Applejack needs to work off some special tension. Good thing Vinyl Scratch is there to help and she has just the idea to give Applejack the vacation she needs—shipping, a special game involving lots of toys, tight ropes and... the postal servic
Damn... Poor AJ...
But still funny and Vinyl's instructions to Apple Bloom...
Wait. She gave Derpy a Muffin... Nah. Can't be.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2947572Oh look. I've found you again. Stop reading the stories I read
My thoughts on this chapter:
Handle With Care: Chapter two: An aphrodisiac (This is the proper spelling) a day keeps the tension away:
Celestia knows the Apples would tell her anything about sex if Applejack was any evidence.
I think, from the context of the paragraph, that that "would" should be a "would not."
“She probably won’t be comfortable with it but I think I may be able to persuade her a little. You’re growing up after all.”
There should be a comma between "it" and "but," and there should also be a comma between "up" and "after."
...making slap noises...
"Slap" should be "slapping."
A second later, the pegasus flew back and grabbed Applejack’s box, tipping it back.
If you know what I mean.
Okay, well good luck with the rest of your route then.
There should be a comma between "well" and "good."
What a silly pony.
"Who's a silly pony?"
You are a silly pony.
"Who is?"
You is, Applejack.
The finale is *puts on sunglasses* cumming.You deserve another Applejack ahegao.
Looks like this honest apple core *puts on sunglasses* has sexually blossom.
Damn... Poor AJ...
But still funny and Vinyl's instructions to Apple Bloom...
Wait. She gave Derpy a Muffin... Nah. Can't be.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2947572
Oh look. I've found you again. Stop reading the stories I read
My thoughts on this chapter:
Handle With Care: Chapter two: An aphrodisiac (This is the proper spelling) a day keeps the tension away:
I think, from the context of the paragraph, that that "would" should be a "would not."
There should be a comma between "it" and "but," and there should also be a comma between "up" and "after."
"Slap" should be "slapping."
If you know what I mean.
There should be a comma between "well" and "good."
What a silly pony.
"Who's a silly pony?"
You are a silly pony.
"Who is?"
You is, Applejack.
The finale is *puts on sunglasses* cumming.
You deserve another Applejack ahegao.
Looks like this honest apple core *puts on sunglasses* has sexually blossom.