Um... wat?

"What's in the box?"

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That pony will get Lock Jaw soon... In your Pic.

Ok. This was something.

Nicely done so far.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Finally got around to reading this

Only one problem:

Applejack bit down hard on the gag as the vibrator pushed even more into her clit and continued to buzz away.

That would hurt like hell. I suggest changing that to :

Applejack bit down hard on the gag as the vibrator pushed onto her clit even harder and continued to buzz away.

Handle With Care: Chapter one: What's in the Box?

Heck, before Vinyl she had never even kissed a stallion.

There should be a comma between "Vinyl" and "she."

Quite an interesting take Applejack, I think this is the first fan fiction I have read where Applejack's dialogue had little to no accent. A shipping fetish sounds like a mobile version of an abandonment fetish, and I do enjoy a good abandonment play. I do not use these very often, at least not the Applejack version, mainly because I usually do not read Applejack clop and I try to keep them to the relevant characters, however you deserve an Applejack ahegao. I believe I shall favorite and upvote this. Onto the next chapter.

Applejack can't lie out of this one.