Throughout my life, I was never happy and always felt lost. But last summer, I had the wonderful opportunity to be happy for once. I had the wonderful opportunity to have people-or ponies who care about me. I had the opportunity to live in Equestria
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Ultra classical and boring BiE story, nothing new or original Inside.
The MC has a crappy life, he goes to Equestria, became a pony, find a fuck-buddie, end of story.
The MC is bland, he don't care about anything happening to him, he don't display any emotions about being in a whole new world, in a new body and without anything. It's really convenient that he have a shitty life, so there is no emotionnal struggle about the fact that he's never going to see his familly or friends anymore ( because he have none or they are jerk ).
The story is really fast paced, you summarize too many things and don't describe what is happening enough.
As for the whole Brony nonsense :
Being a Brony remove a lot of interractions and character construction from the story, because the MC " Know " everything. He didn't have to observe or interract with the ponies, because he already know their personnality and lives.
There is no sentiment of awe from him, being a Brony mean he's not surprised by talking mythical creatures. There's no discovery of a whole new culture of talking ponies, because he already " know " that culture.
And as I said, being a Brony add a whole level of creepy in the story. How are YOU going to react to an alien landing in your backyard, and telling you that you're in a show for their children and that he know everything about you ? I know I'm not going to be ok with this.
Add the fact that for the MC, they are all FICTIONNAL ! Yes the show make us laugh, BUT everything bad happening to the ponies are plot device of scenarist.
AJ parents are dead because the aliens have decided that she need to be an orphan for the story. It's really creepy to learn that somewhere, an alien race has modeled your entire life, and that you're not even aware of it.
Where is the limit of the fiction ?
2840844
dude... go to eat a snickers
Just ignore FicusCat. He is one of the douchebags on here. This is a really good story and you should continue it.
2840844 Also, when will you learn to shutup. NOT ALL MCs ARE FAKE. How do you know without a shadow of doubt that one or more of these aren't based off the author.
2840844
One word "Multiverse"
Now fuck off
hummmm nice
2840844 i donĀ“t really understand why you have to say so much bad about this fanfic. And if you could please use spoiler Tag or something. I do not know yet what is true and what not from your comment.
2840844 now excuse my language for a bit everyone, but as a famous meme says "go buck yourself" and I mean it a ton.....