2995012>>2995039 As a former member of the US Army, my gut tells me to get in and out quietly. No noise. If there was a way to set a delayed/remote-activated charge, then it could be used as a distraction while eliminating a good chunk of the enemy combatants. However, I don't think these ponies have access to C4.
PS: Author, the whole scenario was a dead giveaway. Anyone who voted for the other choice doesn't understand basic military tactics and strategy. You ALWAYS have someone on overwatch duty.
2995063 True, but what if the other group of griffons come back while we go after Ray? The situation can go bad very quick if we have to make an escape.
2995130 That's why you have to be silent. In and out without a sound, and do so fast. The element of surprise and stealth is the only advantage that we have. Plus, who is to say that there isn't other access points? Causing a cave-in alerts all forces in those caves, and might not provide any benefit.
It's also the reason why I'd would have brought some form of timed/remote explosive.
... well, yes, that is a plus. Okay, I'll admit the first poll I put that there to confuse everyone. But after a few days I decided to actually have a purpose for it. No, it doesn't affect the story, but one person will be very happy in the end.
Argh... I know I said I wouldn't cheat you guys and that this story's end would be your choice only, but... GAAAHHHHHHH this is painful for me to not drop a dead-giveaway hint.
Well this story is...really something I just randomly found it back when you were sill writing Fire in her eyes,From what I'm seeing this was ment to be a well written troll fiction story but evolved into a better one that more people would want to read.This is why the encounters of rape have gone down I think you want to more or less rid your story of rape completely but doing that would chase a large amount of your original Followers of your story away. I like these story's you write,Well to some degree anyway-I think it was almost a year ago that I read your other story's I find them to be a bit different from this one.I don't really think I'm good at writing fanfiction as much as creating original story's with detailed backgrounds Im sill working on a few books and have been for a while now I can't write like you can but I can write like I can. A long book doesn't make it a good one,And a short one...Doesn't make it a bad one. Really if I could I'd post it on here but being non pony fiction or any kind of fanfiction that can't work out
Really hope this story of your turns out well Not wishing for a happy ending or a sad one because every ending is happy as well as sad just depends on what the character wants I want dash to get her happy ending-But we all should know dash is mentally mest up for life so she can't live normally beat thing for her...And I'm sorry to say,Take the easy way out,After they take care of the griffons I mean I don't hate ray for the soul reason that he dose not exist I mean story wise hes a total dick that needs to be taken care of and maybe raped himself just to see how it feels But I'm not the kind of person to really have emotion for things that never happened and can't happen I do pertend to be in my character shoes when writing just to try to figure our how they would feel if put into that type of setting, also helps write them better. Anyways hurry up and write that next chapter-Don't really try to speed up that will only make your chapter look rushed just pointing that out in case Ps what's with that Portal reference? now people will think I made my account because of that...Whatever not like I care much
Pss Nopony said that spitfire had to stay with them the whole time 'You' and dash head after ray as spitfire waits for sometime maybe ten minutes or so and then break the supports as you attack ray and his guard catch them when they don't expect it..Which is all the time seeing as how they don't know their there...Or do they and they know that 'You' will be there and that your first idea will be to break the supports so their just pretending to not know your there to get you later on..But why do that if rays force is much bigger then Yours? Or maybe he doesn't know how many are coming so he's just going on with his plan to get the horn-And maybe the ponys who made the place had the same kind of idea for the other mass number of ponys who hate king Sombra Or whatever that non important characters name was,And placed spells on the pillars making them invincible to attacks so spitfire would be captured by the griffions in the storage room as 'You' and dash try to attack ray and find out as he is finding out that it's just you three there,That he has the horn and your all fucked that Is intill the ponys at the crystal kingdom tell the dragon that ray plans to have all dragons enslaved forever and the dragon will use his dragon style stuff to rip up the ground and kill ray.Ray will use the horn to try to kill the dragon but Spitfire breaks free kicking the horn off his head and knocking him out as the dragon picks ray up and has butt sex with him Which kills him in the process.The dragon thanks The ponys for telling him that info and asks what he can do in return,They ask for peace and the dragon agrees Signing a treaty with the ponys to help out each others county's if ever ones in danger.With ray dead the rest of the griffions go home and the ponys attack their capital ridding their nation of it's government.the good griffions take over creating a age of peace over their country's for all of time. ...Wow what will really happen I wonder...
Well then, tough choices lie ahead of us... even though they're already decided. I have been picking accurately so far, so that's good. Things are about to get intense, I can feel it.
I'm going to be honest here, I voted to attack who else?
What to do next you tell me, I already f*cked up once![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Okay, I really don''t know which to choose, so what do you guys think we should do? I thinking we should cause a cave in.
2995012>>2995039
As a former member of the US Army, my gut tells me to get in and out quietly. No noise. If there was a way to set a delayed/remote-activated charge, then it could be used as a distraction while eliminating a good chunk of the enemy combatants. However, I don't think these ponies have access to C4.
PS: Author, the whole scenario was a dead giveaway. Anyone who voted for the other choice doesn't understand basic military tactics and strategy. You ALWAYS have someone on overwatch duty.
5th choice: Follow Silently
5th message: You're not just a regular moron. You were DESIGNED to be a moron.
2995063 True, but what if the other group of griffons come back while we go after Ray? The situation can go bad very quick if we have to make an escape.
2995130
That's why you have to be silent. In and out without a sound, and do so fast. The element of surprise and stealth is the only advantage that we have. Plus, who is to say that there isn't other access points? Causing a cave-in alerts all forces in those caves, and might not provide any benefit.
