Throughout my life, I was never happy and always felt lost. But last summer, I had the wonderful opportunity to be happy for once. I had the wonderful opportunity to have people-or ponies who care about me. I had the opportunity to live in Equestria
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2840844
god, someone with sense
2840858 2870798 3712921 Aaaaaaaaand, you guys are what's wrong with most fanfiction authors nowadays. Somebody gives him some literal good advice and children like you fangasming over 'another typical BiE' fill him with the sense that there's nothing wrong with the story.
As we can tell, 3750073 has completely ignored the advice 2840844 was trying to give, advice that could have helped him down the line (even if the grammar killed me), because you guys said he was 'just hating'. I could be one of the douchebags that you so readily lumped Ficus in with, but I won't, because I know better. My words are going to be wasted on deaf ears.
As for the author, if you ever want to improve, then you need to take Ficus' advice and actually try to add some depth to your story/characters and move on from the BiE wish-fulfillment.
3757164 Well, uh, sorry I guess. I did take FiscusCat's advice and tried to the best of my ability to apply it, but like I said, this is my first fanfic and I don't have that much experience with this sort of thing. I went back and added a lot more detail and the back story is better than it was. And It's kind of supposed to be a fun and simple HiE story for other people to enjoy, not like an incredible life changing story. I'm not trying to sound mad or anything, I appreciate you not being a dick about it and I really appreciate the feedback. I'll try to apply it, no matter how terribly I do so.
hummmm nice