The one time, THE ONE FUCKING TIME I decide to choose against what my instincts were telling me and this happens. Then again, I have a feeling you would've made us do this decision no matter what we chose. I'll come back when I thought about this some more. P.S. This is why I thought we should have left them home.
3015594 .......I may be calm now, but inside me there is a fury growing the likes of which my town has never seen before. I need find a safe way to release this rage.
So... for those of you starting to finally catch on to a certain trend to the polls... keep your eyes on my blog. There will be a contest soon, and the winner will get a copy of My Little Slave (Con edition!)
Oooooo, I like the sound of that~
Anyways, I still want Rainbow to be ours by the end of all of this, hopefully. So goodbye, Spitfire.
Fuck. Fuckity Fuck. Assuming he keeps his word we have two options with different benefits. If we free Spitfire she should still have her enchanted dagger but we lose use of the Elements of Harmony. If we chose Rainbow Dash we keep the Elements as a option but lose the enchanted dagger. Option three would kill EVERYONE.
I cannot decide what to chose. Do we sacrifice Rainbow and hope that Spitfire could save her? Or sacrifice Spitfire and hope Rainbow can regroup with the Elements? Either way Ray never said that you would be going free.
6th choice Spitfire 6th message Your failure hurts me more than it hurts you. You know who it doesn't hurt? Well, me. That was just a figure of speech.
I know the message should be the same for every option but damn I hope I chose well.
Okay, I decided. I don't trust Ray, and who knows if he's really going to keep his promise. Seriously, he has no reason to let us live. So I'm not going to choose, and now I'm going to pray like hell that some kind of deus ex machina happens and saves out sorry asses.
3015874 Oh don't give me that look, you're the author, you decide what happens, not like my vote is going to do anything. I'm just hoping for the best. Besides, most people are probably going to end up voting for Spitfire anyway.
Okay, I guess that's a fair enough reply. But for my arguments sake I'll explain myself. We've seen in the past that Captain/King Ray is a sadistic, egotistical, and all around bad griffon. That having been said, he only seems to put himself in a position where he stands to lose nothing, yet the deals he makes are of so little value and yet we stand to gain almost nothing yet sacrifice so much just to beat him, if you can even call it that when we escape. From what I've described of Ray's personally, especially now that he has a god complex thanks to King Sombra's horn/power I don't believe he would react very well to someone stepping out of the bounds that he's placed for his game. And to be honest would we really want to live with the idea of sentencing someone to death, and more-so why would we force the survivor to live without her wings, that's worse than death for a pegasus since their lives revolve around the skies. So I'll say again, the only way to win this game is not to choose. I hope this clears things up a bit.
In retrospect I guess I should've elaborated a bit more on my previous comment. What I meant by my comment was that I'd choose the third choice, since that's the closest we'd get to not playing this game of Ray's.
You know what... I take back what I said earlier. Given everything that's happened to this point in this story line, I would have been extremely disappointed if there wasn't at least a little more rape goin' down...
And, no, Dash's new, highly self-destructive kinks don't count. I want to feel my heart bleed.
Clearly the best option is 3, because if everyone dies, the story ends and we can hopefully start again with a different decision tree, and not fuck everything up.
Well fuck everything! First off you made it so one or both of my favorite mares will be killed and raped.Then a contest comes up for us residents only...God damn it.Anyway this came out a little fast-Well not really fast but faster then most story's anyway.I don't want to vote.What I want is for everybody to have super deep feelings for both characters and find out after a long voting That either both will die or both will live-Or maybe none they could just get raped and that's that's.Ray could be lieing and really plan to kill them all because that's how all crazy rapist criminals think they want you to pick one or The other Just for fun. One thing I found that I just can't figure out is This:but it doesn’t matter in the end as Dash and Rainbow come to a screeching halt.I think dash is rainbow or are there two now? Double rainbow bitch! But really I think you ment to say As dash and spitfire Or 'You' possibly I don't really know. But as far as voting goes both are one and The same in the way that it won't matter who gets pick because 'You' might be killed in which case Dash will die anyway and spit won't be able to live with out her wings-Suicide Either way so in less this is the end and pony kind is fucked You have a plot twist coming so I might not vote if I do it will be random,All just click the screen and press enter.That's my option. But you should let 'You'Have a real chance but in the end..It matters not ,for time takes no notice of us. Equestria will not miss ponys For they never knew them to start with. Kill ray! Or don't kill him...I mean do something to him that does not involve death so maybe he can be a slave for The ponys. Dumb ponys will do to him what he did to ponys. They will get their females to rape him over and over...But if that happens,Did ray really lose in the end?Who knows Short chapter....That should mean there will be more soon.hopefully!
It was a tough choice but in the end i had to think "what would I actually do if faced with the situation" after going through everything in all of the stories it made sense that if the seconds were ticking away I would blurt out Rainbow Dash. Thats how I made my choice
And that's what I was hoping everyone would do (not necessarily the blurting out RD, just making the choice within the 10 seconds of reading the choices).
