why I have not updated
My laptop the one where I updated from broke. And I have yet to find a replacement.
sorry...
And why so adverse to a chrysalis ship?
I mean comeon Shadow has just found someone who shares his interests.
Also known as murdering Celestia.
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I was going to read this, but your chapters are way to short man, I'm not saying its a bad thing, but It doesn't appeal to me personally, good luck to you, and try and write bigger chapters in the future
woohoo chrysallis ship.
wonder what sombra's veiw on changelings is....
it was good until the shipping man I mean really there not ever the same race plus shes a CHANGLING
there gross and can change there body's to match other people like really man really :-( not cool bro not at all I would be ok with it if he was a random badass pony murder not an op pony killin human but still a good story I just hope the plot does not revolve around that ship
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He is a zealot to his father aka king sombra.. who said id make it last?
I'm up for shipping, but something about chrysalis just... Turns me off.
First of all, as I've said, she's a bug. Secondly, changelings feed on love... They invaded Canterlot for the purpose of feeding on it. This implies that they can not love, otherwise they could feed each other by just having a relationship. Plus, sorry for this, but the romance seems really forced anyway. They barely even addressed the fact that they are different species, and he kind of just fell in love out of the blue, when his priority should be killing the one who damned him, not taking people out on dates.
I'm still finding this enjoyable, however. I just don't agree with the way you went with the romance; that's all. Continue as you please.
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I am going to let you in on a little secret.....
I f$#@ing suck at writing romance.
3544575 Well, practice makes perfect I suppose. Keep at it, listen to criticism, and you'll get better.
3544199 well good that is stupid she sucks the love out of ponies I don't want her and him to fall in love cause love is stupid very, very stupid
but its stilla good story nonetheless