Good to know that you are indeed going to give us the results of every possible choice, and I commend you for taking the time to do so. I'll admit to being very very curious to see what else could have happened. Looking forward to everything else you have planned bud, no matter how long it takes.
Why did I know that if I read this, my whole day would go right down the shitter. Seriously, my day was going so well before this showed up. Can you really not give us a second chance? Especially since the vote was so close.
Good luck, readers... I hope you choose wisely. You get one chance, and one chance only. Unless you seriously fuck up. Then I may give you another chance. Maybe.
Well I really don't know what to say I was hoping to keep reading the story and see what happens next but then this happened and I'm getting a little tired of this now.this is the end but we can see what would have happened if we did something else...I just don't know if I have the ability to read this thing over again...Really you should make a version where we pick what happens and a version where you pick what happens you should make it more like the first arc...Guess all just go read AFTH changeling story it's more likey to have updated...So I might or might not keep reading I very sadden at this That it had to go where it did. And hopefully you find a way for people outside The USA to win something as well. Great story up to this point And Try to set up a tree for each path we make so we can look back and see what we picked easier then looking at all The past chapters-Really should add that! Ps whyed you have you go do that r j crap he could have just got The princess to come by and help them shed say :I can only save one..Pick wisely :Save spitfire? or The one you love? Hey another story line what do you know!
that was realy sad the only thing that was weird was that all but one poll i picked won the one i lost was going after ray or the suplies room but anyway off to go finish my project that im working on and read the next chapter to broken hearts and dimonds
Damn it why couldn't you make a choice! I TOLD you this would happen if you didn't choose but YOU DIDN'T LISTEN! Fuck, at least I chose to sacrifice Spitfire so the Elements of Harmony could have been used to stop Ray. I know that making a choice is hard but anything was better than this.
Well sh!t... I knew each choice, including the last one was guaranteed a death sentence, but damn... I should've seen this coming...
Well, at least you're going to write with the other endings so we can get a good ending (and justice for Dash and Spitfire and for the main character) and kill the motherfcker known as Ray who should not have been hatched!
Me: I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for ransom, I can tell you I don't have money. But what I do have are a very particular set of skills; skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for griffons like you. If you let Rainbow Dash go now, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you. But if you don't, I will look for you, I will find you, and I will kill you.
Ray: [after a long pause] Good luck.
(Brohoof to people who know what movie this is from)
Dude..... I'll do a cross over just to have Ray die. Damn... well, that was a bit anti climatic (in my opinion at least. I see why it went that way, I just wish it didn't). Can't wait to see what happens in the future,
Well, that was as horrible as I was expecting, but not the specific horrible that I wanted... Oh well, at least I won't be around to suffer through the doom I've created.
Seriously though, without the horrible rape this plot line was built on, it kind of falls flat at the end. Still, it was a fun ride.
So, yeah... Not gonna lie, I wanted this to end badly, but not "rocks fall, everyone dies" badly. Those are kind of painfully anti-climatic. But, I did kind of put in one of the two swing votes on the last two polls so I guess I kind of screwed myself on that one...
I find myself disappointed in Ray at the end. He offered up a surprising amount of mercy in the end, considering he had all the cards.
When I saw that there was a new chapter I was like: . But then I saw it listed as complete and I was like: . =P
Well, I always expected it would end this way, though I was really surprised that the majority voted for this option. They can't have expected it to have the better outcome. Oh, well. I voted for letting Rainbow Dash live, and I'm guessing that was the second most voted on option. Anyway, despite being sad that this story is over, I'm glad you didn't do a Deus Ex Machina type cop out. And that you made this an 'iron man run' and not give us a second chance; it makes the choices feel more meaningful.
So yeah. Thanks for not only this story, but for the whole series. It's been fun! (In a very dark, disturbing way)
Well my original comment was gonna be about decision making but I thought it would offend people so all I can say is I can't wait until the whole thing is released.
Well, there are a few other bad ends near the beginning, but those choices were easy to beat. Plus they ended the story quickly. I'm probably have to say that this was the worst ending that could have been chosen.
If you want to know the other endings, you'll sadly have to wait until I finish all the pages for the whole story.... or you can beg EchoWolf31 to leak the original story tree he won.
Why are people so stupid? I saw with sneaking up on Ray ending in capture. I guess most people are like the courier or assume best case scenario rather than worst case. I mean all offense when I say most people are idiots like to get themselves killed somehow.
well i think some knew that luna revived tank right? so if just 1 died and the other 2 got their revenge. and luna and celestia could revive the dead 1 ... so no1 got killed :/
Well damnit, I should have known that they wouldn't have been miraculously saved.
Good to know that you are indeed going to give us the results of every possible choice, and I commend you for taking the time to do so. I'll admit to being very very curious to see what else could have happened. Looking forward to everything else you have planned bud, no matter how long it takes.
Damn.
sir u are the first fic writer to cause me to weep like a disgraced televangalist
please post the "good" ending first
You should have Celestia come out of no where and revive all of them just to surprise everyone
I... You... Just... WWWHHHYYY!!!???!!!???!!!???
Why did I know that if I read this, my whole day would go right down the shitter. Seriously, my day was going so well before this showed up. Can you really not give us a second chance?
Especially since the vote was so close.
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Maybe, I doubt it though
Well I really don't know what to say I was hoping to keep reading the story and see what happens next but then this happened and I'm getting a little tired of this now.this is the end but we can see what would have happened if we did something else...I just don't know if I have the ability to read this thing over again...Really you should make a version where we pick what happens and a version where you pick what happens you should make it more like the first arc...Guess all just go read AFTH changeling story it's more likey to have updated...So I might or might not keep reading I very sadden at this
That it had to go where it did.
