Ok, I did something entirely different with this chapter. The majority of the ideas in this one were random thoughts that popped into my head after finishing the last chapter. Excuse the sheer randomness The next one may take a bit longer, but it'll be awesome, this I promise
Ohhhh I like this chapter. Pinkis gone full out nuts probably cause she thinks all her best friends are dead well fun time ensures in the next chapter CHEERIO.
I don't think she killed any live ponies, I would harbor a guess though that after losing some of her sanity she created her old friends again (Rocky, Lintalot so on, but as time went on, she lured trotters into the house and then bashed them over the head. Then overtime "recreated" the Mane 6 with the bodies of multiple trotters/flyers
390329 It would be quite interesting, Pinkie Pie's got him all strapped down ready to cut off his cutie marks, then suddenly *BAM* Rainbow Dash saves the day or something.
why did you change the names of the mane 6? i understand if they were OC's but i don't like it that they are being called some thing else for no reason.
390983 It isn't me... I think FIMfiction is doing an April fools thing. I distinctly remember writing Rainbow Dash... It would also explain the new font and horrendous banner thingy
edit: dammit I can't even write Rnbow Dash (had to misspell it to prevent its change-ocity)
391001 okay but still i prefer rainbow dash to be called her real name not firefly it doesn't sound right to me and if other characters are calling her rainbow
391024 So you think the characters should call her full name and not Rainbow? To be honest, half the time I have to contemplate whether or not to use Rianbow Dash instead of Rainbow
391053 i don't mind characters having their names short i was just pointing out that the name change makes no sense for the characters that are calling her rainbow or dash
Well, I've finished reading and I have to say: Good job, so far.
While there are several grammatical errors throughout the chapters, they are very minor and ones that are commonly made. I like the idea, as I'm a big fan of The Walking Dead. I would also like to suggest you try to work on starting a new paragraph when a new character starts to speak. It can be a little bit confusing at times. If you're still looking for editors or pre-readers, give me a PM. I'd be more than happy to help with this.
451934 I'm gonna have to take you up on that offer starting next chapter. I've been working on making speech be separate chapters (been too lazy to go back and edit the previous chapters ) OH! And happy that you liked it!
Ok, I did something entirely different with this chapter. The majority of the ideas in this one were random thoughts that popped into my head after finishing the last chapter. Excuse the sheer randomness The next one may take a bit longer, but it'll be awesome, this I promise
As usual, your comments are greatly appreciated!
oh god pinkie went psycho bitch and is KILLING EVERYONE
Ohhhh I like this chapter. Pinkis gone full out nuts probably cause she thinks all her best friends are dead well fun time ensures in the next chapter CHEERIO.
I don't think she killed any live ponies, I would harbor a guess though that after losing some of her sanity she created her old friends again (Rocky, Lintalot so on, but as time went on, she lured trotters into the house and then bashed them over the head. Then overtime "recreated" the Mane 6 with the bodies of multiple trotters/flyers
oh shit!!
Hmmm, I believe that after so many years of aloneness, she snapped, turned to Pinkamina, and killed any survirors that she could find.
Just Saiyan.
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Only one thing comes to mind...
*Shudders*
Cupcakes
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Now that you mentione that I'm pretty sure that something like thats gonna happen.
Cupcakes anypony?
390217 While I've never read "Cupcakes" (heard it was bad) I promise that it won't be anything like the story.
If it is, then dayum.
390329 It would be quite interesting, Pinkie Pie's got him all strapped down ready to cut off his cutie marks, then suddenly *BAM* Rainbow Dash saves the day or something.
why did you change the names of the mane 6? i understand if they were OC's but i don't like it that they are being called some thing else for no reason.
390983 It isn't me... I think FIMfiction is doing an April fools thing. I distinctly remember writing Rainbow Dash... It would also explain the new font and horrendous banner thingy
edit: dammit I can't even write Rnbow Dash (had to misspell it to prevent its change-ocity)
391001 okay but still i prefer rainbow dash to be called her real name not firefly it doesn't sound right to me and if other characters are calling her rainbow
391024 So you think the characters should call her full name and not Rainbow? To be honest, half the time I have to contemplate whether or not to use Rianbow Dash instead of Rainbow
391053 i don't mind characters having their names short i was just pointing out that the name change makes no sense for the characters that are calling her rainbow or dash
Oh shit! Pinkie's gone nuts!
Uh oh shit just hit the bucking fan!
reading in progress
450974 Oooooooh, what'd you think of it?
Well, I've finished reading and I have to say: Good job, so far.
While there are several grammatical errors throughout the chapters, they are very minor and ones that are commonly made. I like the idea, as I'm a big fan of The Walking Dead. I would also like to suggest you try to work on starting a new paragraph when a new character starts to speak. It can be a little bit confusing at times. If you're still looking for editors or pre-readers, give me a PM. I'd be more than happy to help with this.
Fave'd and Liked.
451934 I'm gonna have to take you up on that offer starting next chapter. I've been working on making speech be separate chapters (been too lazy to go back and edit the previous chapters )
OH! And happy that you liked it!
Is Pinkie going Cupcakes on us? Sorry for mentioning the story though.
451943 Alright, just give me a shout whenever.