Ooo. This looks curious.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Darn it! Skeeter got here first Ah well Time to read then comment again!

I think we need a bit more, for both parts of the story.

I am actually curious to see what...fun Rarity had with Mr. Bear last night ~

I would absolutely want to read what Harry and Rarity were up to that night : )

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What would you say is missing on Fluttershy's side?

Cause I pretty much intended to keep this open-ended on her part and not reveal everything about the mysterious stranger.

YES!

Megusta.

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Oh, then, no everything on Fluttershy's side is fine, unless it's possible for her and her stalker to meet again...

We need Rarity's part!

3105813 Alright this comment is making me read this.

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Agreed! Another chapter, garcon, with plenty of sauce!

Yes, write Harry and Rarity doing the nasty. This is a great story.

Post Rarity and Harry doing the Nasty. Please.

*clears throat*
More, if you don't mind...

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I admit I'd like to read more about Fluttershy and her visitor, but if you don't want to do that then I definitely wouldn't mind reading about Rarity and Harry.

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Here's the thing. I purposely left the real nature of the visitor ambiguous, so every reader could come to their own conclusion as to what (or who) it is. It could be a rare animal, it could be a guy in a costume or it could be something totally alien. Everybody should have their own idea by this point and I don't wanna destroy that by going ahead and saying "here's what it really is."

I did briefly consider a crossover follow-up, where the four guys from Finding Bigfoot (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finding_Bigfoot) come to Ponyville, hold a town hall meeting and then try to track down the creature in the Everfree Forest after hearing Fluttershy's sighting. But that just seemed silly.

3108332 More of both parts would be cool, but if you have decided not to that's fine.
Yeah...

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So was yours

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I can respect that. Sort of like Calvin and Hobbes with the "Noodle Incident" that was often mentioned but never explained. The cartoonist, Bill Watterson, said he wanted to leave it up to the reader's imagination.

You're very good at this.
I'm very curious as to what happened between Harry, and rarity.

It's like a new shipping!! what should it be called......

Harity!!!

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Yes, I've been thinking about that, too.

Harity is my favourite. The other two that have come to mind are Bearity and Rarry.

Anyone else got one?

3108775 Creatureshy.

t'was a good read, indeed!

“As soon as you touch that net, you'll be mine,” she muttered with a chuckle. Even if it took all night, she would find the creature and befriend it.

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Welll, that was unexpected.

Maybe her clothes got scratched off from Harry carrying her, like, each one of her garments getting stuck on a branch. Until she woke up and he offered some honey. OR the "mysterious being" was actually a changeling and had a hive in that cave, but they are good changelings. They treated her with honey, and they be-friended Harry.

I dunno. But I want more!

I'll be content with anything, just so that I can quench this curiosity of mine.

Anyone else think it was Big Mac? It was shy, it was muscled and it had green eyes... mystery solved.

Just fuck me!

The stranger has to be Big Mac, but with a curse. When aroused in the middle of the night he transforms into a bigger hulking creature that seeks out other to fufill his lustfull desires. Fortunately for the weman of Ponyville his first stop is at Fluttershys and when he sees her enough of his normal self is able to stop the monster from fully taking her, instead content to just watch from afar.

Of course unbeknownst to Big Mac, Applejack knew of his curse and has been keeping an eye on him as much as possible. She soon turns to Twilight Sparkle to help solve her brothers plight the day before this chapter took place.

Unfortunately Rarity soon goes missing after her night of passion with Harry and Applejack and Twilight are afraid that Big Mac is the one responsible. After a few days of waiting Twilight is forced to act and after a confrontation between the two friends word get out of Big Mac's curse the the town of Ponyville calls for justice. Big Mac is taken before the town to seek answers for what has happened to Rarity but before anything can be solved he is soon save by Fluttershy and they both escape to the forest.

Big Mac, tired of his curse and all that it has wrought him try's to go back to face the town to stop his lustfull monster whithin him but Fluttershy try's to stop him. He explains to her that this must be done and she finaly gives in. Before they leave he and Flutters share a night together thus breakin his curse and finding the love they had yet to fully realize they had between them. On their way back to town they stumble upon Rarity who is struggling to get a very badly wounded man they've never meet before to the town's hospital.

As it turns out Harry the bear, thanks to the magic of love, was turned into a human to spend the rest of his days along side his new lover Rarity. But as they were making their way to town the dangers of the Everfree found them and has sense been in a desperate race to escape the harsh environment but not before Harry was injured.

With Mac and Fluttershys help they make it back to town where the situation is explained and all is made right between everyone. Thus both the new couples live happily ever after in the sweet embrace of each others love.

Well at least that was my first thoughts anyway. Great story and would love to see the part with Rarity even though I'm kinda saddened to hear that the Flutters part won't get a follow up.

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Ooooooh, that's good. See? If I had given the creature a definite identity, you might never have come up wih that.

...Welp I got a new fetish now, thanks!

3113727 Keep Harry a bear. Don't ruin the unique thing about the ship.

More!

Must know more about the figure. Along with what happened with Raity and Harry.

Please finish both parts of this, I have to know what happened between harry and and this mystery animal asap!!!

I don't really care about Harry and Rarity, but more Shy and ?Stalker? please!

Well that was intersting ....side story or sequel maybe.

What the hell I think half of the fluttershy lovers are the mystery being

please continue

lolz...i'm guessing Rarity is the stalker...hahahaha

Now I'm wondering what the 'house special' the spa was offering entails.

His hands moved faster and faster as the strange visitor enjoyed his pseudo blowjob.

Pseudo-what?