The Cutie Mark Crusaders are left to ponder about the real nature of their sisters, and come to some unsettling conclusions. With Happy Ending, because everything else would be mean.
Scootaloo and her quest to find her roots, and the true meaning of family leads her to closer relationships with the other ponies in her life as well as self discovery.
Something precious has been taken from Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Rarity. To get them back, they must risk their own lives, or lose the ones they love most.
Very well written for your first fanfic. I don't see very much wrong with it, expect it was over very quickly. But it is a one-shot, so I can excuse that. Good job over all! Rest in peace, Scoots.
It does seem a little fast.. But it is well written,
Very well written for your first fanfic. I don't see very much wrong with it, expect it was over very quickly. But it is a one-shot, so I can excuse that. Good job over all! Rest in peace, Scoots.
I see a problem
You let Scootaloo die!
Y'know... there is a Tragedy tag...
Otherwise, you get 7/10 Photo Finish's
2869637 Derp, I didn't see that ;3