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The Pie In Ajs eye


i wrote this fanfic... its kinda a downer

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After Pinkie Pie has been brought to justice, AppleJack tells the truth behind Pinkie Pie's cupcakes. She tells the truth behind the dissapearance of her best friend Rainbow Dash and others. And she tells us the mental toll the whole tragedy has had not only on her, but on her friends.
This story is not disgusting as in gore. It is really depressing though, Ponies do die but it's not graphic

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Comments ( 19 )

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Wow.
That was amazing. AMAZING.
I sit here, thinking about it..
Just amazing.
Be happy, Scoot ;-;
:scootangel:

:fluttercry: This is actually a pretty good companion piece to Cupcakes. Nice job.

Damn! This is awesome!

No real words in me. That aside emotes do your thing...:pinkiesad2::applecry::raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry:

Wow! THAT WAS STUNNING!!! Make more!!!:scootangel: It was soooo sad though.:ajsleepy: I felt sorry for AJ and Fluttershy and Everypony else affected by Pinky!!!:raritycry::raritydespair::fluttershbad::fluttercry::ajsleepy:

R.I.P to all those who have died.

:rainbowderp::scootangel: and others.

:fluttercry::applecry::ajsleepy::raritycry::raritydespair::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::facehoof:

And Pinkie, may you finally rest in peace and be redeemed for your crimes... :pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2:

Just uploaded the Original Cupcakes. D*** THAT FANFIC IS SCARY!:unsuresweetie::twilightoops::raritydespair::rainbowderp::pinkiesick::applejackunsure::applejackconfused::ajbemused:
P.S. It is worse than Pinkemena Diane Pie:pinkiecrazy:

to the author
I FUCKING HATE YOU NOW, THIS IS TOO SAD:fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair::applecry::pinkiesad2:
lol

Loved it. But it made me sad.

Rest in peace all who died in the fanfic. :scootangel: :rainbowdetermined2: :pinkiehappy:

Those who went crazy. :twilightsmile: :raritywink:

And those who managed to pull through. :ajsmug: :fluttershysad: :unsuresweetie: :applecry:

Hey Guys, Expect to see a sequel book soon! :trollestia:

Love,
Me

I see that I haven't commented on this, even after my second read.

Amazing story, really. I'm really looking forward to your sequel.

this was just amazing

Comment posted by Drifting Heart deleted Mar 22nd, 2013

this based off the tumblrverse it looks like. paranoid twilight lil miss rarity and crapplejack of course pinkamena diane pie. we are just missing fractured loyalty and or dead rainbow dash. in my opinion i prefer fractured loyalty dead dash creeps me out.:pinkiecrazy:

Very well told. Made me sad and thoughtful.
Hazza! Please consider writing more like it!

well as sadly as this is :fluttercry: i forced myself not to cry i felt as if i was applejack for some reason i did want to kill myself i do in fact i feel as if it happened its too real i really wanna kill myself however there are typos but who cares it was too real scootaloo she will notice you R.I.P. :scootangel: may you be in pony heaven i feel like AJ and now i possibly will forever keep doing these this is me --> :ajsleepy:

wow that was a great story, very few talk about what happens afterward and this one explains it quite well if not a bit sad D:

That was breath taking. I just don't know what to say about it other than this was a beautifully crafted story, and I loved it. I wondered how you would incorporate scootaloo into it. My money had been on that she lost it and started to do what pinkie did.

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