I actually really like this take on the rapture crossover.
I mean using AppleBloom as a little sister is brilliant!
I have no idea why you have so many dislikes, but please do not let that discourage you.
Please continue this interesting tale.

The only thing that would make this better for me would be seeing the look (figuratively speaking) on her family and friends faces as they see AppleBloom harvesting Adam.

Speaking of which is it going to be explained as to exactly how AB ended up in rapture?

Either way take a like and a fave.

3288260 Yes of course i'm going to tell how applebloom got there. But also (sorry to disappoint) sadly her family and friends won't see her gather adam, but when Subject E goes to Equestria (next chapter) there will be some problems with him being there and all. (No spoilors but) applebloom will kinda act like a little sister in future chapters

I've seen a couple of improvements compared to your previous chapters. Although you could use this advice: don't describe how the action sounds like. Describe it as something like "the sound of machine gun firing filled the room".
Hope to see more.

3290277 Thx again for the advice screw It really helps

Very Awesome story so far, please continue

3367529 I'm glad your liking it feel free to leave any ttpe of comment.~shyZilla

U BETTER KEEP COMMENTING OR YOUR SOUL IS MINE.~SLENDY

3367711 Gladly,
Oh and Slendy.... I HAVE NO SOUL!!
Someone beat you to it, have a as compensation

3367727 I stole THAT soul and ate it

if you could be a big daddy or big sister what would you be (any type of big daddy) for me alpha or rosie big daddy

5673827 the alpha series : )

5673827 friggin bouncer