It's also the reason why I'd would have brought some form of timed/remote explosive.
2995152 After thinking everything over, you're right about this. Let's go in silent.
OH, COME ON!!!![:twilightangry2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightangry2.png)
2995170>>2995151>>2995123
Again... mean? yes...![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
But there is a purpose. I swear.![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
2995170
I think all of those are insults. Besides, what's a REMF going to do? Take away our birthdays?
2995172
i bet you giggle with glee putting mean stuff for us to read wanting the reactions ![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
2995195
... well, yes, that is a plus. Okay, I'll admit the first poll I put that there to confuse everyone. But after a few days I decided to actually have a purpose for it. No, it doesn't affect the story, but one person will be very happy in the end.
2995215
Cave-in ftw!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
I feel stupid now![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
If we cause a cave in, we'll lose track of Ray, who might have a chance of finding Sombra's horn.
i picked cave in cause if you go after ray and he yells then you have to deal with all the griffens in the storage room
you were designed to be a moron! thanks a lot![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
Goddamnit, guys. You made us miss out on more Dragon rape...
2995215
Your gonna go meta and have Ray read our votes aren't you...
I was designed to be a moron cause I picked the safe path! How!?
2995063 The tunnel is likely to have few hiding spots because of its design. If you cause the cave-in you can disappear when Ray returns.
2995172 Anger makes you stupid. That why they're there.
i guess i'm doing cave-in?![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
Oh, no. This is one of those super difficult ones.
Oh well, at least I can take solace in the fact that my one vote probably won't be game-changing.
even if you manage to cause a cave-in, when ray gets the horn, it wont matter, follow him
2999496
Right now, I can say that you're thoughts are quite ironic to reality...
Argh... I know I said I wouldn't cheat you guys and that this story's end would be your choice only, but... GAAAHHHHHHH this is painful for me to not drop a dead-giveaway hint.
Oh wait... maybe I did already somewhere.
3004149
Don't need to... or do I? I possibly maybe have or have not.
"You're not a regular moron. You were DESIGNED to be a moron."![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Is that a Portal 2 reference?!
I. Am. Not. A. Moron!!
( I'm sorry. I just had to say that. I had to. )
I'm not sure of this helps but it is a Portal 2 reference and it is said to a character as they hammer the protagonist into the ground....
Well this story is...really something I just randomly found it back when you were sill writing Fire in her eyes,From what I'm seeing this was ment to be a well written troll fiction story but evolved into a better one that more people would want to read.This is why the encounters of rape have gone down I think you want to more or less rid your story of rape completely but doing that would chase a large amount of your original Followers of your story away.
I like these story's you write,Well to some degree anyway-I think it was almost a year ago that I read your other story's I find them to be a bit different from this one.I don't really think I'm good at writing fanfiction as much as creating original story's with detailed backgrounds Im sill working on a few books and have been for a while now I can't write like you can but I can write like I can.
A long book doesn't make it a good one,And a short one...Doesn't make it a bad one.
Really if I could I'd post it on here but being non pony fiction or any kind of fanfiction that can't work out
Really hope this story of your turns out well
Not wishing for a happy ending or a sad one because every ending is happy as well as sad just depends on what the character wants I want dash to get her happy ending-But we all should know dash is mentally mest up for life so she can't live normally beat thing for her...And I'm sorry to say,Take the easy way out,After they take care of the griffons I mean
I don't hate ray for the soul reason that he dose not exist I mean story wise hes a total dick that needs to be taken care of and maybe raped himself just to see how it feels
But I'm not the kind of person to really have emotion for things that never happened and can't happen I do pertend to be in my character shoes when writing just to try to figure our how they would feel if put into that type of setting, also helps write them better.
Anyways hurry up and write that next chapter-Don't really try to speed up that will only make your chapter look rushed just pointing that out in case Ps what's with that Portal reference? now people will think I made my account because of that...Whatever not like I care much
Pss Nopony said that spitfire had to stay with them the whole time 'You' and dash head after ray as spitfire waits for sometime maybe ten minutes or so and then break the supports as you attack ray and his guard catch them when they don't expect it..Which is all the time seeing as how they don't know their there...Or do they and they know that 'You' will be there and that your first idea will be to break the supports so their just pretending to not know your there to get you later on..But why do that if rays force is much bigger then Yours? Or maybe he doesn't know how many are coming so he's just going on with his plan to get the horn-And maybe the ponys who made the place had the same kind of idea for the other mass number of ponys who hate king Sombra Or whatever that non important characters name was,And placed spells on the pillars making them invincible to attacks so spitfire would be captured by the griffions in the storage room as 'You' and dash try to attack ray and find out as he is finding out that it's just you three there,That he has the horn and your all fucked that Is intill the ponys at the crystal kingdom tell the dragon that ray plans to have all dragons enslaved forever and the dragon will use his dragon style stuff to rip up the ground and kill ray.Ray will use the horn to try to kill the dragon but Spitfire breaks free kicking the horn off his head and knocking him out as the dragon picks ray up and has butt sex with him Which kills him in the process.The dragon thanks The ponys for telling him that info and asks what he can do in return,They ask for peace and the dragon agrees Signing a treaty with the ponys to help out each others county's if ever ones in danger.With ray dead the rest of the griffions go home and the ponys attack their capital ridding their nation of it's government.the good griffions take over creating a age of peace over their country's for all of time.
...Wow what will really happen I wonder...
Well then, tough choices lie ahead of us... even though they're already decided. I have been picking accurately so far, so that's good. Things are about to get intense, I can feel it.
~SolidFire