Comment posted by Adagio Rose deleted Aug 10th, 2013
I really don't get all this fuss in comments. It's most typical cliche that used everywhere in movies and books. " No salvation moment " - we're screwed and gonna die, but on last seconds hero will come and saves the day. For example here, I think it will be Celestia with AA12 Shotgun or power of magical socks or whatever. So yeah mark my words - No one is gonna get hurt really bad. At least I hope hero will show up after sex rape scene that I missed in this story. And yeah, I go with RD.
I'm very disappointed. I must admit that I can't keep reading, I don't see any hope that there will be any sort of happiness to be had at the end of this. I enjoyed the first two stories and hope you'll rethink this and write the actual final installment after this game of yours runs its course. If not, well I'm just one reader.
Edit: Fuck it I voted I'll see this through though I still hope you'll reconsider or perhaps write out the other choices so we can do it choose your own adventure style.
3021592 Did you seriously just say that? In this case I don't see deus ex machina happening here, and if it does it will be too late to prevent the murder of the one chosen. Just remember Northern Lights.
3021686 This makes me weep for the English language, firstly, spelling. You is spelled y o u not U. Secondly, all caps just makes you look inarticulate, why do you feel so strongly? Elaborate and express yourself eloquently. 3021691 And this is just failing to attempt to exert your will on the story, if you don't vote, you don't get to bitch about the outcome. You failed to make your voice heard and thus have no voice in further events.
God damn it, do we really have to choose?
Well, I guess I did say the earlier decisions were too easy.
What ever choice you make, you lose. The only winning move is not to play.
The one time, THE ONE FUCKING TIME I decide to choose against what my instincts were telling me and this happens. Then again, I have a feeling you would've made us do this decision no matter what we chose. I'll come back when I thought about this some more. P.S. This is why I thought we should have left them home.
3015586
You know what the best part was? The last poll came down to two votes. TWO.
3015594 .......I may be calm now, but inside me there is a fury growing the likes of which my town has never seen before. I need find a safe way to release this rage.
Oooooo, I like the sound of that~
Anyways, I still want Rainbow to be ours by the end of all of this, hopefully. So goodbye, Spitfire.
Not even gonna vote. To sad
Fuck. Fuckity Fuck. Assuming he keeps his word we have two options with different benefits. If we free Spitfire she should still have her enchanted dagger but we lose use of the Elements of Harmony. If we chose Rainbow Dash we keep the Elements as a option but lose the enchanted dagger. Option three would kill EVERYONE.
I cannot decide what to chose. Do we sacrifice Rainbow and hope that Spitfire could save her? Or sacrifice Spitfire and hope Rainbow can regroup with the Elements? Either way Ray never said that you would be going free.
I am regretting starting this story.
6th choice Spitfire
6th message Your failure hurts me more than it hurts you. You know who it doesn't hurt? Well, me. That was just a figure of speech.
I know the message should be the same for every option but damn I hope I chose well.
Fuck. I just realized that Ray is cruel enough to kill the one we didn't pick just to screw with us. I really hope I'm wrong.
Okay, I decided. I don't trust Ray, and who knows if he's really going to keep his promise. Seriously, he has no reason to let us live. So I'm not going to choose, and now I'm going to pray like hell that some kind of deus ex machina happens and saves out sorry asses.
3015779>>3015575>>3015871
3015874 Oh don't give me that look, you're the author, you decide what happens, not like my vote is going to do anything. I'm just hoping for the best. Besides, most people are probably going to end up voting for Spitfire anyway.
Ha! Joke's on you; I've got days to vote!
*shrug* Well, while I would have been okay with some ridiculous "happily ever after" ending, since it appears we've kind of fucked that up...
I say fuck it, let's go full circle and force this shit decision back into Ray's claws. I mean, really, what's the worst thing that could happen?
3015874
Okay, I guess that's a fair enough reply. But for my arguments sake I'll explain myself. We've seen in the past that Captain/King Ray is a sadistic, egotistical, and all around bad griffon. That having been said, he only seems to put himself in a position where he stands to lose nothing, yet the deals he makes are of so little value and yet we stand to gain almost nothing yet sacrifice so much just to beat him, if you can even call it that when we escape. From what I've described of Ray's personally, especially now that he has a god complex thanks to King Sombra's horn/power I don't believe he would react very well to someone stepping out of the bounds that he's placed for his game. And to be honest would we really want to live with the idea of sentencing someone to death, and more-so why would we force the survivor to live without her wings, that's worse than death for a pegasus since their lives revolve around the skies. So I'll say again, the only way to win this game is not to choose. I hope this clears things up a bit.
In retrospect I guess I should've elaborated a bit more on my previous comment. What I meant by my comment was that I'd choose the third choice, since that's the closest we'd get to not playing this game of Ray's.
-M
You know what... I take back what I said earlier. Given everything that's happened to this point in this story line, I would have been extremely disappointed if there wasn't at least a little more rape goin' down...
