When the dragons can't find a solution to their boiling hormones, Fizzle finds the answer. And all it will cost is a few gems. Why not profit from their desperation?
3421915 how can I put this... (is more of a rant than anything) You start by building a good atmosphere for what is about to happen... but then Fizzle thinks about something that kind of ruins the mood... like when he start's to repeat to himself "don't vomit" on this chapter... You managed to make the scene actually gross when, I think, it should been somewhat appealing
There were many other situations during the whole story that, for me, was a mood killer ()
didn't saw that one coming (no pun intended)
well, Pudge my man-dragon, you have joined the other side... good luck with it.
from a dragon-whore we now have Fizzle as a sex-slave that was bought with a lot of gems... need to see how it ends
and as before... DO A SPIKE HAREM because spike is too awesome not to have one
I was kinda expecting Garble to be outside jerking his dick to Fizzle and Pudge.
I like this story so far, and I'm still impressed at how this is going! You have exceeded my love for gayness, my good person.
Candles man...
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Mother.
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Fucking.
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Candles...
That was an interesting turn if events... I really didn't see that coming.
I...just...what the fuck?
Meanwhile in Equestria, a teenage Spike wakes up covered in mares.
Lets see how far this rabbit hole goes.
I often pride myself on my ability to predict. Yet today, you have surprised me. Well done.
Totally saw the ship coming, but it was bigger and fancier than I had anticipated. Therefore I am only slightly surprised.
is interesting how the author can star to create a nice atmosphere... and then ruin it the next second
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Care to elaborate?
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how can I put this... (is more of a rant than anything)
You start by building a good atmosphere for what is about to happen... but then Fizzle thinks about something that kind of ruins the mood... like when he start's to repeat to himself "don't vomit" on this chapter...
You managed to make the scene actually gross when, I think, it should been somewhat appealing
There were many other situations during the whole story that, for me, was a mood killer ()
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I'm pretty sure it's gonna go down another hole... if you know what I mean
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Hey, not everyone likes rimming people. Also, what did you expect from a fic that started with a meeting on how to bone dragon ladies xD?
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plz
Dem candles...
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Well, he didn't have to rim. He could have just spat.