idea in my story without any real consideration. I MIGHT go back someday and rewrite it some day along the same lines, but instead of salt, having it be wine. and while the food is how she intakes it, he will try to be fancy and cook using wine, but the 'stew/broth' is more alcoholic because he managed to distill it a bit, making it more potent.
...again, I don't feel foolish. I feel stupid that I used salt for how she felt 'drunk'.
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Honestly the salt thing is perfectly fine, I have seen a few other stories play off of that concept and honestly it adds to ya boi Dominic's character. In a sense its actually more believable than the Wine idea. Dudes a military pilot I doubt he would care to get fancy with the cooking. The salt thing is an honest mistake that Dominic wouldn't have even known about, where as if he had decided to experiment with wine in his cooking he would have known the risk of using alcohol and the idea of him being oblivious to the cause compliments his character better.
From my experiences with the two of my friends who are F-16 pilots, the Air Force guys can be simplistic in their tastes. Its the Air Force they get great wifi and good food. I have always looked up to the Air Force guys, one of my best friends dad was a retired PJ who took a bullet over seas earning him a purple heart and an Honorable discharge, another of my friends dads became an Air Force Major through the Air National Guard flying fuel tankers in the middle east. Once I finish college I plan to either go into the Air Force or Air National Guard.