And, no, Dash's new, highly self-destructive kinks don't count. I want to feel my heart bleed.
Clearly the best option is 3, because if everyone dies, the story ends and we can hopefully start again with a different decision tree, and not fuck everything up.
3016235 Yes that would be the best. I can't stand that either of those two have a chance to be raped and murderd.
3016235
Or maybe not...
GAHHHH BUCK IT I CANT DECIDE DAMN THESES IMPOSSIBLE CHOICES WE NEED A HERO
3016235
Nope... the decisions made here will be the official ending for this trilogy.
Goddammit. I just couldn't choose. We need a hero!
hey didnt you say that you had the two choises for the next chapter already pre typed
also that little project i mentioned awhile back is starting to get there its far from over but at least its getting somewhere
Not voting.
3015853
I know what you mean... God damn it, why did I start to like this!?
I knew I had a bad feeling about this story right from the start of this sequel... I knew this would happen.
I know that feel bro... *hugs you and prays for the best to happen* I just want this mother fucker to die any kind of death!
3018005
Hell yes we do! Anything! Anypony!
You All better not choose the third option.
One has to die. trust me.
Don't choose the third option.
3020078
Shhh! Don't ruin the surprise!
i admit if i had to ide save Rainbow Dash before Spitfire...but ide rather not choose
wait there has to be a plot twist. we need something like a hero to jump in and do something like a secret 4th option
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As of this post, 132 have voted.
51% of the readers have voted wrong.
People who don't choose the option that has clop in it aren't really reading the story.
Well fuck everything! First off you made it so one or both of my favorite mares will be killed and raped.Then a contest comes up for us residents only...God damn it.Anyway this came out a little fast-Well not really fast but faster then most story's anyway.I don't want to vote.What I want is for everybody to have super deep feelings for both characters and find out after a long voting That either both will die or both will live-Or maybe none they could just get raped and that's that's.Ray could be lieing and really plan to kill them all because that's how all crazy rapist criminals think they want you to pick one or The other
Just for fun. One thing I found that I just can't figure out is This:but it doesn’t matter in the end as Dash and Rainbow come to a screeching halt.I think dash is rainbow or are there two now? Double rainbow bitch! But really I think you ment to say As dash and spitfire Or 'You' possibly I don't really know.
But as far as voting goes both are one and The same in the way that it won't matter who gets pick because 'You' might be killed in which case Dash will die anyway and spit won't be able to live with out her wings-Suicide Either way so in less this is the end and pony kind is fucked You have a plot twist coming so I might not vote if I do it will be random,All just click the screen and press enter.That's my option. But you should let 'You'Have a real chance but in the end..It matters not ,for time takes no notice of us.
Equestria will not miss ponys For they never knew them to start with.
Kill ray! Or don't kill him...I mean do something to him that does not involve death so maybe he can be a slave for The ponys.
Dumb ponys will do to him what he did to ponys. They will get their females to rape him over and over...But if that happens,Did ray really lose in the end?Who knows
Short chapter....That should mean there will be more soon.hopefully!
It was a tough choice but in the end i had to think "what would I actually do if faced with the situation" after going through everything in all of the stories it made sense that if the seconds were ticking away I would blurt out Rainbow Dash. Thats how I made my choice
3021236
And that's what I was hoping everyone would do (not necessarily the blurting out RD, just making the choice within the 10 seconds of reading the choices).
I really don't get all this fuss in comments. It's most typical cliche that used everywhere in movies and books. " No salvation moment " - we're screwed and gonna die, but on last seconds hero will come and saves the day. For example here, I think it will be Celestia with AA12 Shotgun or power of magical socks or whatever. So yeah mark my words - No one is gonna get hurt really bad. At least I hope hero will show up after sex rape scene that I missed in this story. And yeah, I go with RD.
I'm very disappointed. I must admit that I can't keep reading, I don't see any hope that there will be any sort of happiness to be had at the end of this. I enjoyed the first two stories and hope you'll rethink this and write the actual final installment after this game of yours runs its course. If not, well I'm just one reader.
Edit: Fuck it I voted I'll see this through though I still hope you'll reconsider or perhaps write out the other choices so we can do it choose your own adventure style.
3021592
Did you seriously just say that? In this case I don't see deus ex machina happening here, and if it does it will be too late to prevent the murder of the one chosen. Just remember Northern Lights.
FUCK U
NOT GOING TO VOTE
3021686
This makes me weep for the English language, firstly, spelling. You is spelled y o u not U. Secondly, all caps just makes you look inarticulate, why do you feel so strongly? Elaborate and express yourself eloquently.
3021691
And this is just failing to attempt to exert your will on the story, if you don't vote, you don't get to bitch about the outcome. You failed to make your voice heard and thus have no voice in further events.
3021728 I can't vote at all the computer block it
3021728 and i just got done reading the story.
3021743>>3021743 * story