Ok, I'll be honest. This chapter (at least I think so) is sub-par to some of the others. Well, fighting wise. The next chapter will have less fighting zombies and focus more upon the characters themselves and their emotional struggles. Woah, I sound DEEP.
I think that the ending makes up for the fighting though. It was WAAAY too much fun to right. I hope you all liked it, and the end freaked you out! And be sure to thank VeteranO'Awesome for getting me off my lazy ass and back onto writing this chapter.
Until next time, -neutralmilk
Oh, be sure to leave some feedback. I love hearing what you guys think. Cause I'm a loser.
Glad to see another chapter up. You're still improving steadily, and I noticed that there were far less grammatical errors than the last few chapters. Keep up the great work.
this dude almsot made me shit my pants, why would you kill off the mane 6 this early whyyyyyyy???? good thing you didnt, at least i dont think you did?
Oh god, cant wait till we find Fluttershy, if she's alive. And The nightmare thing, I was BEGGIND it was a dream. Lol. Good story. Cant wait for the next chapter.
725018 Thanks! I'm writing a new chapter as we speak; hopefully it should be finished by the end of next week. With so many stories in my head to write, I find almost no time to update these
No worries, buddy. I commend you for making so many ideas! At least they're all sitting by, waiting to be continued! Better to have them started, then to lose the ideas later on.
i think celestia and luna are both fine, if they weren't how could there be night and day since they controll it? but this is a fanfic, so it doesn't have to apply to the same rules that the show does. anyway great chapter, can't wait for the next one. also love your style of writing, it keeps me guessing on every part. i love how you always make me think that somepony else is a zombie than it really was (especially the part with derpy a few chapters back)
889285 Hey, thanks! Well as for the Princesses I do have a few ideas as to whats up with them, but.... spoilers.... And thanks for being one of the few to appreciate the Derpy scene I got some flak for that a while back
902017 It's more story than gore. I'm not much of a fan of over-usage of blood and guts in anything so (while I do occasionally get detailed) I don't write: AND THEN TWILIGHT SHOT A BAZOOKA AT THE PONIES AND BLOOD SHOT ACROSS EQUESTRIA AND RAINED DOWN ON EVERYPONY, EFFECTIVELY DROWNING THE REST OF THE ROTTING CORPSE PONY THINGS. THE END. You know, that actually should go in the next chapter...
Ok, I'll be honest. This chapter (at least I think so) is sub-par to some of the others. Well, fighting wise. The next chapter will have less fighting zombies and focus more upon the characters themselves and their emotional struggles. Woah, I sound DEEP.
I think that the ending makes up for the fighting though. It was WAAAY too much fun to right.
I hope you all liked it, and the end freaked you out! And be sure to thank VeteranO'Awesome for getting me off my lazy ass and back onto writing this chapter.
Until next time,
-neutralmilk
Oh, be sure to leave some feedback. I love hearing what you guys think. Cause I'm a loser.
Glad to see another chapter up. You're still improving steadily, and I noticed that there were far less grammatical errors than the last few chapters. Keep up the great work.
I enjoyed the work in this one, another awesome job.
Moustache.
this dude almsot made me shit my pants, why would you kill off the mane 6 this early whyyyyyyy???? good thing you didnt, at least i dont think you did?
530952 No, they're still alive. It was a nightmare (thankfully). Killing them off would have been a fun way to end the story though
530798 Thanks! Happy you liked it!
Oh god, cant wait till we find Fluttershy, if she's alive. And The nightmare thing, I was BEGGIND it was a dream. Lol. Good story. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Nice, bro! Amazing chapter
Yup. That ending just made my mind go all derpy. This doth not bode well for the Elements of Harmony. Dammit, I love you Pinkie, why you so unstable?
Excellent story so far! Can't wait for more!
725018 Thanks! I'm writing a new chapter as we speak; hopefully it should be finished by the end of next week. With so many stories in my head to write, I find almost no time to update these
No worries, buddy. I commend you for making so many ideas! At least they're all sitting by, waiting to be continued! Better to have them started, then to lose the ideas later on.
Can't wait bro!
Celestia could always do the fail safe spell, unless she is already a zom-pony.
i think celestia and luna are both fine, if they weren't how could there be night and day since they controll it? but this is a fanfic, so it doesn't have to apply to the same rules that the show does.
anyway great chapter, can't wait for the next one. also love your style of writing, it keeps me guessing on every part. i love how you always make me think that somepony else is a zombie than it really was (especially the part with derpy a few chapters back)
889285 Hey, thanks! Well as for the Princesses I do have a few ideas as to whats up with them, but.... spoilers....
And thanks for being one of the few to appreciate the Derpy scene I got some flak for that a while back
Hmmm, while I'm not usually one for gore fics, this seems interesting. Onto my ever expanding 'Read Later' list you go!
903718 lol Hey, you can't kill the Derpy! She's invulnerable!
902017 It's more story than gore. I'm not much of a fan of over-usage of blood and guts in anything so (while I do occasionally get detailed) I don't write: AND THEN TWILIGHT SHOT A BAZOOKA AT THE PONIES AND BLOOD SHOT ACROSS EQUESTRIA AND RAINED DOWN ON EVERYPONY, EFFECTIVELY DROWNING THE REST OF THE ROTTING CORPSE PONY THINGS. THE END. You know, that actually should go in the next chapter...
Great story.
(ps. Can you please make Glenn make a appearance if possible)
This is REALLY good so far, I have to admit.
For some reason, I keep expecting Officer Valor to shout, "CARL!"