Unexpected Results
Written By: Twilightsmlp
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fan based work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the one and only Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Note: from this point on the story will be from Mikes POV.
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"Agh…. God my head hurts! That was a hell of a fall I could of swore I just saw giant breasted creatures with wings and horns!"
“Giant breasted? I always thought they were small.” Says a voice from behind you. You slowly turn to see the source of the voice all the while praying your ears are deceiving you, but to your dismay standing right behind you is the same group you thought you were hallucinating.
“Glad to know he at least finds us attractive.” Says the white one she seems to be the oldest in the group, but this is only an assumption based on her being slightly taller than the other three. Still stunned and confused and to be totally honest scared out of your mind you do the only logical thing at the time, you run. You make it a good 15 steps before your body seems to no longer be moving. Even more confused now than you were before you grunt in frustration.
“Now there is no need to run.” The white one says in a motherly tone as the horn on her head is glowing a golden color. “How rude of me let me introduce myself I am Princess Celestia controller of the sun and co-ruler of Equestria. And this” she says pointing to the dark blue creature standing to her left. “This is my dear sister Princess Luna, controller of the moon and night.”
Next the smallest of the group who you guess is the youngest begins to speak. “My name is Princess Twilight Sparkle, controller of the stars and element of magic.” She says in a confident tone. “Also thank you for your earlier complement about my bust size.” She says with a smile.
The last of the group seems slightly flustered as she begins to speak. ”My name is Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, Princess of love and ruler of the Crystal Empire, but you can just call me Cadence.” She says in a confident completely opposite to her earlier domineer. They all look at you expectantly.
"Uh hi", you say now somewhat convinced that these creatures meant you no harm. My name is Mike Patterson it’s a pleasure no meet you. You say in a careful, but polite tone. After all these girls seem to be some kind of royalty in this place. Celestia begins to walk towards you seemingly raping you with her eyes. Needless to say you felt uncomfortable being looked at like a juicy steak, of course you had no idea what these things ate, but you assume the worst. "Anything I can help you with?" You say.
She looks at you “Actually yes you can. What are you exactly?” she asks.
"I could ask you the same thing" you respond.
She only chuckles at your response. “I guess that’s fair. We are ponies, specifically alicorns” she says.
"Are there are others different from alicorns?" You ask.
“Yes there are actually 4 different kinds of pony there is the Unicorn: they all have a horn and the ability to use magic, than there is the Pegasus: they have wings, can fly, and control our weather, and next is the Earth Pony: they are physically the strongest of the three races and have a natural affinity with nature, finally we have Alicorns: alicorns possess all of these traits. Sadly we are the last of the alicorns” she says gesturing to herself and the rest of the group.
Feeling an answer for answer kind of game seems appropriate for the situation you say, "To answer your question I’m a human and unlike you ‘ponies’ we have no magic powers, but we are smart and invent things to solve problems in our everyday lives."
Seeming to accept your answer she walks back to her group and turns to you. “Well Mike Patterson it seems that you have a very unique opportunity here.” She says in a somewhat sultry tone. The way she said that and the way she’s looking at you now sends shivers down your spine.
"And what opportunity is that?" You ask.
“The spell that brought you here was a spell designed to search for the perfect mate for all four of us and it seems that out of every creature in the universe you are the only one who fits all of the criteria” she says.
It takes you a second to realize what she just said………"SO YOUR TELLING ME THAT ME BEING HERE IS NOT A FREAK ACCIDENT, YOU A STOLE ME FROM MY WORLD, MY LIFE, MY FAMILY, MY EVERYTHING JUST SO I CAN BE YOUR FUCK BUDDY!!!!" You scream at them causing them to recoil and have their ears fold back. They looked devastated, but you didn't care. You were far to pissed. "Send me back." You demand in a cold tone. Twilight steps forward she seems to be ready to burst in to tears.
“W-w-we can’t” she says clearly holding back tears. This one statement brought back your earlier rage and confusion. "WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU MEAN YOU CAN’T FUCKING SEND ME BACK YOU CLEARLY TOOK ME FROM THERE HOW CAN YOU NOT SEND ME BACK!!!!!" You scream.
This pushed Twilight over the edge as she begins to ball her eyes out in front of you. Seeing this calmed you down slightly you were always weak for a crying girl even if she was purple with wings and a horn. "I’m sorry" you say in a much calmer tone.
