I love the Walking Dead; excellent crossover idea my friend! I suggest taking things a bit slower in future chapters however; I felt a bit rushed, and adding the tiniest bit more detail can give the story much more life.
Looking good so far, I'm a sucker for zombie stories and will keep an eye on this one. I noticed some typos and others on the story, I'll pm them to you. I don't want to spam the comment section with it.
I like the way you described things, I like your word choices. I don't think this chapter was that dull at all, it's important to set the setting. Unlike the first commenter, I hope you don't go overboard with gore. I have no problem with some gore if it's not gore just for the sake of itself. So just... keep it classy.
Wait wait wait. Dark Lighting? From that Three of Me vs. School Society story? Ok this is pretty awesome now. As for OC characters, I'm sure I can find spots in the story to put you guys in. It won't be for a bit though, as the next few chapters are pretty tightly planned. PM me with some information about your characters and I'll put it in. Gore shouldn't be much of a problem, it is a zombie fic after all. But gore will be controlled so it's not just a heap of guts and blood. It'll be good though, I promise. Hope to have the next chapter up in a day or two. I didn't expect such a positive reaction :P
If I could make a few suggestions, I would stay away from guns if possible. Rather, keep things melee oriented.
Another thing is don't be afraid to go Dead-Rising and Rube-Goldberg on everything. I'd love to see things like a wagon with sheets of metal on the sides to decapitate zomponies, or a pitching machine modified to fire razor-sharp gemstones.
Also, make use of the environment. Things like traps and purposely collapsing ceilings onto a bunch of zomponies would be a nice touch.
I'm excited to see where you're going with this. I hope none of the Mane Six become zomponies though. I couldn't bare the thought of that. Please don't make it happen.
228026 If he does, he should add Keith. Ellis: "I ever tell you guys about the time me and my buddy Keith tried to build an inter-dimensional portal generator? Now me and Keith had watched all those Stargate episodes in across the span of two months and Keith had this really big metal Hula Hoop in his garage and one day we both got tanked while watching the alterante-world episodes and he decides to make his own home-made Stargate-thingie. So anyway me and him were settin' up when all of a sudden this weird sky-lights thing- you know, like the Northern Lights and shit?- just appears overhead. Thinkin' its a sign of approval from God, Keith grabs these jumper cables that we spliced into the power cables by the side of the road and clamps them to the frame and it zaps the PISS out of him! And actually me, too... Well anyway the next thing I know, I'm shooting backwards and he's getting sucked into this weird glowy light in the hoop and-" Coach: "We ain't got time for this, Ellis!" --- Okay, I've had my fun. Now I'm actually going to read it.
228203 To be honest, I'vebeen trying to decide whether or not to use guns. While guns are awesome in any zombie game/ movie/ show, I agree that it should be more melee. Oh, and thanks for the ideas! I'm looking forward to the introduction of the Mane 6 in a chapter or two...
228136: Wow didn't think you would think ME liking your story that well. Makes me feel nice and warm inside...........either that or i'm hungry. One or the other.
This sounds amazing, I cant wait for the rest. Keep it up, also, i love gory details, make sure you get lots of those in there, and i mean LOTS!!!!!
I love the Walking Dead; excellent crossover idea my friend! I suggest taking things a bit slower in future chapters however; I felt a bit rushed, and adding the tiniest bit more detail can give the story much more life.
LOVE the story DUDE!!!!!!!
Tracking!
Nice! In need of survivors, mate?
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Same question, my OC already has a gun.
Looking good so far, I'm a sucker for zombie stories and will keep an eye on this one. I noticed some typos and others on the story, I'll pm them to you. I don't want to spam the comment section with it.
I like the way you described things, I like your word choices. I don't think this chapter was that dull at all, it's important to set the setting. Unlike the first commenter, I hope you don't go overboard with gore. I have no problem with some gore if it's not gore just for the sake of itself. So just... keep it classy.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
AWESOME!!!!!!!
My two favorite thing into one
I totally called this yesterday lol!
Wait wait wait. Dark Lighting? From that Three of Me vs. School Society story? Ok this is pretty awesome now. As for OC characters, I'm sure I can find spots in the story to put you guys in. It won't be for a bit though, as the next few chapters are pretty tightly planned. PM me with some information about your characters and I'll put it in.
Gore shouldn't be much of a problem, it is a zombie fic after all. But gore will be controlled so it's not just a heap of guts and blood. It'll be good though, I promise. Hope to have the next chapter up in a day or two. I didn't expect such a positive reaction :P
Only two bits? I leave a dollar at the end of my chapters. Nice work so far!
If I could make a few suggestions, I would stay away from guns if possible. Rather, keep things melee oriented.
Another thing is don't be afraid to go Dead-Rising and Rube-Goldberg on everything.
I'd love to see things like a wagon with sheets of metal on the sides to decapitate zomponies, or a pitching machine modified to fire razor-sharp gemstones.
Also, make use of the environment. Things like traps and purposely collapsing ceilings onto a bunch of zomponies would be a nice touch.
I'm excited to see where you're going with this. I hope none of the Mane Six become zomponies though. I couldn't bare the thought of that. Please don't make it happen.
If this story is going to be as good as i think it's going to be, it deserves this.
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I reserve judgement until zombie ponies.
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If he does, he should add Keith.
Ellis: "I ever tell you guys about the time me and my buddy Keith tried to build an inter-dimensional portal generator? Now me and Keith had watched all those Stargate episodes in across the span of two months and Keith had this really big metal Hula Hoop in his garage and one day we both got tanked while watching the alterante-world episodes and he decides to make his own home-made Stargate-thingie.
So anyway me and him were settin' up when all of a sudden this weird sky-lights thing- you know, like the Northern Lights and shit?- just appears overhead. Thinkin' its a sign of approval from God, Keith grabs these jumper cables that we spliced into the power cables by the side of the road and clamps them to the frame and it zaps the PISS out of him! And actually me, too...
Well anyway the next thing I know, I'm shooting backwards and he's getting sucked into this weird glowy light in the hoop and-"
Coach: "We ain't got time for this, Ellis!"
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Okay, I've had my fun. Now I'm actually going to read it.
228203 To be honest, I'vebeen trying to decide whether or not to use guns. While guns are awesome in any zombie game/ movie/ show, I agree that it should be more melee. Oh, and thanks for the ideas! I'm looking forward to the introduction of the Mane 6 in a chapter or two...
228136: Wow didn't think you would think ME liking your story that well.
Makes me feel nice and warm inside...........either that or i'm hungry.
One or the other.
Wow... This is a lot better than mine.
*Sigh*...
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