Throughout my life, I was never happy and always felt lost. But last summer, I had the wonderful opportunity to be happy for once. I had the wonderful opportunity to have people-or ponies who care about me. I had the opportunity to live in Equestria
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not bad for the first chapter, but i think maybe not Celestia should take him to Ponyville, because she is doing it in a lot fanfic´s i think. Well i don´t know how much but i read one or two wich are a bit like this at the point world travelling. I don´t have a better idea but maybe a spell in Ponyville is gone wrong or something. I like the Chapter and don´t really want you to change it, i just want to give an idea for other fanfic´s maybe
It just disturbs me personally a bit that Celestia always watch the Human kids and just take them over in her world.