She looks at you confused “why are you sorry this is entirely our fault!”
"Yes it is, but that is no reason for me to blow up and be an ass like that. Although if you could be so kind and tell me why you cannot send me home that would help a lot."
She looks at you amazed at how kind you are than blushes and says “The reason we can’t send you home is because we have very little magic left between us after casting such a taxing spell and because we have no idea where your home planet is.”
She was right the universe is huge and ever expanding finding the Milky Way galaxy let alone Earth out in deep space is like trying to find a needle in a haystack the size of Jupiter. The more you thought about the more you realize that it this was just an unfortunate of a series of events that fit together perfectly: First you ignore you teams advice and finish the climb in the middle of the storm which by now is at its peak and your team will think that your already dead because of you not returning to base camp, and now you can’t return to said team because you’re on a whole new planet, so back on Earth your already dead. Sighing you look at the group of girls and say "I guess this is home now, but on the topic of me being your ‘mate’ or whatever you call it that will have to be discussed at a later date, but for now I’m tired is there anywhere I can stay while I’m here?"
Celestia says “Yes of course just follow me” you do as she leads you to a room that rivals even the best penthouse suites in 5 star hotels back on Earth although you didn't care the only thing on your mind was sleep. You don’t even have enough time to get under the covers before passing out.
Human x anthro pony harem I love it
very original and creative. Good job.
needs work and clop
2804241
Not sure if i want to add clop into this story just yet i might in a couple chapters, but if i do i have to change the rating to mature.
2803420
Thanks i don't think this idea has been done yet.
2803368
Also one of my favorite story types.
Ok, though I would suggest you slow down a bit and add some imagery.
2804256 no but remember it needs work Mike just seems to level headed about this hole world change with 4 somken hot babes trying to get into his pants that and just plane lazy writing ypu know to 2d you need to make it more 3d more life like
2804256
No need to go give out the goodies when you can just string the readers along with teasing. Besides, if it works for anime, why not ponies? I'd say Eiken is the example I'm looking for-- smokin' hot girls with gravity defying chests being all over some random guy in ridiculous situations.
I tried to find a small example but someone just put the whole thing up so, if you got a half hour, watch this... [NFSW][Etchi] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ec8QFpUPBZM
2804438 I like the second person view of this story, but he is right a little bit too simple but right now its not so bad keep up the work.
I rate this out of
Yeah, you seem to be rushing abit. Add abit more detail, and your golden dude :).
why was the 2nd chapter in a 2nd person pov while the 1st was in 3rd??
I think I'm going to like this.
Shame on you for not crediting the artist AND outright insulting his work.
2804438 I guess I would take such a change in stride. I would probably question them about the world more, but there would be no need for panic. Some people don't feel attached to this world at all.
PS: Great story so far!
Meh, I don't like it thus far.
In any case, best of luck with it!
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What I meant by suck is that the picture is a poor representation of the characters, not that the actual image is bad. and I tried looking for an artist to credit, but google was not helping.
2804647
I was trying to give the story a movie like feel in the start with the 3rd person POV than after you get the base line of the story down move into 1st person POV. I'll admit i don't believe it worked the way I planed.
also there is a fic on the site similar to this called i think "the scent: lust of mares"
Rushed, seems way too rushed for me...
Also, you could really use checking your punctuation.
Its hard to read, I was losing focus the entire time.
I'm not saying it's bad. No, it's quite good story, but it needs fair amount of polishing.
i don't care that everyone keeps saying its rushed, i like this story and its fine to me!
... I would have had flipped my shit if I didn't have my meds on hand...and they would have after it wore off, I get more hyper than a toddler hopped up on a cocktail of Red Buul, Monster,Mountain Dew Code Red and a frappe' mocha late with 20 pixie sticks mixed in...
2867147
so you flip your shit pinkie pie style cranked up to 11?
lucky man
I loved it all it was awesome.And some parts had me LOTF.I hope one day it does go mature one day or it has a second part story that has all the clop scene's in it .I can't wait to see what happens next.
Not sure why if the character himself has a name it is in 2nd person. Not a huge fan of Second Person stories honestly as it just feels strange. I'll keep reading this either way because it seems interesting.
off to a good start. intriguing story
Is it just me or did others think of the big bang theme song just now