And hopefully you find a way for people outside The USA to win something as well.
Great story up to this point And Try to set up a tree for each path we make so we can look back and see what we picked easier then looking at all The past chapters-Really should add that!
Ps whyed you have you go do that r j crap he could have just got The princess to come by and help them shed say :I can only save one..Pick wisely :Save spitfire? or The one you love? Hey another story line what do you know!
Fuck Ray!
OMFG I KNEW IT D: you guys... why?![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
Damn it! I just had to be late for the fucking poll!
Give us the second chance... This ending is bullshit
Damn. No Deus Ex Machina?
Whelp. That was rather disappointing. Back to reading happyfic I guess.
This is everyone's fault but mine!![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
BUCKING DAMN IT! I chose Spits! there wasn't even any rape! *grumbles*![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
that was realy sad the only thing that was weird was that all but one poll i picked won the one i lost was going after ray or the suplies room but anyway off to go finish my project that im working on and read the next chapter to broken hearts and dimonds
... ... ... ... damn...
what?![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
wow that was unexpected.......... now im sad![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
Damn it why couldn't you make a choice! I TOLD you this would happen if you didn't choose but YOU DIDN'T LISTEN! Fuck, at least I chose to sacrifice Spitfire so the Elements of Harmony could have been used to stop Ray. I know that making a choice is hard but anything was better than this.
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Even though I'm saddened by the ending, that definitely cheered me up a bit! Nice one.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Well sh!t... I knew each choice, including the last one was guaranteed a death sentence, but damn... I should've seen this coming...
Well, at least you're going to write with the other endings so we can get a good ending (and justice for Dash and Spitfire and for the main character) and kill the motherf
cker known as Ray who should not have been hatched!
Well written, but damn... I hate bad endings...
![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
Now here's my message to Ray...
Me: I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for ransom, I can tell you I don't have money. But what I do have are a very particular set of skills; skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for griffons like you. If you let Rainbow Dash go now, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you. But if you don't, I will look for you, I will find you, and I will kill you.
Ray: [after a long pause] Good luck.
(Brohoof to people who know what movie this is from)![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Dude..... I'll do a cross over just to have Ray die. Damn... well, that was a bit anti climatic (in my opinion at least. I see why it went that way, I just wish it didn't). Can't wait to see what happens in the future,
Brony on!
Well, that was as horrible as I was expecting, but not the specific horrible that I wanted... Oh well, at least I won't be around to suffer through the doom I've created.
Seriously though, without the horrible rape this plot line was built on, it kind of falls flat at the end. Still, it was a fun ride.
So, yeah... Not gonna lie, I wanted this to end badly, but not "rocks fall, everyone dies" badly. Those are kind of painfully anti-climatic. But, I did kind of put in one of the two swing votes on the last two polls so I guess I kind of screwed myself on that one...
I find myself disappointed in Ray at the end. He offered up a surprising amount of mercy in the end, considering he had all the cards.
Well, until next time... Stay brutal, Camel.
When I saw that there was a new chapter I was like:
. But then I saw it listed as complete and I was like:
. =P
Well, I always expected it would end this way, though I was really surprised that the majority voted for this option. They can't have expected it to have the better outcome. Oh, well. I voted for letting Rainbow Dash live, and I'm guessing that was the second most voted on option.
Anyway, despite being sad that this story is over, I'm glad you didn't do a Deus Ex Machina type cop out. And that you made this an 'iron man run' and not give us a second chance; it makes the choices feel more meaningful.
So yeah. Thanks for not only this story, but for the whole series. It's been fun! (In a very dark, disturbing way)![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Wow, seriously?![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
Fuck all of you who voted "I can't choose."
Who doesn't know that's the most cliche thing you can say to get everybody killed?
I guess i'm just glad that there was no rape in this one.![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
This is why i chose go it alone before this mess started.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
And i chose spits.... i like rainbow more...
Well my original comment was gonna be about decision making but I thought it would offend people so all I can say is I can't wait until the whole thing is released.
well i knew it would end bad if both mare join on this mission ...
"if you don't choose i will kill both of them" public: lets choose that option! :D then this happens and the public is like: D:![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
3040976 Best comment everssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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Nuf sed....
Well we all had a good run
it was a great read and I cant wait to see what else you'll come up with ![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
3042814 but its true!
3042983 That's why it's funny
3043029 im a terrible person for laughing at your profile pic
3042983>>3043029 !LoL!............So True...![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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Somehow we managed to find the bad end in a rapefic that involves no actual rape![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
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I know, right? All the rape scenes I had planned got bypassed!![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
What I really want to know about this story, Is their a badder ending then this?
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Well, there are a few other bad ends near the beginning, but those choices were easy to beat. Plus they ended the story quickly. I'm probably have to say that this was the worst ending that could have been chosen.
If you want to know the other endings, you'll sadly have to wait until I finish all the pages for the whole story.... or you can beg EchoWolf31 to leak the original story tree he won.
Sigh... I chose to kill one of them.... we were so close guys.....
This story...... this......story.....
Sigh.....
Okay no. I'm actually pissed with this.
You all F***** up!
One SHOULD HAVE died!!
Now I lost one of the thing I have to look forward to!
Why are people so stupid? I saw with sneaking up on Ray ending in capture. I guess most people are like the courier or assume best case scenario rather than worst case. I mean all offense when I say most people are idiots like to get themselves killed somehow.
well i think some knew that luna revived tank right? so if just 1 died and the other 2 got their revenge. and luna and celestia could revive the dead 1 ... so no1 got killed :/