Death of Twilight Sparkle

by Redhoof2001

Epilogue

Twilight Sparkle's funeral was held two weeks after her death. Not a single person's face was dry at the funeral. She looked so peaceful in her grave.

Ponyville was never the same after that. The weeks following were like a normal town, but every time the date of her death passed almost not a word was spoken.
Spike lived with Rainbow Dash, and Rainbow barely flied anymore. She spent all of her time with Spike.

Applejack went on living a normal life, bucking apples and such but felt a gaping hole in her heart.

Rarity designed dresses for all the ponies for things like the Gala, and always made one extra. It made her feel better to know that she had dresses for Twilight. Others in town thought she was crazy, but her friends understood.

Pinkie Pie was changed the most. She wasn't her party animal self for quite a while. She often sat outside just staring off into the distance.

Fluttershy cried for almost a week. She could not abandon her animal caretaking duties, so she forced herself to be tough.

One day, Princess Celestia was seen at what was left of Twilight's house. She left a flower and a letter in her mailbox.

The letter was never to be read by anyone.

"My dearest Twilight Sparkle,

You were my most faithful student. No others could compare to you. I hope you read this from heaven and know I remember all of your progress in life. From stopping Nightmare Moon, to defeating Discord, all the way up until now.
Goodbye, Twilight.

~Celestia"

Comments

[Slashwing]

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[jtc09999]

Why am i crying?

Oh, and i found one error:

"It had been three weeks since Twilight Sparkle was put into a coma. Twilight and Rainbow visited and brought gifts in hope that she would wake up every day."

How did Twilight visit herself? o.o

[Starwarsgeek]

[dream1990]

and please make more chapters of this story or a sequel to this story because i want to see how Twilight Sparkle friends and the Princesses and Spike and all the ponys of Ponyville go on Living they life without her

[Quadraginta]

This feels extremely rushed, as if you spent less than a half hour, or even less than 15 minutes coming up with the basic plot. It's also waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short. I could emphasize the "way" a bit longer, but I think you get the point. Perhaps if you spent more time working on this, and made it longer, you could pull off a nice engaging story, but for now....No.

[SigmaAtlas]

Hmm, it is a little short. I mean, it is a little rushed. You lengthen it up a bit, get more ideas, it will be better. It is definitely not as bad as some others first. Length, that is it in the future. You don't look like you have many errors though

[Redhoof2001]

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Fixed thanks for finding

[elue1234]

SO MANY FEELS!!!!

[Dakingace]

Oh man sooooo sad I am crying right now.

[Plushie Penguin]

Nice concept but a little rushed don'tcha think?

[Hoijomte]

This story doesn't really convey emotions like a sad story should be. A small advice would be to try to explain what the characters are feeling and be more descriptive because if you want a story that people can emerse themselves in. Like instead of writing she walked to the side of her dead friend write something like she dragged herself over the floor not willing to accept the death of her beloved friend who now lied in front of her. That are just a few tips if you want to write another story