Rapture has given Epsilon only one good thing, the very thing that drives him everyday to live in this stinkin' city. His only family, his daughter Applebloom. He'll do anything and everything to protect her.
Its really hard and annoying to read with most of the words spelled wrong, crammed together, no proper punctuation, and no space in between punctuations. If you really want to get a good rating for this fiction could you at least search for a proofreader or manually fix this?
Its really hard and annoying to read with most of the words spelled wrong, crammed together, no proper punctuation, and no space in between punctuations. If you really want to get a good rating for this fiction could you at least search for a proofreader or manually fix this?
3163977 thx screw for the advice i'll get right on it
Well, this should be interesting.
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If you want a Bioshock crossover, read Rapturous for Equestria. It's probably the only good Bioshock/MLP story on this website.
3165987 thanks for the reading advise i'll read it too
3165984 sorry not the best describer
3165987 oh and i'm trying my best, this is my first written fic (the rest are in my mind)