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Breath of Plagues
I write mostly serious adventure stories and maybe a random feelsy fic now and again. Interested in dark stuff more than anything.
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Um... wat?
2946511
It's not my fault... I had no choice!
Applejack and Vinyl! What is this craziness? (starts reading)
"What's in the box?"
2946714 You should join our chat.
2946714
Haha, very clever
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That was gloriously fucked up.
2946511
That pony will get Lock Jaw soon... In your Pic.
For the record Breath, this is my fetish. Thank you.
2947083
She'll be having a fun afternoon.
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2946947
Oh cool. How about that... I had actually never heard of a shipping fetish before and I had to have the guy this was for explain it to me a few times. Hopefully you'll find it a fun read.
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I certainly did, though in my opinion she should have been in much, much stricter bondage.
Also, Kaidan's the reason I found your story in the first place
Ok. This was something.
Nicely done so far.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Damn... Poor AJ...
But still funny and Vinyl's instructions to Apple Bloom...
Wait. She gave Derpy a Muffin... Nah. Can't be.
~Skeeter The Lurker
That's it? It's over?
WHAT. But.
Is there more...?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Any chance we could get some more of this please, Breath?
2947127
That, good sir, should probably be documented for posterity.
2946947
Wait...this is a legitimate thing...?
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Uhh... well truth be told, there is more story I had planned but there isn't any more written at this moment. Thing is, this was supposed to just be a short little one-shot and it kinda got out of proportion before I realized what was happening as it is.
I talked to Kaidan about it, and he said he was interested in picking up where this left off. It was his present after all, so I figured he could go ahead and get the views if people wanted more.
I guess if this gets featured though, I'd look into doing another clop short in the same setting, perhaps.
2947881
I was as surprised as you are actually. It was a challenge to capture the fetish right, that's for sure.
2947901
Ah, wonderful.
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You know, I actually thought it might be a fetish unique to me and me alone. Though, now I know Kaidan shares it.
A whole new meaning for 'going postal'
Exceeded all expectations.
Paragraph size: 8/10
Letter kerning: 9/10
Sisterly love: 10/10
Number of letter 'e' in story: 5/10
I really hope you write me more clop soon, because you have a real talent for it. It's not often people can skip scenes and make it still so enjoyable to read. Reminds me of some other stories where they never actually show the character having an orgasm, but it's just as good because they build such a lovely image up to that point. I can picture her crying out for help in the warehouse after Derpy turns off the lights, before falling back asleep with the invader up her butt.
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wow that was ummmm ... crazy hot nice.
2947572
Oh look. I've found you again. Stop reading the stories I read
2956724
Actually. I know this guy.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2950901
Who down votes this stuff? IDK, maybe it was just because your rating system was so silly. 
2956724>>2956728
@Skeeter,
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Who are you again?
2956806
Hardy hardy har....
PATHOS
~Skeeter The Lurker
2956806
I wanted to sound sophisticated... if Vinyl weren't spiking my breakfast too and shipping me across the country, I could have focused!
You wrote clop? Wow.
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It's pretty damn filthy and it was fun in the end anyways. Probably never doing this again.
I don't have any issue with clop, honestly, and the idea of trying one bounced around in my head for a while. I kinda didn't want to because ponies really aren't my fetish, but I really have no moral values, so a friend asked and I just kinda did it. Haha, but yeah, I don't really have any real excuses.
2974316
What counts is that you enjoyed or had fun writing it. I mean, why write something in misery? Anyways can't wait to read!
Finally got around to reading this
Only one problem:
That would hurt like hell. I suggest changing that to :
My thoughts on this chapter:
2947127
Dear god, I hope you or Kaidan can flesh that out
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Awesome that you stopped in to give feedback. Stuff like that makes writing feel rewarding. I felt like my wording on that one part meant what I intended, but yours was clearer and I took the suggestion. Thanks for that.
As far as Apple Bloom's...situation, it was more or less just something there to be really screwed up and incestuously kinky because I thought it was fun. Though, when I finished and handed priority on this to Kaidan, I thought about a storyline for that. It's vaguely planned out but I've kinda put clop to the side for a while. I'm probably going to use it when I get really stuck on my serious stories, but I do in fact look forward to it also. It's just too fun to pass up really.
Very good plot... No pun intended. Never even knew there was such a fetish.
BTW: Loved the fact that Vinyl Scratch put pears as the label. They must have been some wet pears. XD
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Whos a silly pony? Pearljack
That moment when you're in bed, scanning your E-Reader for any good unread clopfics, and the only thing you find is a three-chapter fetish fic with an extremely unusual ship. Said moments makea you pretend you are taking two shots and say "Because why the fuck not" between them.
Was it worth it? Lemme ask my dick.
...
It said "Fuck you. But say hello to Right Hand for me later! Was a lovely evening."
Self-explanatory.
Funnily, despite being one of the most talented editors I know, you still have some it's/its confusion and missing commas. :P
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And now that Selbi's dick told me to fuck off, I can die happy.
I appreciate the compliment on the editing btw, but yeah, I have my own weaknesses. On the commas, I wouldn't doubt I messed a few up perhaps but I'm a big fan of 'screw the rules, this sounds good' type thing. Even with my nazi-ism I can appreciate that mantra for what it is, and I often do the wrong thing by choice. I feel that if you know the rules, you can usually break them smartly.
On the it's/its thing though, I just suck at that.
I don't really know why. I never see it.
What? I thought Vinyl was a girl?
2951369 You're spanish?
2947083
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!?!
3091494
What the fuck are you talking about?
3093469 I think you represented Vinyl there as a stallion! In reality it's a MARE! A SHE! You know what a SHE is?!
3094617
Unless I accidentally called Vinyl a 'he' somewhere, nothing is wrong. Girls can be comfortable with their sexuality, and Vinyl's fannon personality paints her as a party girl usually, of which sex is a big part of. Besides, just because she's extra flirtatious and casual about sex doesn't mean she's written as a guy.
3094836
What's that now?